FF: D for Desire #5 (link to #6 added)

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khushboo

@khushboo1234

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#851

its been three weeks...and the longing to see each other is shown beautifully...they have not seen each other other for 3 weeks...and they were reacting like it has been 3 years...this is the power of love..

they r just enjoying the present...not much thinking about the future..

loved the update di!!

sorry for the late comment..

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#852

All through the chapter I was thinking - Damn, this is so well written! ;) :D And you made it perfect with that little bit in the end!

Excellent, excellent update! :D

I was in a particularly sour mood when I'd started reading the update and look...I'm smiling now! ;) Thank you! :*

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janu

@Janu75

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#853

I read in one go ,all the chapters and I am seriously hooked to it.

I adore this Arnav and khushi and no words would describe how you brought their emotions and feelings.👏

Looking forward to next chapter

Janu

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#854

Farha, Tu zalim hai bas..

You updated after such a long time and the whole update you made them play hide n seek till the end?? I was hoping "Ab milinge", "Ab milinge"... "Ab milinge"..

But glad.. finally ASR ki batti jali. "He loves her"!! 🥳

Waiting eagerly for the next update Farha.. Is baar itna mat tadpana..

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clarissajohn

@clarissajohn

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#855

what a beautiful update man

hats offf

waiting for next

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Appu

@A.Kh_20

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#856

Nice one ...
Awesome show of emotions...

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#857

Sorry for the late reply!!

Awwie!!! Arnav ke dimaag ki batti jal uthi! Yay! 😆

It was an enjoyable read, their impatience and speculations and the failed surprise and the final meet. Haye! Brilliant update!

Edited by maverickmartin - 11 years ago

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#858

nice one dear
liked it very much

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#859

Fabulous update... !

Im glad that Khushi agreed to stay in touch with Arnav... The three weeks of talking to each other about anything and everything solidified their bond and helped them get to know each other better.

Also I thought that it was pretty mature on Khushi's part to understand that while Arnav refused to even think about marriage, even she refused to back out. So it was a problem they both need to solve together rather than just one person giving in to the other's demand.

Absolutely loved how eager they were to see each other... Finally Arnav has realized that he loves her... Took him long enough but Im glad that he finally got there. I guess distance does make the heart grow fonder...!

Cant wait to read more about Khushi's Delhi trip...!