RTMC FF - MERA HAMSAFAR - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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i m so sorry guyz 4 d late reply plz forgive me next ud will be in two days pakka
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
really nice part
are baba re veer ko gussa aa gya
can't wait to read aage kya hoga
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Part 6 continue...


Veer was annoyed by her behavior ...loosened his grip on her wrist & finally unheld it , stopped his car n shouted...just get out of hear ...get lost...!!

Ananya was shocked to hear ...he again shouted - u wanted to walk alone na ...so go now...do wht u want..!!

Ananya felt that how disgusting he is...how can he say to leave in midway. She didn't say a word n got out of d car. Veer realized tht wht he did ws wrong & tried to stop her but it was late...she ws nt thr.

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Next morning

Singhania mansion...

Veer was doing his breakfast wid his father n brother, pari came to him n said sorry chachu (holding her ears)

Veer didn't looked at her, she again said "I am so sorry chachu plz forgive me ...!"

Every one thr ws thinking "wht happened to veer, ye toh kabhi pari se naraz hota hi nahi tha or aaj uski taraf nazar utha k bhi nahi dekh rha, kal tak to sab theek tha ye achanak kya hua ...!"

Vishal couldn't resist his curiosity n asked...

Pari bacche kya hua ...chachu naraz kyu hai aapse???

P- papa v ohm kal cafe gaye the na to...cut by veer.

V- bhai...nothing happened ye hmara secret hai u dnt wry mai naraz nahi hu apni princess!!

He stood up n started walking ...pari come wid me he said in soft voice...pari followed him.

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Veer's bedroom

He was sitting on d bed holding HER photograph close to himself...pari came thr n said...

"Chachu!!! Plz maaf kar do na plzzz...!"

Pari, I know u love me a lot infect more than anyone...but kya aapko yahi sikhaya hai aapke chachu ne??? he questioned her...socho aapki angel ko kitna bura laga hoga jab aapne chachu ki FRND ko essa kaha...!!

Sorry chachu ...aap angel ko complaint mat karna plzzz!! She said wid apleasing look on her face.

I will not not if u promise me not to repeat it again wid any one ever...he said wid a straight face.

I promise I will never repeat this...she said wid a relaxing smile..

Ok good girl...now im getting late so cm n take ur breakfast, I will drop u to d school..!! Veer said lovingly.

Chachu...!! vo aapki FRND thi ???? She asked him mischievously.

Veer tried to ignore it at his fullest...but can't help smiling on tht cmnt.

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It was an off day...only sm ppl wr thr to do overtime...as veer was thr so aananya also had to be thr coz of her duties.

Veer's cabin:

Ananya plz listen to me...I kw maine kal galat kia tha...cut by her...

Veer, I dnt want ur sorry...I am resigning from d job...!! she said in angry tone.

V- I will not accept ur resignation...as per d rule u shud have given d notice before a month...!!

A- u can't force me like this...!!

V- I can coz im ur boss ...understood ...now go get to ur work...!!

Anu ran frm thr...her eyes were moist she wanted to scream aloud her pain...given by her only love.

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Veer was passing through d corridor...heard some one sobbing; curiously he entered inside d store room & saw her sitting thr in a corner weeping bitterly...covering her face by her palms.

It was so shocking for him to see her like tht. "Now why is she crying ...wht she want k hath jod kar apologize karu ya sit-ups lagau...!!"

He went close to her n sat beside her...ananya wht happened...?? He asked her concernedly.

Ananya didn't expected him to be here so she thought she was dreaming about him again (remember 1st time)

She replied - why u sob* always do this sob* ...u knw sob* mai tumse sob* naraz nahi ho sakti sob *...khud se door b nhi sob* hone dete or pas bhi nahi aane dete sob*...!!

Veer's soul ws sinking coz of guilt...he can't see her like that...he held her both wrist n uncovered her red face (coz of crying.)...he saw her teary eyes, gloomy face n felt like his heart shattered into million pieces...didn't knw why.

Ananya was also shocked n thinking "ye kya kiya maine veer k samne sach kah dia ...how will he react now...god save me plz...!"

Veer touched her cheeks...wiped her tears n said- Ananya plz scold me, but don't cry plz...I can't see u like this...!! & took her in a tight embrace ...she too hugged him trying to find love n solace near his heart.

.he said this in a swift moment but he himself didn't knew that its d first step of love...!!

The two love birds were lost in thr own world until he realized tht wht he was doing ...stood up n stormed out of d room leaving her devastated n broken again...

PS: plz do like n comments if u want me to write more.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Hey Darshu...!!!
Oh Oh Oh... To Veer ko bachhon ki galtiyan sudharna bhi ata hai... Thank God for small mercies...!!! Warna mujhe to laga tha ki vo sirf Pari ko pamper karna jaanta hai.

Chalo, atleast usay apni galti ka ehesaas toh hua... aur usne Anu ko dilasa bhi diya... Magar ye kya... ye to fir se usay chhodkar chala gaya... Hmmm... ab kya karegi Anu...???

Update soon...


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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
very very interesting n beautiful update 👏 👏 👏
love d fight between veer n ananya in d ice-cream parlour 😉 😉 specially when she fell in his arm accidentaly and veer admiring her beauty silently ☺️
bt i dont lyk the way pari behaved wid ananya n d language she used against her
here d fault is veer's...he should teach her a lesson immidiately after dat...bt he remained silent 😲
dis is nt fair...n moreovr he insulted ananya very badly in d car...dats really very bad
anyway its gud dat he realized his mistakes n also made pari to realize her fault 😊
OMG!!! ananya wants to resign...bt her reactions were natural 😭
really love d last scene where dey hugged ech other passionately ❤️ ❤️
but one thing makes me confused evry time dat is why veer is forcing ananya to do d job...i hope dere must b sum serect behind dis 😉 😉 😉
also hoping to get more romantic scenes between d couple...waiting 4 d nxt 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Awsome update sweety...
Loved Veer and Ananya's
yaar ye Pai ka kya problem hai grrr
or Veer ne b kuch nahi bola ulte usko insult kiya 😡
ananya wants to left achha hai.
Par Veer chahta hai wo job kare hummm
something is fishing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
very very interesting n beautiful update 👏 👏 👏
love d fight between veer n ananya in d ice-cream parlour 😉 😉 specially when she fell in his arm accidentaly and veer admiring her beauty silently ☺️
bt i dont lyk the way pari behaved wid ananya n d language she used against her
here d fault is veer's...he should teach her a lesson immidiately after dat...bt he remained silent 😲
dis is nt fair...n moreovr he insulted ananya very badly in d car...dats really very bad
anyway its gud dat he realized his mistakes n also made pari to realize her fault 😊
OMG!!! ananya wants to resign...bt her reactions were natural 😭
really love d last scene where dey hugged ech other passionately ❤️ ❤️
but one thing makes me confused evry time dat is why veer is forcing ananya to do d job...i hope dere must b sum serect behind dis 😉 😉 😉
also hoping to get more romantic scenes between d couple...waiting 4 d nxt 😃
d thing is y veer want her to do d job is he admired her smwhr in thr 1st meet...he ws impressed by her attitude...n more over thr r sm similerties b/w janvi n anaya which will be revealed as story will be further proceeded

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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Finally I hav come to dis ff too...

Phewww!!.. mann ko jo shanti milti h h na- ek aur new rtmc ff dekhker... dil ko bhot khushi hoti h... to see rtmc' s carze aliv even now...

Mere humsafar- bhor i romantic title h- and most important- aapne na koi dobt nhi rakha h- mere humsafar- yaani rtmc pakka pakka humsafara tho bann hi jayenge- chinta muktt mei tho!!...

Mere humsafar ff ka song bhi bhot sunder lyrics wla h.. lovely song...

Veer shinghania ko dekh ker sachh kahun tho muje bhot derr lagta h by god... kitna strict lag rha h... ananya is cute girl... I like her...

Veer n ananya- inn names se tho muje dharamveer mei hi pyaar ho gya.. n jab bhi mei inn names tho sunti hut ho DV k din yaad aa jate h... *dreamland*

Bro n bhabhi of veer- ekdum sahi choice h.. n sneha- ka bada hi cute selection h...

Story line bhi simple dimple cute h... friends tho sabse hi cute... n n n why do I feel.. ananya s sister n veer's friend ka bhi kuch connection h ;) haina???

Hona hi chahiye- jab veer ka frnd khud pyaar karega tbi tho veer ko pyaar kerna sikhyaga ananya se- ...

Chalo- will soon read part one n cmnt...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
ff ka part one...
o my godd!!!...
ye ho kyaa raha h !!... jahan dekho car ki takaarr hi takaar...
iinn dono ko caar daanngh se chalana nhi aata tho dono car chalate kyu h???

ek car crash yahan hoa h n ek AB TUM HI HO mei...
dono ki first meeting mei hi car crash!!...

but kuch bhi h scn mei maza bhot aata h!!...
dono ki fights- r like- dharamveer n prithvi sanyo k dinn lautt aate h !!...

and i will repeat my one of fav dialogues- "inki love story hate story se hi shro hoti "

"singhania company ka MD" ohooo ohooo!!!- attitude tho dekho bande ka...

ananya ki mom- she sweet too.. ananya n mom k bich ka relation- typical mom n daughter chulagbandi!!>. lovely scns

agli baar se aur bhi bada update chahiye!!...
ur dialogues n simple dimple- nice


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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
ye kyaa tha buddy!!..itna chota part...
muje jaise bhukhadd bache ka tho pett hi nahi bhara!!...

vo kyaa h na- rtmc ffs k mamle mei mahabharat ka bheem bann jati hu!!...
:P

but phirr bhi- itne chote se update mei kyaa kyaa drama ho gyaa..
ananya ne gussa dekhaya-
veer ne bhi dekhaya...
ananya ne akadd dekhayi..
veer ne bhi akadd dekhaya...
ananaya ne derr dekhaya..
veer ne phirse se gusa dekhaya...
ananya ne annsu dekhaye-
veer ne phirr gussa dekhaya...


uuf!! ye ladka veer- gussa hi karta rahta h!- cool down dude!!.- bechari ananya derr gyi h!!...
derte derte job bhi mil gyi- n veer is impressed by her qualifications... ohooo!!.. nice!- dekha- ananya ne pehli baar mei hi impress kerr diya!..

unn dono ka romantic scn- lovely... thoda bada= lamba lamba likhna tha na di- aur maza aata !!!.. annaya- darling ru kyu padi??
veer- dekho tumne usse rola diya- haaye rabba!!- isko danngg se romance kerna bhi nhi aata!!... *hitting head on wall*


i suppose vo dheer dheer sikhh jayega jab ananya usse sikhayae romance kerna...

aisa hi ho bagvaan!!>.

chalo cmnting on next prt soon

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