*Completed* Th#2 ArHi SS: Make Me Love

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Farha Naz

@farha_ipkknd

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#101

you beautifully described khushi's feeling ..from gratitude to respect ,from admiration to awareness ,from attraction to love...it shows the depth of her feelings & I absolutely loved it...
now I really want to know about arnav & his past
p.s : for some reasons (absurd reason) this 38 years old arnav reminds me of ' Richard Gere ' :D

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ameena671

@ameena671

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

wow superb update loved it thank you for pm.

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Jay

@Sharaa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Awesome update Zee,...

Her feelings for him from Gratitude to love is wonderfully penned...

anyhow, Arnav's reaction for her proposal is expected one...

Even, Nani didn't seem to notice something about her Khushi bitya's love... i wonder...

This girl kept her secret well...

Wats with Arnav's past... ?? quiet intriguing...

wanna know about his insight super soon...

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sida

@sida

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

lets see where it goes.
superb update😊

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Pastellitesoulx

@xMIC.Dropx

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Wonderful update. Truely awesome. Waiting for next one

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zainza

@zainza

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

I love how you described the evolution of khushi's feelings

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rupamudra

@arshirupa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

awesome update

loved khusi pov

its very sad that arnav diclined khushi's proposal

loved the update

continue soon

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zainza

@zainza

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Most men react the way arnav did if the girl in love with him is much younger than himself.lets see how long he will take to accept khushi's feelings and whether his own would move in that direction.we still need to know why arnav is single so far or whether his reaction is because he has some other love interest.

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frenzyy

@frenzyy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

khushi's emotional journey through all these years was superb!! Loved the update

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Great update i love the start dear..the way you describe how kushi grew up and the way she grew up ,feelings for arnav also grew up..u choose right word at right places..the opening was great ;)

she has confessed her love for arnav but he didn't accept umm not disappointed I knew it from previous update...

well lets see what will happen next:)
nice update..!