FF: D for Desire #5 (link to #6 added)

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@-happilyunknown

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#831

I just read the whole FF in 2 days. this is frickin beautiful! <3 i donno how to give you a long review praising you for your writing but being a reader and a writer i guess the best thing i can ever tell you is that this is the best FF i have ever read on Arhi. I love how you have made all their encounters so pure and beautiful. Heck its making me optimistic...nd well believe it love again. i had all these fairytale hopes and dreams when i was younger*Not that i am old old now :D* but i guess somewhere in between i stopped believing in that magic of thinks.everthing seemed so drawn out , planned and monotonous to me.But this FF and your writing have given me back a bit of that old crazy feeling of hope and well i adore you for that.

Thank you loads!

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vibha92

@vibha92

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#832

amazing update...

finally dey met!!...

at d end of d update!!...

nw hv to wait till nxt part...

update soon dear...

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prati_incept

@prati_incept

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#833

amazing update...

.. and they are back to sq1.. but have option to choose different path now..

and looks like they will try and go the traditional and forever after way..

awww.. he realized.. lets see what he does about it

1. run away (doubt it.. since can not go far)

2. confess (again doubt it.. after all he is ASR for nothing)

3. keep it to himself and wait until something extra-ordinary to happen..

and

4. something i didnt think off

i know ramanchi.. again..

waiting for next..

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#834

Loved It...

You have beautifully described their three weeks separation... Talking on fone was their only salvation... and that only longing for each other...

With khushi coming to Dehli their anticipation and nervousness shows their love for each other...

Khushi surprise had the right effect on arnav... He didn't bother that he is in a meeting but the only thought that was occupying him was she is here...

"A part of her ran to him, to seek comfort in those strong arms. A part of him opened his arms, to let her softness mold him. Their souls embraced each other, trying to make up for torment of the last three weeks, feeling more now what they had missed as they were in front of each other again." You have comendably describe their feeling in these lines... Loved it...

Rnav realization that he love her was the perfect end for the update...

Now i can't wait for next update...

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#835

Distance makes the heart grow fonder and in Arnav's case the three week's away from Khushi helped him realize how much Khushi means to him.

Women have this emotional radar and their realization of feelings is always sharper than men's Hence Khushi already knows her love for Arnav while Arnav just realized that he loves her. YAY! Finally :)

I loved the way each was desperate to see the other. the restlessness was written really well by you Farah!

And they way each of them believe they are hallucinating about the other is so cute :)

But the best part had to be how you wrote about their souls meeting even though they stand at a distance from each other amidst a room full of people.

Hope you'll not keep us waiting for long this time. Pretty please...waiting for enxt update already😆

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shipra.aqua

@shipra.aqua

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#836

Aww... They finally meet...

& damn they both love each other...😊

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shipra.aqua

@shipra.aqua

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#837

Plz plz plz pretty plz update soon can't wait...

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Natalia

@Natalia

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#838

SO FINALLY Arnav realizes his love for Khushi!

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@Deleted

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#839

Awwwie !

This is so cuteee !

Loveee it !

Continueee sooonnn !

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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#840

"A part of her ran to him, to seek comfort in those strong arms. A part of him opened his arms, to let her softness mold him. "- one of the best lines I have ever come across. Such plain words but still withhold all the depths of a relationship. Absolutely love them. 😊

And Arnav finally realized his love towards her. I am so glad he did and now I cannot wait till he voices it out loud. Common boy, you can do it. 😃

Their desperation to meet each other, be with the other, respect the others thoughts and crave for each other is so over-whelming. The flow is really good.

Waiting for the next part. Update soon. 😊

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