Swaron OS :'we' wil be back(part 3 pg 10) - Page 5

veryy nic plzz update soon...

Its awsum

Awesome part! Why do i feel like something like this will definitely happen between swaron in one of the next few episodes. Dont know why im having this feeling. But hopefully it comes true. Anyways, please dont stop the os here...please continue. Do pm me if you update.

It was indeed vry beautifull...cont asap!

Loed it yaar...
update next soon...plzz...

Do write more...:D
Sakshi...

i luvd it nani
Continue soon
I m luving it pls update asap..

sorry for the late cooment

Originally posted by: Swaron.maniac

Wow man
Nancy u too good
Dznt feel like its ur first os
Uff that passionate hugg
Wen will we get tht in actual D3
U better update soon
Warna 😈

Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon

Wow loved d last line. .
Sharon ka dialogue mast. . Now waiting for swayam.s reply..
Very well written. .
I loved d whole sequence. .
Awesome update. .
U also write quiet well nancy. .
Keep it up n keep writing. .
Next part jaldi n pls next part full final patch up kara dena..

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Hey nancy i read both the parts today.
First try? Too good mate.
You very well wrote swayam and sharon's feelings and the pain of separation. Their silent talk was nicely penned and then i loved the second part where sharon unable to suppress her feelings just hugged swayam.
Shilpa is right, update soon with SwaRon's patch up ;)
Pm me too, and keep writing more, you are really good! Its just the start, more to go! And i would love to read and review your future works :)