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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 7

After almost 15 minutes ananya came out of that storeroom ...now she was already to ignore him...to make him feel guilty.. Though she knew that Veer didn't have even one sensitive bone in his body.. so she was ready to ignore him. For her peace of mind.. for her self respect... one more month and then she would leave this company for ever..even if it destroyed her career... her Self respect was more important.!!

"Now it will never happen...I will not let myself be weak in front of him...he doesn't deserve this... I will not let him affect me like this anymore...now it will not happen Mr. Veer singhania ...u said about the notice... now this one month will end with peace in ur life...I will not bother you anymore..!!"

With these thoughts in her mind she moved towards her work place. However, she was not watching her step, so intent was she in trying to maintain her composure that she didn't even see the person coming from the other end and collided with someone. She would have fallen down except that a strong arm went around her slender frame effectively breaking her fall and helping her regain balance.

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Veer Singhania was as usual sitting in his cabin. However instead of working, the man was lost in his thoughts.

Pata nahi kya soch rahi hogi mere bare me...what had happened to me that time...why did I do that... why she was crying...!! Aur ye bol kya rahi thi mai door nahi jane de rha hun... Par wo mere paas aayi hi kab??? Ohhh god... she is a mystery...impossibly difficult to solve...!! Or mai solve karu bhi kyu?? Muje kya karna usko resign karna hai kre...why shud I care about it?? Itna soch soch ke mujhe to sar dard hone laga hai.. Coffee.. I need coffee..."

He picked up his phone to call Ananya and ask her to send a cup of coffee to his cabin... but then remembered.. "Nahi... maharani ji to rone me busy hai... Mujhe coffee ki jarurat ho ya chai ki...unhe kya fark padta hai. Muft ke paise de raha hun mai isay." Muttering to himself, he got up from his chair and made his way towards the coffee maker which was placed outside for the convenience of the staff.

Thinking about installing a coffee maker in his cabin so that he won't have to go out whenever his secretary got these attacks of madness, he paid no attention to the people around him and collided with someone. The poor girl was about to fall down and almost on reflex his left hand curled around her waist to stop her from falling down.

"Anu...!" He thought.

She was a sight to see... her eyes were puffy and red from continuous crying but she had controlled herself... she had taken pains to make herself presentable and he was sure that nobody other than him would be able to guess that she had such a massive breakdown sometime back. She fit so perfectly in the cage of his arms that it seemed she had been made specifically to stay there. But just as this thought crossed his mind, she stepped back from him and was now standing at least five feet apart from him. He couldn't stop looking at her. Neither could she. Her eyes were shining with a new fire...grim determination.

There gazes locked and neither seemed inclined to back off... His eyes held challenge... hers serenity and calmness that he had never seen before. He could feel the strength radiating from her. And it enthralled him and scared him in equal parts. He had a feeling that there equation was about to change.. that he couldn't trifle with this girl any longer.

If his better sense would have prevailed, he would have apologized then and there. He just didn't have any idea how right his instincts were. Time had come to a stand still. Nobody dared to breathe. But it was his ego which always took the front seat and this was also the case this time.

Veer gained his consciousness n realized that he was directly staring at Ananya...he diverted his gaze towards the staff people and gave them an angry look. Used to his mood swings, they all looked down and went back to their work. He turned his face to give her the same treatment, but she had already left the place. Irritated he retraced his steps back towards his cabin, his desire for coffee forgotten somewhere in the course of the events.

A couple of hours later:

Anaya knocked on the door of Veer's cabin with a beating heart...she didn't want to meet him now..but her job...

Sir...!! May I come in???

Veer: yes come in

He was sitting on the revolving chair n his back was towards ananya yet he recognized her voice n thought...What does she want now??

Ananaya: Sir these are some of the designs which the designer has churned out. If you will look at them and finalize which ones you want, I will ask the designer to start working on those designs.

By then veer had turned in his chair and he was now facing her...she stole a glance at him.. at those exquisite features.. that heart breakingly beautiful face... but she controlled herself and turned away from him lest her resolve weakened.

Veer on the other hanad was confused. "Is she calling me sir...or did I hear something wrong!! She has always called me veer from the very start...then what has happened now?"

"if you would take a look at these designs, Sir..."

He heard just the last bit. "Sir...???" Frustrated, he cut in between. "Why are you calling me Sir...u never bothered with the title before?

"You are my boss...n and propriety says that I should address you such. Vishal sir wants your suggestions and...!!" With that she handed him a file containing some designs of necklaces n rings.

Irritated by the messed up situation in between them, he couldn't help snapping."Aur ye nek khyal ab aaya hai tumhe?"

Veer was going through it but it was like rubbish. The pile of papers was not so satisfying to his perfectionist professional eyes. Added to it, she replied gravely.

"Everyone learns a new lesson at some point or the other. Guess I have learnt mine."

He didn't know how to answer that statement, so he preferred to ignore it. After all, he was not answerable to her.

"Is there anything else?"He asked her with an unsatisfied look. Those designs were good but did not have the perfection that his eyes were craving for. He was not satisfied at all...he wanted something different..Something unique...he didn't want to lose the chance of issuing a new brand as a tribute to his jaan...she always wanted to see him on the sky of success..!!

Ananya noticed the tensed look on his face n she perfectly understood that he was bothered and not at all happy with the designs. In spite of her heart break, she badly wanted to assure him.

A- No sir.. Nothing else. But..."

"But..?"

"But a new designer has also been appointed, I will talk to her and ask her to make something which you would like...!!"

"See that you do that. Also ask Vishal to make a new lot. These are good but not good enough to be presented in this deal. I want something of better standard."

She nodded and picked up the files. "Anything else, Sir?"

He shook his head and she turned to go. Veer hesitated for a second, but then called her.

V- Ananya.

She turned to face him with a polite interest fixed on her face. This formal behavior of hers irritated him to no end.

"Can you just go back to being normal, for heaven's sake??" he almost yelled.

Her face didn't change. She simply said; "I will give u another set of designs after some time, will that be all right Sir??? She gazed at him questioningly.

He nodded in response but wanted to say something else... something that was bothering him from within..But before he could say a word she was gone. He was left all alone and somehow felt himself to be very lonely.

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He was dragging up the lady, brutally from the big stairs of his bungalow, making her wrist bleed badly because of his tight grip on her wrist pricing the broken bangles...please leave me.. She pleaded to him to show some mercy...but he was like beast that could never be changed to a human being.

He continued to drag her, she was wiggling in his firm grip just like a fish lying on floor without water...she wanted to get rid of this violence...which torn her heart.

He opened the door of their bedroom, entered inside pulling her fiercely; his grip loosened a bit n he pushed her on the floor...making a thump sound she landed on causing a seviour pain to her delicate bag of bones.

Tanu...!! He called her name with sugar laced tone...darling, why you always makes me angry...do you love to be suffered like this...??

She knew she would face it again...she had to face the punishment of not letting him intimate to her...he always do it...make her plead for to get survival...she never felt any sort of love in his deeds...he always been vicious...hateful...she never got any kind of affection but lust.

Vo...vo... sh..lok ...!! She was trembling with fear...he came closer..Made her quaver with disgust...bent on her right side in sat there in front of her.

This man of her...never made her feel good...she always loved him and what she got in return???

Abuse, violence??? Is this the relation we calls sat fere ka bandhan?? Is this we call Marriage?? This was a terrible face of life...what sins she had done in her past life that she got this monster as her husband???

She was lying on the floor suffering from the pain which was feeling like her body was set on sizzlers...he gave support n tried to make her sit...she flinched on his mere touch...but needed the most...he made her sit giving support...don't do this again...or else you will see the hell on earth...!! He said resentfully staring at tear stained face.

What will you do...kill me?? Then do it now...iss narak jesi zindgi se maut acchi hai...but tumhare hath se marne se accha I should attempt suicide...she retorted.

Ohhh really??? He asked pretending to be amused by her words...do you really think I would let you do??? He mocked.

This was utterly out of limits...now couldn't she be have a peaceful death...this monster will not let her die peacefully...her throat chocked...tears of pain and agony flew out from those smudged eyes...his hand travelled from her back upwards to her tresses...grasped them hard n made her face lifted up...you love to be distant na...???Now I will show you the result of this so called distance...!! She was wiggling in that tight clutch...the pain was highly unbearable.

He came closer to her face...his warm breath ticked her throat & gave her a negative feel of easiness...she was continuously trying to get free but the clutch on her hairs & that tickling sensation was so strong that was not able to fight...her words were stopped in somewhere middle of that situation...he pulled her face closer...clutched her hairs harder...& in between all her protests he smacked her lips in a furious kiss...he was kissing her passionately...rather was trying to get his EGO SATISFIED...!!!!!!

Her husband was kissing her...almost madly...that it was hurting her so badly...he was nibbling her lips...it was so painful that she felt so numb to do anything to stop him...there was nothing like love n passion...it was all about hunger...hunger of lust...n rage...!!

After getting all what he wanted...he pushed her slightly...n said...see m ur husband...so btr u accept the fact that ur mine n I can do whatever I want...u can never stop me...!! N left her all in pain... Exhausted...she was trying to catch her breath...this was so painful that her tears were flowing continuously.

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dekho marna mat i knw iam very late...!!😕😕

sorrryyy...!!!😭😭😭


Thanx...plz do likes n comments

apoo, pri, di...finally...!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Yeah..finally! After what seems like ages!!!! 😆
Beautiful update!
Full of emotions and emotional fools!
Ek mahaan hai to dusra to bas...!!!!
Samjhte hi nhi dono kabhi kuch bhi!
But loved their convo in Veer's cabin! Poor Veer can't take goody goody Ananya!! 😆

Don't worry..you'll get her back..only if YOU want!

Last part..that Shlok 🤬!!!
I am your husband and me kuch bhi kar sakta hu..wow!!!!!! What a man!!

P.S. This time continue soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Finally!! Update milgaya 😃

Lovely update! Veer and Ananya why can't they understand...veer its up to u to bring that purani wali ananya back and this time please don't let ur ego come between ur love!

And This time Update soon please!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Srry srry srry late cmnt k liye 😭
sukhriya apko yaad toh aaya hum wait karrahe the apke ff k liye..
veer n ananya.. kya bole.. i hop anu nrml behave kare veer se.. veer ki restlessness dekhi nai jati 😲
wese ye shlok ka kya chakkar hai??
mistry unfold asap 😃
plz do update on tym yaar..
nai toh 😡
i m luving dis stry.. thoda track aage badha jaldi updates de..
mata rani ka ashirwad hai tere sath 😆
luv u darshu😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Thank god deviji ki aapne update to diya...

Warna maine to iss fic ke complete hone ki ummeed hi chhod di thi..

Pata nahi kya kya daure padte hain aapko...kabhi aadhe me chhod diya to kabhi updates delay kar diya... huh...!!!

Khair... nice update...!!!

So anu ne thaan li hai ki wo Veer ko ignore karegi. Aur shuruat bhi ho gayi... aur ye kya... Veer Singhania par pehla vaar bhi hua aur janab baukhla bhi gaye...

very very good...

Hmmm... not satisfied with the designs...kahan se honge... Anu Sir Sir jo kar rahi hai😛

Arrrghhh... Shlok...leave tanya... yaar koi tanya ko iss jaanwar se bachao...

Aur aap deviji update ko aage badhane ka prayatna kijiye...!!!

Update soon... N I mean sooonnn...!!!

Samjhi darshika deviji???


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Posted: 11 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: PrincessFlavia

Thank god deviji ki aapne update to diya...


Warna maine to iss fic ke complete hone ki ummeed hi chhod di thi..

Pata nahi kya kya daure padte hain aapko...kabhi aadhe me chhod diya to kabhi updates delay kar diya... huh...!!!

Khair... nice update...!!!

So anu ne thaan li hai ki wo Veer ko ignore karegi. Aur shuruat bhi ho gayi... aur ye kya... Veer Singhania par pehla vaar bhi hua aur janab baukhla bhi gaye...

very very good...

Hmmm... not satisfied with the designs...kahan se honge... Anu Sir Sir jo kar rahi hai😛

Arrrghhh... Shlok...leave tanya... yaar koi tanya ko iss jaanwar se bachao...

Aur aap deviji update ko aage badhane ka prayatna kijiye...!!!

Update soon... N I mean sooonnn...!!!

Samjhi darshika deviji???


vo to karna hi tha update...marna thodi na hai muje...!! 😉
thnx 4 d compliment 😳😳

dekho anu determined hai...but if veer will try he can do something to amend...!!😉😉

ji hmara prayatn jari hai...shighra hi naya update milega apko...mai samaj gai 😲😉
Edited by darshika121 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
😃 Ananya is so sweet... chulbuli ladki ... i love the character sketch... each character is so apt ... rajat ka look... 😉 Ananya ke parents ke liye jo stars liye na tune Darshu mujhe vo bht psnd hai.. 😊 and the start is too gud... dono k beech shuru mein hi tkraar... kya bat hai next part mein dekhte hai Anu ke interview ka kya bna😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
hmmm so now veer has compelled ananya to join his company... nice... ab dono ki bar bar tkraar hua kregi fir dheere dheere tkraar pyar mein bdlegi😉 pr veer ne anu ko rula diya 😭 anu bhi kum thode hi hai bdla lene ke liye job accept krli😉 nice part darshu... story is going good 😊 dekhkte hain agey kya hota hai😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hmmm i read ur ff Darshu it is so so beautifully written.. 👏 main toh MERA HAMSAFAR ki duniya mein hi chli gyi 😃 jaise us ice cream parlor mein, us road pr, us ghar mein, unke office mein maine unko apni ankhon se dekha ho...
now i come to my favorite scenes... mujhe inki ldayiyon mein bda mza ata hai 😉 par veer kuch zada hi rude bhi hai... office vala scene was gud. aur pari se maine aisa kuch expect nhi kiya tha 😲 anyways veer ne jis trh se smjhaya bda acha lga... kitna cute bond hai pari aur veer ke beech... 😳 veer anu ko mat rulaya kro 😭 last part maine abhi pdha nhi so will comment on it later 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 8




Saxena Mansion...

Her cell buzzed one more time n she picked it.

hello...Ananaya spoke up.

Anuuu...how's u?? Vanshika screamed literally tearing apart her ear drums.

Vanshu...!! She exclaimed fondly

it was her only friend who could make her forget all her miseries...she was kind of tom boy...dressed as a girl but her lifestyle was like that only...funny, friendly, helpful, understanding and last but not the least very beautiful...all though she didn't like to be praised for that...Ananaya's best friend..nops buddy actually...!!

Oye u forgot me na...huhhh...!! Vanshika pouted...u didn't call me even once.

Ohhh look who's talking...like u called me thousands of a time na...Ananya faked anger

A silence of sec then both burst out laughing aloud.

They were like that only...besties from last 15 years...so fond of each other...they fought...more for each other then with each other...they couldn't be separate for a long...one has to break the ice...every time they fought on some silly matter...well friends are always like this...!!!!

Ananya calmed a bit and asked...so when are you coming to meet me???

Anytime soon m just stuck here for some work...jese hi it will get over I will come n meet u...!!

Yup come soon sweetheart...I have lots n lots of things to talk about...!! Ananya chipped like a bird.

Yup...will come soon...take care bbyee...!! Vanshika cut the call shortly.

Now Ananya was much better...she was feeling light...happy...n calmed a bit.

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Now let's come to the Singhania's...!! ;)

Ye veer bhi na..kya halat bna di hai apne room ki...Jahanvi...Jahanvi...Rajshri called out..She bit her tongue apologetically as soon as she realized what she had done.

Rajshri was instructing the maid to clean the mess from veer's room as this guy had totally surrendered himself to his office, files and other stuff...his room was a mess now as he had no time for his own then how this room could get his attention.

Ye ladka kabhi nahi sudhrega pahle bhi aisa tha or ab bhi aisa hi hai...Jahanvi k hote lagta tha janab sudhar gye magar nahi ye to...!!

Tears trickled down her eyes when she saw a beautiful snap of that heavenly couple from under the pillow while cleaning up his bed.

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Veer...Veer nahi nhi plz door raho...!! jahanvi was running all over the mansion clad in a beautiful light green saree with pearl pink border and veer was following her to make her colorful or rather chase her.

She didn't hate colors...but she liked it in that way only...it was their first holi after 2 weeks of their wedding...they were always like that...fighting with each other...chasing each other...yet so loving...!!

There was no one in the mansion all were busy outside in the garden where holi celebrations were going on and here these two souls roaming...Livid of those colors...yet so colorful...drenched in the color of love.

Veer...please let me go na she pleaded...until then he was in front of her...blocking her way ahead.

How can I let you go?? After all...It's our first holi after the union and I wanna make my wife even more beautiful today...!!! She gave a cocky smile which didn't go unnoticed by her.

She tried to back out but he hauled her closer gripping her wrist...their eyes met...she lost herself in those chocolate brown orbs... andhe taking the advantage...rubbed his palm on her cheek making her crimsoned face even more red...it was like gaining a new shade of life...they were enjoying it to the core...it was their moment only...!!!

They were so beautiful together...felt so complete with each other...those sparks in their eyes...that naughty smile on his face...that nervousness in her eyes...it was mischievous yet so divine...that snap felt like it will speak out anytime soon...!!

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Ritu entered the room n saw her mother-in-law sobbing slowly...then her gaze travelled down n she sensed the reason behind the flow of those pearls.

Ma...she came rushing to her

Ritu humne kyu kho dia jahanvi ko...vo nahi jati to aaj bhi sab kuch pahle jesa hi hota na...she cried...see this...tujhe yad hai na u clicked it and teased them hai na...!! she cried some more.

Ma ham honi ko toh nahi badal sakte na...lekin veer ko khush rakhne ki ek koshish to kar sakte hain ...!! She tried to console her mother-in-law.

Mai veer ko esse nahi dekh sakti ritu...tu ne dekha hai na kitna badal gya hai vo...jo ladka kabhi office k naam se dur bhagta tha aaj office hi jese uska dusra ghar ho gya hai...!! She sobbed.

Ritu wiped her tears n hugged her...ma sambhaiye khud ko...agar aap hi toot jayengi to baki sab ko kon sambhalega...veer ko kon sambhalega..!! She tried to pacify her.

Ritu jahanvi ki kami to shayad kabhi poori nahi hogi...ye dekh... she showed her that snap...dekh kitne khush the dono aur aaj dekh kar lagta hi nahi k kabhi veer essa bhi tha...!!

That pain...that desperation...that motherly concern was visible in their eyes...these both the ladies were the strength of each other...both loved him like anything...veer was son for one and just like a brother for the other...both the ladies loved him so much that if it comes to his happiness they can do anything for it.

After jahanvi passed out...veer was like a body without soul...his cute smiles...naughty smirks after something mischievous...his way of saying sorry after that...it was all vanished...as a big change crept in ...now he was not the old naughty latter anymore.

Ma chaliye yahan se...ye sab mai dekh lungi...aap ko aaram ki zarurat hai chaliye yahan se...she helped her to stand up from the floor and walked towards her room.

She made her sit on the bed...ma aap aram kijie...n no need to think anything...have u take your medicines?? She asked as she knew her ma was so careless when it comes to her own.

And as usual rajshri made a baby like face as she knew her daughter-in-law or rather daughter will scold her now.

Rajshri was a cardio patient...once she got the attack and the another one could be the reason for her journey to the heaven that's why ritu used to be so strict n concerned whenever she forgot to her medicines.

Ritu smiled a bit seeing she like this n understood the situation.

Ma aap fir bhool gai...you are another kid I have just like pari...while saying this she gave her the tablets n a glass of water. Rajshri gulped it down n lay still thinking about the good times she spent with her son n daughter-in-law.

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Vishal...papa ji...sneha...!!! breakfast ready hai aa jaiye...Ritu called them all for the breakfast and Pari was the first one to come...mamma...chachu kahan hain...beta chachu jaldi office gaye aj...!! Ritu answered her doll.

Ohhh :( her smile faded a little...ab muje aaj subah subah icecream kese milegi...!! She pouted.

Pari...aaj papa or dadu aapko school drop kar denge...!! Vishal came there and said.

Meri icecream...!! She pouted again.

School se vapas aa kar...!! Vishal answered.

Ohhh papa I love you...!! She packed him on his cheeks.

Until then shekhar was settled on the dining chair and as usual picked up The Times of India and got a bit shocked seeing the first news...vishal...beta tumne ye news dekhi...??? he showed him.

Ohhh..it means veer was right...M.D's were financially weak and now insolvent...!! They were shocked...the 2nd most famous financial venture was bankrupt, people who invested there had a big loss.

But papa how could we both fail to analyze the fact...!! Vishal was shocked not because of the news but the dedication veer showed towards the business things...yes he worked with them but as much as he knew veer was never involved this much..I am impressed...!! He mumbled audibly.

So am I...!!! Shekhar chipped...a bit more pride reflecting in his voice. Vishal ye hamara hi veer hai?? Vahi jo kabhi business me interested nahi tha aaj itna dedication dikha rha hai business me...aaj agar veer ne nahi roka hota to kitna bada loss ho jata...!!

Papa...life is the best teacher to learn something...maine changes dekhe hain veer ke behavior me...he is trying to wreck himself up with work...he comes to office...work hard...gets back to home with heap of files...!!!

This is not good vishal...this is not justified...how can he be so detached from everything...I can understand his condition but this is not right...I always wanted him to be responsible but not like this...he needs someone so badly...!!! Tension could be clearly sensed...a glint of concern...was there in his voice...!!

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lo aa gya update...!!!! 😉

Edited by darshika121 - 11 years ago

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