FF: D for Desire #5 (link to #6 added) - Page 82

LG makes her come to him.. too bad.. loved the update.. the desperation was so clear..

that was just awesome
loved it.
the emotions were written beautifully
their longing to see each other embrace each other were written amazingly
finally after 3 long weeks they met again

"A part of her ran to him, to seek comfort in those strong arms. A part of him opened his arms, to let her softness mold him. Their souls embraced each other, trying to make up for torment of the last three weeks, feeling more now what they had
missed as they were in front of each
other again."

just loved that
oh how much i love your writing
well khushi's surprise didnt go wasted
he was actually surprised
you know what i loved most in this update is arnav's realization that he loves her
all his feelings are not desires but love

"Damn." Arnav's brain answered as if in sudden realization. "I love her."

loved that
will be waiting for the next update

Absolutely amazing update!

Beautiful update...finally arnav realized his love for khushi ..
loved the update..
thanks for the pm.

such a beautiful update...even I did miss them...so nicely written...!!!

wonderful update!!...damn he loves her :D

finally "i love her"
loved the update

'I love her' ... Thank god for this realization:) ... Their desperation and anticipation for each other was so well written. I m really eager to see what happens next.:) although I can guess;) which is what they might want to do .. But I sense this is also going towards conclusion now that their feelings r going to be out there. This intense passionate story is lovely...not just to read but to actually picture them like that:)