Swaron OS :'we' wil be back(part 3 pg 10)

nancynnv thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#1
This is my first os ever...pls forgive me for the mistakes
Warning -pls don't read with any expectations 🤢
Scene : andheri raat thi ...(don't worry horror nhi haišŸ˜†šŸ˜‰)
At the lake side thingy in manor( jaha sharey precap mai convo kar rahai Thai)
Sharon was sitting idle in the dark near the lake side...
She didn't have any thoughts in her mind...she didn't know what she would do ...actually she didn't even know why is she sitting there ...
She was sitting there lifeless ...physically present mentally absent
But her depression made her like this solitude ... She felt peace there

On the other hand Swayam was on his walk... Another depressed personality
Quietly walking without caring about the world around...

Swayam was passing by the lake side ...
Just then he saw his lady love sharon sitting there depressed n lifeless...
He just stood there looking at her ...
wondering what went wrong which has brought them In this situation ... The tym when they were in relationship they could not even imagine being away from each other ... So what made them go so far from each other...
They got separated by their own will but still this only gave them farther more pain...

Sharon just shifted her sight ... N there she saw him standing
She just kept looking at him with watery eyes...eyes which wanted to say so many things which had so many question ...so many emotions ...all this for him
That him who meant a lot to her ...meant or means????
This question made a tear drop from her eyes ...

They just kept looking into each others eyes from a distance ...n then there starts their silent convo

Swayam: kyu chale Gaye tum mujh se itna dur ? Isse ka hi dar tha mujhai or
tumne hi kaha tha darnai ki koi zarurat nhi hai to phir kyu ?inta Aasan hai yahe Sab tumhare liye ?

Sharon: kyu mujh aapne sai itna dur Jaane diya tum nai ?yeh tha tumhara pyaar ...pehle khudhm hi mujh pyaar karna sikhaya or phir?is it this easy to leave he ?

To be continued on the basis of comments n likes only ...🤣
All kinds of comments welcomed


Edited by nancynnv - 12 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

95

Views

9.2k

Users

26

Likes

173

Frequent Posters

934800 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Its chotu sa but quite good
Very sad though
Well i was listening to tere mera rishta purana while reading so it got me emotional
I liked how u describe their eyes are speaking to each other
And glad u brought that dialogue of sharon about dnt be scared u wont lose me

Well done nancy
Considering its ur first os
Bang on šŸ‘
Edited by Swaron.maniac - 12 years ago
BhaviJas thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#3
nani tune promo diya h b jaldi nxt part update kr...
This update wht quite emotional b jaldi swaron convo post krde..
Death_Memories thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#4
Ughhh I will kill you nancy😔 Itna chota ye to start hote hi khatam ho gaya
Tujhe to mai AT pe btaungi😈
Coming to this chotu part I loved it.😃The Way you started was something that I can Imagine.Then Swaron seeing each other aur phir convo with eyes that is Swaronish I want to read aage kya hoga mai to padhna chaah rahi thi aage kya hoga par tune wahi khatam kar diya not fair😭.Next part jaldi se update hona chaahiye samjhi😵
Love you for this rešŸ¤—
-Harshi Dii
.Vrushanholic. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#5
its awesome nancy..
khaash ye d3 mein ho...
update soon
-TanHaVruShan- thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Nancy u wrote an os first toh am shocked to see. .
Still haven't read but one doubt yeh os hai ya promo itna chota 😭
Res now ll read n comment..
Read so unres..

Hmmm nice very Gud start..
Ur first os very well tried but very small update..
But really i loved it..
Very well started..
Oye next update jaldi Nahi toh at pe aa teri supari deti hun sab ko wahan..
Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago
trisha19 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#7
Super interesting concept...
pls continue soon and do pm me...
-spongy- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#8
kitna chotu sa tha
but it was amazing..
nice concept
loved it

update soon
and do PM me
and PM the link as well šŸ˜›šŸ˜›
nancynnv thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: Swaron.maniac

Its chotu sa but quite good
Very sad though
Well i was listening to tere mera rishta purana while reading so it got me emotional
I liked how u describe their eyes are speaking to each other
And glad u brought that dialogue of sharon about dnt be scared u wont lose me

Well done nancy
Considering its ur first os
Bang on šŸ‘


Ammie di chweet of u ...thank you very much 😳
I m so happy that u liked it 😊
N the dialogue was in my mind throughout the OS n I had to use it...
I actually want the use of the dialogue in current track also...
nancynnv thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: vrushaan

nani tune promo diya h b jaldi nxt part update kr...
This update wht quite emotional b jaldi swaron convo post krde..


Ty šŸ˜‰
No promises but I will try my best ki agla update bada ho or jaldi ho😊
don't keep any expectations ...😭

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington Ā· 1 years ago

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ā–¼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: goodkashish Ā· 6 years ago

Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

Expand ā–¼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".