*Completed* Th#2 ArHi SS: Make Me Love

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@debby_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

that was a brilliant update...the fear the anger the expectations the love were brilliantly expressed...

loved it

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Congrats on the new thread!!! 😊

Loved the way you described Khushi's phases of feelings towards Arnav. From when she was a teenager to a mature lady now.
Her feelings progressing from respect to Love and to the slight obsession. Lovely! 👏

I expected Arnav to react the way he did, because of 2 reasons that popped in my mind - Either he must be brushing it off as just a mere crush, or there is something to do with his past? He hasn't married yet and Nani isn't probing on that issue. So I'm guessing his past plays a big part here. Maybe.

And adoption? 😲 I didn't dare to think of that! I can't! 😛

Loved it Zehra!!
Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

This update made me go back and read the previous update and the comment I had written for it.

Part of the update was expected. I knew Arnav was going to say no to Khushi's proposal. Arnav's behavior always seemed odd but clearly he never looked at her with any romantic interest. So it was not a shock when he outright rejected what Khushi was suggesting.

In the previous update it seemed like Khushi with obsessed with idea of Arnav and him and her together which she thought was love. But when you break it down the way you did , where it started with gratitude and respect which eventually led to love , it seems more like a love which has no boundaries and is almost a madness has turned into obsession.

Okie I'm not sure if I am making any sense anymore. But anyways now that Arnav has said no, Khushi has nurtured this idea for so long that I highly doubt it will go down well with her, which in turn might make her do something stupid. This is the first time Arnav has not given her something she wanted and she wont take it well.

Wonderful wonderful update😊

Oh and it seems like Arnav has a past. Im guessing there is more coming up about that soon...Just guessing😊

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

DA CMNT DA UNRES DA PG DA 9 DA SORRY DA COMNT DA POOR.
comnt pg no 9 py edit ho chuka hai lazy ji sy guzarish hai mehrbani kr k padh lain sath sar dard ki goli ly jana na bholian n agr wht the krny ko man kry to meri scrap book hazir hai n pls ignore the summery pata nai aj kya howa k landing kuch ajeeb hoi. To bas ap phadain umeed hai hmara sath ainda bhi juday ga
shukria

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sslmay11

@sslmay11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Congrats for the new thread. Loved the update. The way you have described Khushi's emotions rather being an obsession or attraction, it was admiration and she adores him. Arnav's reaction was expected...I'm still waiting to hear from Arnav...he's still a mystery in this story...Looking forward ...

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

congrats for the new thread dear ⭐️

lovely part ⭐️

beautiful description of khushi's feelings 👍🏼

I guess arnav's reaction was expected

khushi is miserable and its understandable... I hope she tries to understand his pov , maybe not now as she's hurt but when she gets her mind cleared. I don't expect too much and I wont say she's immature or throwing tantrums😆 because she's a young adult and he's a mature one 😊.. I think its important to keep their age difference in mind so we understand the characters, their reactions, reasons etc

looking forward to all the upcoming parts

take care

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lostintheashes

@lostintheashes

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

That was very intense. 👏
Though I anticipated this, the sheer beauty with which you approach the story never cease to amaze me.😳
I wonder what will Khushi do now 😉😳

Edited by lostintheashes - 12 years ago