*Completed* Th#2 ArHi SS: Make Me Love

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Outstanding update...❤️

loved khushi POV..

the way you write out, khushi's ten years love journey passed by different phases from gratitude to respect to admiration to awareness to attraction to infatuation to love and to obsession...was fantastic...❤️

omg arnav did not expect this..

& she can't bear his rejection...

he can't see tears in her eyes...

nani is now asking her, for her marriage proposal from NK..

what will she decided..

will be very interesting to know, what will be arnav's decision..

u know what,, you have a hold on your writting skills..👏

you're an exceptionally fantastic story writer..👍🏼

i am truly addicted to ur stories...

superb update...loved it..😊

Edited by chandni00 - 12 years ago

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OmNaMaSteOm

@OmNaMaSteOm

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

I am waiting for fresh updates curiosity is killing me!

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Awww such a beatuful update...

The part where you you mentioned above changing kushi's feelings towards ARanv is superb.😊

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Hmm!! i guess it was already known .. Arnav would react this way!

But offcourse reading it with the way you have articulated is adds a refreshing element ...

Khushi's years of the growing up trying to nail down on the feeling and give it a name is very artistically described! Alsi Pattey! you are just too good you know! :)

Well what now!? rejection can be so painful! totally palpable ... but equally so is Arnav's awkwardness at having to face sucha situation that he would have never ever imagined to be facing in life!

I wonder his way of getting over with it and making her come outta it will be close to hurting her in ways she would have never imagined?... and this would leave Khushi completely shattered and maybe in a rush of agreeing to stay away from him yet not giving him the complete satisfaction of doing it all his way... she might go away from the house and perhaps even country!

Oh!! there are a lot of possibilities! Lets see what you choose to pick for your story! :)

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Poor khushi, she's soo sad, maybe she had her hopes to high as arnav had never said no to her for anything
I'm sure he must having his reasons too
Pls continue soon
Thanx

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tanu3579

@tanu3579

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

must b difficult .. fr both arnav n khushi...

n a very insightful path of khushi's feelings :)

waiting fr next...

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khareshelley

@khareshelley

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

awesome chapter...!!!!!!!!!
loved how u describe khsuhi changing feelings...!!!! it was too good...👏
hope in next update we can have arnav's pov..!!!!!!!!!

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

this reminds me so much of lamhe. but im afraid of the obsession that u mention.as always on target and toogood

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

The gradual progression of Khushi's feelings for Arnav, from gratitude to obsession, has been beautifully brought out... the manner in which you set out how, every year, her feelings toward him underwent a change brings a unique perspective to their relationship. She symbolising purity and peace to him is moving [shades of Pakeeza?] Khushi's confusion at her growing attraction to Arnav is understandable... I am sure these new and frightening emotions were something she couldn't discuss with anyone, not even Lavanya. I think she became too optimistic about Arnav's single status when Nani didn't tell her about Arnav's relationships... This wasn't a subject Nani was likely to broach with a young unmarried girl, though. I can understand the shock and upheaval Arnav must have felt at Khushi's unexpected declaration of love... she has been his ward for a decade and suddenly that relationship has been turned on its head... no wonder he withdraws from her, leaving her feeling rejected. And he inadvertently hurts her more by implying that she doesn't know her own feelings " that it is infatuation rather than love [again so reminiscent of Lamhe]... the NK proposal is a timely reprieve for him but she has let him know that he's the one for her and no one else comes close! Wonder what Nani's reaction will be if she ever learns the truth about Khushi's love for Arnav. Also, why do I get the feeling that Shyam might be waiting in the wings to do some mischief? Anyway, things are poised at an interesting point.