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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

part 3---

ye dono kbi nhi sudhrenge... jab dekho fight fight n fight!!>..

dono ka ego n gussa nakk per rahta h!!>.

ananya ka jo description diya h starting mei- ekdum cuta sa h- her beauty- both in behavior n physical- cute sa h!!...

veer aapni late wife ki pic k saath ro rha tha naa!!- i know , muje pata h!!...

he ws almost crying- mei bhi crying!!...

anaya saw him crying- evn she felt bad!- bad tho lagega hi- after all she is his humsafa!... and humdard!!..

welcom shelcom dhruv- tumhara hi intazaar tha- YAHI H NA CUPID OF VEER N ANANYA!!...

dhruv k saath ananya ka jo thoda flirting tha- "sunder ladkiyon ko naraaz nhi kerte!!- i like it- its cute!!...

"but jyada flirt matt kro- vo veer ki hone wali wifey h!! ^_^

bhot dinno baad dhruv meeting veer- hope interesting scns to come up!!>..

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

part 4-

kya saady saddy update tha- poora rolaa hi diya muje...

veer ws crying...

ananya was crying...

dhruv ws sad-..

n mei bhi jurr jurr se crying...

chalo shukaar h dhruv u came- and veer cud atleast share his pain wid u- verna dil hi dil mei dabi baat he cud hav kept it- and firr achnakk se gussa ka pahaad tuut ta- vo bhi ananya per...

pta nhi kab jaake- veer wil share his pain to his humsafar ananya!!...

hope happy times come soon in veer's life :' )

jiss tarah ananya ko veer ka pain mahsus hoa- so romantic n passionate!!!... she wiped his tears!!- beautiful scn...

wid such a great restlessness she was asking to dhruv abt him- ..

dhruv u shud hav told her naaa!!- she deserve to know...

chalo dhruv ko itnaa tho ptaa chala ki ananya can feel veer's pain like no one else.. she cn't see veer in pain n crying...

very emotional update...

nice one!!

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

part 5- kitna masst upadet tha!!>..

bhot hi mazza aagyaa p[adke- ..

dill khus ho gya- bada update paddh ke...

pari is real heroine of dis ff!!>.

kyaa cute sory cuuiiieettt bachi h!!...

veer k best frend...

n i hope vo ananya se bhi jaldi se frndship ker le!!...

tabhi tho she will help to bring ananya n veer closer- and i know she can bring them closer..

aaj kal k bache jaldi bade ho jate h!!>.- sab samjhte h vo -ass paas kis kis ka chakkar chall rha h!!... :P ; )

ananya- is missing him so muchn veer too - pari ki baatien hi nhi sunai de rhii!!>..

annay ka bathroon mei veer wla scn...- emotional hi ho gyi mei tho :'( sentimental!!...

pari is really cute- kyaa intelligent bachi h- isse pta h ki ice cream khane ka asslli mazza raat ko hi hota h!!>. and ekdum correct time per zidd ki h ice cream khane ki..

yahan se ananya aapne ghar se nikli n yahan se veer k ghar se veer n pari!!...

chalo veer ka room is vry lavish- ananya ka sasural use bhot acha lagega!! - hufff!! iss baat ki chinta se tho mei mukta ho gyi...

ye update padke muje lovestory supernatural ki bhot yaad aayi- ek tho GUMSUM H DIL osng ki vajah se...- swazy ne ye song gya tha!!>..

and ananya ki mom neelakshi ki vajah se- NEELAKSHI- jiski ankhein neeli ho- ... yaani swastika ki vampire akhein... ; )

dono ice creame parlour mei mile- and ananya in veer's arm- ahaaa!! kinna shona scn h!!... lovely wla feel h..

SUDDENLY!!- ye kyaa hoa- muje lagg rha h pari ne kuch kiya... ??? :P

"wierd according to him"- veer lost in ananya's thought!!-- veer isme kuch wierd nahi h- pyaar mei aisa hota h!!- tensionn free rha- i agn nagn think abt her... ^_^

chalo bhai jaldi se next update bhi pad lun...

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

part 6- mastt upadte- poora roller coaster ride- ...

itne bade bade update padke dil khush ho jata h-!!>..

very satisfied...!!!...

bola tha na- pari ne hi kuch kita h!!>.

vaise- ek achi baat jo muje lagi aapne veer n ananya ka romantic wla scn phirse repeat kiya- ... acha lga baar bar padke acha lagaa!!! ^_^

pari darling- thodi derr baad apne chachu ko bola leti tho kyaa ho jata tumko!!-...

thoda aur romance kerne diya hota...

ver funnyyscene - dis one!!...- Veer & Ananya were flabbergasted...she stood straight widin a moment hiding a red crimsone blush...veer ws looking here n thr to compose himself back 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 hass hass k loott poottt ho gaye by god!!... really funny scene

by god- ye ladki- so so so channtt n naughty- aapne hone wali chachi ko bitch kahti h!!... sachii mei aaj kal k bache jaldi bade ho jate h!!... :P

ananya ka ego - uff ooo!!! usese kitn aladai kertwata h veer se...

veer- such a cute banda u r !- asking ananya to drop her home...

haye ye ladki kitni nadaan h- ekdum pari jaisi ziiddiii ladki- ye kamm nhi h pari se!!...

bechara veer- do do bachiyoon k bichh phass gyaa... :P :D

annaya k piche goons padd gye...oops! veer jaldi aao n iss foolish ladki ko bachooo...

ohoo- kya andaaz k ladki ko lift dene ka- usko kichker car mei bitha liyaa.. n those boys wer whistling... ohooo!!>... :P

mei bhi whitsling... :o pheeewwphooonnn!!>..

hey bagvaan- ab free ki lift mill gyi phirr bhi apni bakwas khatm nhi kerr rhi ye ladki..

dekha , nilkal diya na aapni car se bahar veer ne!!..

n veer tumhe bhi gussa kuch jyada jaldi nhi aa gyaa- abhi tho baa kah rhe they- its late nite time- not gud for a single gal to travel n all blah blah!!..

jald se next upadet per chalo mei thoo...

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

part 6 cont-

inn shona update-

i must say- veer can handle both children n ladies very well...

pehle tho veer ne ananya ko car se bahar nikala- saari akaad thikane laga di- ...

h tried to stop her- but that ws too late!!- uffooohhh!!!>..

and den its veer n pari- what a cute relation they hav!!...

pari ki angle n pari k chahu- r the reason for her manners...

chalo pari is a gud gal agn- hope vo jaldi se ananya se bhi dosti ker le!!...

veer ki frnd?? ohouuu ohuuu!!!... frnd ya more dan frnd??? :P

annaya ka bhi gussa kamm nhi h!!- resignation de dalal gusaa gusaa mei...

bechari crying alone in storeroom!!>.. shuker h veer saw her- verna yahin se ganga yamuna bahh jati...

she thought its veer's image and spoke out her whole heart to him- anajaane mei pora ka poora IZHAAR EA DIL ho gya frm ananya's side...

n thoda thoda veer k side se bhi- i like it when he consoled her by embracing her tight- ...

velly velly romanticcc!!...

uff!- veer bar bar ananya se dur kyu ho jata h!!>..

veer move on in ur life dude!!

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

and yess...

i seriously like the way u write darshu... (Y)

R@$#U LIKES D@R$#U 😉😎😎

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Priagrawal

@Priagrawal

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Finally i m here... wil comnt on all ur updates 😉

talking abt ur ff.. awsm👏 spcly d fyts..😉

waitng fr ur updates soon

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darshika121

@darshika121

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo
and yess...
i seriously like the way u write darshu... (Y)

R@$#U LIKES D@R$#U 😉😎😎

buddy i really missed ur comments but now here they r...i love thm yr
make me laugh every time ...thnx 4 d appriciation in so much high quantity really it encourages me alot ...thnx

D@R$#U likes R@$#U 😛😉

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Cutipie_Kanika

@Cutipie_Kanika

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Nice piece of work! I m loving it ;)

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darshika121

@darshika121

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Hey Friends...!!😊

I wanna apologize to all my Readers in advance as I am going to stop this writeup...its only for some time as I am not feeling like writing anything...I promise i will surely resume it so please spare me for now...!!😊

Thank you so much for all your love & response u gave.

Love Darshu...!!

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