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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Awsome update baby
ananya feel karne lagi hai dono ki nok jhok bahut sweet hai..
Now waiting ki dhruv kaise help karta hai?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22

👏 👏grtt part 👏 👏 👏

loved der cute fight as usual 😊 😊 😊
veer is missing his first wife bt he does nt want 2 share his problms 2 anyone😭 😭 😭
hope ananya wll heal his pain gradually
lovely dear ...grt going
waiting 4 d nxt update n also 4 sum romntic moments of veeranya 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Lovely ff...
Liked it a lot. ..
Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Darshu,.

Congratulations on your first fic... And considering it is a Murat fic i am just so happy.

Please don't mind ki mai 4 parts ke reply ek sath post kar rahi hun...

1st to Anu aur Veer ki nok jhonk... uska to koi jawab hi nahi hota.. Bina ladhe inn dino ko shanti kahan milti hai.😉.

And then Anu bechari fass jati hai aur usay wahan Veer ke liye kaam karna padta hai...😆. Bechari... kahan fass gayi hai.. But fir bhi uske dil me Veer ke liye feelings hai. Ek taraf toh wo Veer se ladhti hai aur dusri taraf Veer ki ankhon me aansun dekhkar usse raha bhi nahi jata.

And as usual inn dono ke ehesaas hone se pehle kisi third party ko ehesaas ho gaya. Par Dhruv ne usay kuch bataya bhi nahi.. Par usse veer ko kabhi na chhodne ka vada le liya. Clever.

Update soon dear.

Luv
Debs
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Darshu,.

Congratulations on your first fic... And considering it is a Murat fic i am just so happy.

Please don't mind ki mai 4 parts ke reply ek sath post kar rahi hun...

1st to Anu aur Veer ki nok jhonk... uska to koi jawab hi nahi hota.. Bina ladhe inn dino ko shanti kahan milti hai.😉.

And then Anu bechari fass jati hai aur usay wahan Veer ke liye kaam karna padta hai...😆. Bechari... kahan fass gayi hai.. But fir bhi uske dil me Veer ke liye feelings hai. Ek taraf toh wo Veer se ladhti hai aur dusri taraf Veer ki ankhon me aansun dekhkar usse raha bhi nahi jata.

And as usual inn dono ke ehesaas hone se pehle kisi third party ko ehesaas ho gaya. Par Dhruv ne usay kuch bataya bhi nahi.. Par usse veer ko kabhi na chhodne ka vada le liya. Clever.

Update soon dear.

Luv
Debs


thnx di i ws really eagrly waiting 4 ur comment...
abhi annu phasi nhi ...phasne wali h...aage aage dekho hota hai kya
n our dhruv ...d most wonderful person yet caring for his frnd thts y he had done it...
veer ka to jitna bolo kam hai...samaj rhi ho na😛😉



C#eer$

D@r$#u
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 5

Night...

Singhania mansion

Veer just came from office n standing doorway...

Chaachu...chachu!! a childish voice came to him.

Arre pari!! Bacche be careful ...veer said.

Veer dekho ye to khana khane k liye kitna pareshan krti hai...!!! a female voice came.

V - Bhabhi!! Don't worry laiye mai khila deta hu.

R - nahi veer u just came!! Must be tired...jao ja k fresh ho jao pahle...!!

Sneha!! Jao beta aap khana khao fir chachu k pas jaana ok..!!

S- nahi ma!! Chalo chachu ...!!

A sweet smile crept up Veer's lips to her innocence n he said - Bhabhi dnt wry, I will feed her.

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Pari was d only person in singhania mansion who is very close to veer, It does not mean tht other family members r not but pari is d special one 4 him, pari is like a sunshine in veer's life...he gives her everything she wants ...They share a bond like father n child n at d same time good frnds also.

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Saxena mansion

Ananya came home lost in her thoughts unaware of her surroundings...

gumsum hai dil tanha hai dil

gumsum hai dil tanha hai dil

sahma sahma

kyu haira hai samaa

ruke ruke

kyu dil ke hai armaa

jal bhi mai rahi par dhua nahi

waqt bhi hai thahra

gumsum hai dil tanha hai dil

janu na mai dhunde kya dil

gumsum hai dil tanha hai dil
gumsum hai dil tanha hai dil

her mom called her- Anu!!... Anu!!...she came closer n shrugged her shoulders Anu...!!! She came into reality wid a jerk...Y-yes mom!!

N - Beta ...what happened?? Why r u so lost???

A - Nothing mom!!

N - Don't lie to me...I knw very well ...something is going wrong!!

A- Mom tension na lo...!! aapki anu ek dam fit & fine hai !! she said wid a smile on her face to console her mom.

Ananya knew tht if she wil not vanished from here thn her mother will be successful in her mission of asking her about Veer & her nokjhok n ths time it ws sm thing serious she didn't wanted to tell her...she took her way to d room upstairs.

N - Beta!! Did u have an argument wid him again???

No mom...not at all!! She laid...jaldi se dinner laga dijie plz im hungry.

By saying this ananya ran from thr widout looking back even once.

Neelakshi was a very understanding mother, she never forced ananya to knw smthing she didn't wants to tell her...but she knew d reason behind anu's hurry to go to her room.

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Ananaya came in her room in ran to d washroom.

Why???????? Veer, why???? Why always u hurt me...?? Why ur pain affects me in d worse way...why??????? She was talking to herself n tears were rolling down from her blazing black eyes.

Anu...!! Why r u crying...!! U knw na mai apni jangli billi k aakho me tears nahi dekh sakta...!!

Veer...tum yha...!!

She got closer to d manly figure n touched him n in d same moment he got vanished...oh god!! Not again...she sat on d floor n cried aloud...I will be there 4 u Veer...forever!!

Kyu is dard me mithi si ik aas hai
Kyu fir rubaru hone ki pyas hai
Kyu ajnabi sapna apna sa lage
Kyu in sapno meKoi ajnabi khas hai
Darti hu kahi dil ki dillagiDard na de gahra

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Singhaniya mension:

7 pm...

Chachu kya hua...??? Feed me na!! pari's sweet childish voice echoed in his ear drums & he came to his senses wid a jolt.

V- kya hua pari...is thr any problem????

Pari ws silent carrying a wide frown on her face .

V - Now say smthing princess...varna chachu ko ptaa kese chalega???

P- pari naraz hai aapse!! She said it wid a fake anger on her face.

V - ohhh...!!! What happened to my pari, why is she angry wid me??

Coz u r not talking to me n lost in ur own dreams...abhi sone ka time nahi hua hai chachu , why r u lost...???? she said wid mischievousness .

Veer was shocked ...he realized tht he ws really weird that he was thinking about her (weird, according to him only) lost in her thoughts

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Ananya composed herself n came from washroom subsided her pains in her heart & plastered a fake smile on her face...came downstairs.

Neelakshi was making dinner for two of them coz her hubby Mr. Ram Saxena was out of city for some time.

Ananya came to her mom n gave her a side hugs...her mother smiled at her antics...anu asked her: maa!! Vanshu (her best frnd) is waiting 4 me...can I go to meet her...???

N - ohhh u didn't tell me that Vanshika came back...???

A - pta toh muje bhi nhi tha ma!! Aapko toh pta hai usko surprise dene ki habit hai...!!

N - ok beta jaao, par jaldi aana.

A - Thanks maa!! I love you.

Ananya had a bed habit of eating ice creams in so much quantity whenever she is tensed or feeling nervous. This time veer was d reason of her tension so she lied to her mom about vanshika.

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Singhania mansion:

Veer was trying to convince pari n said- okkk so tell me tht apni princess ko khush karne k lie chachu ko kya krna hoga ???

Princess ko strawberry ice cream chahie???

Pari smiled mischievously n said nahi chocolate bhi chahie muje bhot saari...or mai bhi aapke sath jaungi...!!

V- nahi pari, itni rat ko aap nahi jaogi ...wait here 4 me ok..

P - nahi nahi nahi...!!! I want to go wid u.

V - okk chalo!! Tum bhot ziddi ho princess.

P - n ur d cutest chachu ever!!

Pari n Veer went to d ice cream caf.

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ICE CREAM CAF

Here anu ate 3 big cones of chocolate Cornett & was going wid 4th 1 suddenly dashed to sm 1n lost her balance but he held her wrist n his hands curled around her petite waist ...anu closed her eyes coz of fear but suddenly felt a soothing touch...she opened her eyes n saw Veer was thr holding her close to him...she felt a sensation running down her spine. Veer was silently admiring her beauty he was lost in her black big eyes..

Suddenly...

Edited by darshika121 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Wow Amazing,,D Way D Story Is Unfolding Further Is Beautiful.😊
Both Started Thinking About Eachother,,Nd Dats How Love Starts 😉😉😉
Ananya-Veer-Pari In Icecream Parlour,,,,,Sumthing Exciting Will Happen Surely 😃 👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsome update sweety...
Dono ek dusre ke bare me soch rahe hai nice start :)
lets see aage aage hota hai kya
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
awesome part darshu
srry m late but really luv reading it
keep it up
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 6

ICE CREAM CAFE

Here anu ate 3 big cones of chocolate Cornett & was going wid 4th 1 suddenly dashed to sm 1n lost her balance. She thaught she will touch d ground n closed her coz of fear ...but he held her wrist firmly n curled his hand around her petite waist...she was scared but thn felt a firm grip around her body...recognized d familiar but wanted to be sure n opened her eyes...there veer was holding her so close, gazing her wid sm unknown emotions ...a shiver ran down her spine when he tightened his grip on her timid figure, he locked her hairs behind her ear touching her milky skin...

But thr trance broke coz of a childish voice ...Chachu!!

Veer & Ananya were flabbergasted...she stood straight widin a moment hiding a red crimsone blush...veer ws looking here n thr to compose himself back.

whr is my icecream chachu???Pari asked him wid a little frawn as she ws waiting so long for her strawberry ice-cream...veer immediately asked a waiter 4 d ice-cream.

Pari giggled n said- chachu aapki jacket pr ice-cream hai...!!!

Veer diverted his akward gaze to himself n faound sm chocolate stains on his jacket...he stared towards Ananya n said...

V (in angry tone) - see what u have done..

Till now Ananya was reminding of sweet romantic encounter wid him came to her senses n retorted back in full attitude...

A - u were d 1 ho collided wid me (she knew it she ws lying but her ego...)

V- O plz dnt lie n forgot sake learn to use ur big button like eyes...!!

Anaya was taken aback by his comment, she tried to say smthing...look, I knw I was not seeing anywhere ...cut down by him

V- that's d problem, tum har kaam dekhe bina karti ho if u dnt want to use thn plz donate thm atleast kisi k kaam aaegi jisko zarurat ho..!!

O hello, u spoilt brat couldn't u left d way???? Atleast u shud know how to use ur eyes...!!

V (annoyed) - Jangli billi...!!

A - Bigda rahis...!!

V - Ghamandi...!!

A - Badtamiz...!!

Pari who was silently hearing this naughty argument now lost her temper coz she never ever hear anything wrong about her chachu from anyone...her anger was ot d peak n she blurted out ...

P(shouting)- u bitch!!! Just stay away from my chachu!!

Ananya & veer both were highly shocked to her abuse from a 10 year old girl (cute girl) ananya was about say something when veer ,cut her and said to pari ...

V- pari jao car me wait karo...chacu will come after some time

Pari went from there and veer went towards the washroom to wash out the stain...

Ananya felt dejected...valueless...she was angry to veer why he was silent.

Veer came back and said-ananya come with me i will drop you.

A(In angry tone)-I don't wantany of your favour

V-but in late nite ... you must don't go alone

A-don't u bother...!!!i can take care of myself while saying this shestormed out of the caf ...veer followed her shouting-ananya ...plz wait ...its not safe outside.

Rode side...

Ananya walking alone on the road and thinking..'how veer can do this ... i agree that parinot sensible but atleast he can teach her some onanners ...but usme honge pabhi to teach karega...bigda rais...'

Some boys were following her ...shefelt some thing enusual and alanted her neck ...saue then and felt unsecured...

A black car came to her right side and door opened...he said ananya...come inside (in orderly tone)

A-no I can manage...

V- So you will not come...???

Before she cud reply , he held her wrist n pulled her inside ...she landed on him, thr eyes met met for a sec ...

Boys started shouting...wooohhh...

Thr trance broke veer closed d door n made her sit forcefully still holding her wrist n started his task of driving...(how romantic )

She protested...can't u hear?? I said I cn manage, let me go..!!

V- no u won't...god knows what wud happened if I have nt came..!!

A-Nothing wud be happened ..!! or vese bhi tumne kya theka lia hai meri safety ka...??? ohh no no !! mai bhi kisse kah rhi hu jo insaan 1 choti bacchi ko thode manners nahi sikha sakta vo kya responsibility nibha payega...!!

Veer realize tht he didn'tsaid sorry to her till now...

V- look, ananya vo mai uski behalf pr sorry kahta hu vo abhi nadaan hai ,plz spare her...

A - veer, muje uski bat ka bura nahi laga muje bura iss bat ka laga k tumne usko apni galti sudharne ko tak nahi kaha ...i knw abhi choti h n veer yahi time hota hai jab bacche zindgi jeene ka tareeka sikhte hain agr unki galtio ko andekha kr dia jae to vo kabhi nahi seekh pate k kya sahi hai n kya galat...!!

V- ananya...

A-Veer, mafi dil se na aai ho to nahi mangni chahie ...so keep ur sorry inside ur pocket , understood????

Veer was annoyed by her behavior n stopped d car (shouting): Get out of my car...!!

Ananya was shocked hear this, forgot to blink...he again shouted...

Get out ananya...u said u can manage ...u wanted to walk alone at this hour ...so ur free, do wht u want but leave frm here...!!

PRECAP - Ananya resigned from d job.

Edited by darshika121 - 11 years ago

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