FF: D for Desire #5 (link to #6 added) - Page 93

Originally posted by: -Farwa_Ibrahim-

LOVED THE UPDATE SO FINALLY HE HAS ACCEPTED IT THT HE LOVE HER... oh god! it was so beautiful Farah very beautiful... Khushi head ache go went gone ho gya Arnav ko daikh kr and Arnav for him the world became happier and brighter waoo wht a love muahhh.

Originally posted by: avantika_2012

All through the chapter I was thinking - Damn, this is so well written! ;) :D And you made it perfect with that little bit in the end!

Excellent, excellent update! :D

I was in a particularly sour mood when I'd started reading the update and look...I'm smiling now! ;) Thank you! :*

Originally posted by: janu6669

Hi

I read in one go ,all the chapters and I am seriously hooked to it.

I adore this Arnav and khushi and no words would describe how you brought their emotions and feelings.👏

Looking forward to next chapter

Janu

Originally posted by: shree10

Farha, Tu zalim hai bas..

You updated after such a long time and the whole update you made them play hide n seek till the end?? I was hoping "Ab milinge", "Ab milinge"... "Ab milinge"..

But glad.. finally ASR ki batti jali. "He loves her"!! 🥳

Waiting eagerly for the next update Farha.. Is baar itna mat tadpana..

Originally posted by: Addicted87

Fabulous update... !

Im glad that Khushi agreed to stay in touch with Arnav... The three weeks of talking to each other about anything and everything solidified their bond and helped them get to know each other better.

Also I thought that it was pretty mature on Khushi's part to understand that while Arnav refused to even think about marriage, even she refused to back out. So it was a problem they both need to solve together rather than just one person giving in to the other's demand.

Absolutely loved how eager they were to see each other... Finally Arnav has realized that he loves her... Took him long enough but Im glad that he finally got there. I guess distance does make the heart grow fonder...!

Cant wait to read more about Khushi's Delhi trip...!

Originally posted by: tanvi_arshi

I read this story in one go... n I loved it... its awesome... would love to read further...plz pm me next update...if possible...

Originally posted by: ReneeRV

I Love You..

LOVE YOU

LOVE YOU...

LOVE YOU...

LOVE YOU... SO MUCH...

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For the update, it was indeed a awesome work of yours.. yeah you had made us wait likeanything.. but you give us a nice piece of cake too 😉 😉 so for that you are forgiven..

You know gal, i have a good idea how it feels when yo meet someone after a long time.. and then how much you wanted to spend a single moment with them like anything..

You know last week i met my father after 4 years, i know it is different feeling with father, but the longing is same.. isn't it??

it was awesome dear... teh thoughts, those emotions, put me in a week back time, i remember when i hugged my father, after 4 years, it was blissfull, then you get to knwo what you had missed. 😔

but in end, everything was Fine, and Perfect, with HAppy ending.. so THANKS for teh update.. 😊 😊 😊

Thanks for the pm. Sorry for the delay in commenting. The update very beautifully described both of them missing each other. The impatience , excitement to meet each other as soon as possible was very well written by you 👏 . Their pent up emotions led them to believe that they were hallucinating each others presence. Once they were assured of each other's presence they finally had their communication thru their eyes and the grand finale was the subtle realization of ASR being in love. Indeed a very beautiful update.