Swaron OS :'we' wil be back(part 3 pg 10)

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nancynnv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: sadafarsha
It was awsum nancy amazing
I luved it alooot
Eagerly w8ing for next part
Plzzz i want BIG se bhi BIG update pweesh
Plzz update next part soon and do pm me
Thanx for the pm

Sadaf thanks a lot 😊

Wait wait ...it's fun na😉

Big update 😭...will try

Pm 👍🏼

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nancynnv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien
prologue was good and great start... do continue soon and pm me

Ty😃

Pls add me in ur buddy list for the pms 😊

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nancynnv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: nature2
hmm :O

I didn't get u

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nancynnv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: -spongy-
want the update asap...
kab milega

Even I want to update it ASAP ...

Work is on...

Aaj raat ko hogaya toh to ...I myself will be very happy

Warna by 2mrw😵

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nancynnv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Silent talk continues...

(Looking at sharon)Swayam - abhi bhi tumhai dikhta hu to sirf yeh chata hu ...ki tumhai dikhta rahu...samme ruk Jhaye or sirf hum ho...Sharon bus ek baar aaj mujhai rokh lo

...hai Sab Bhoolnai ko tayaar ho...

Sharon (looking at swayam with wet eyes)-nhi raha jaata tumhare bina iss tarah...swayam aaj rukh Jao ...I promise phir kabhi nhi Jaane dungi tumhe aapnai sa dhoor...

They just kept looking each others eyes for few seconds ...

N then swayam just turned too move

Just then Sharon started coughing slightly but after few milliseconds it turned drastic n enough audible

It seemed a god's sign...there could not be any reason for Sharon to stop swayam...

N any reason for swayam to just stop there ...that's why god gave them a reason...even god could not see the two love birds separated from each other ...

Hearing Sharon's coughs swayam turned around n ran towards her...Sharon in panic was trying to remove her side purse from her shoulder ...when swayam came running towards her ...

Swayam -pls mujh Karnai do

He took off the purse for her shoulder while she continued coughing ...

He was rubbing her back from one hand n finding for the pump from her bag with the other...Sharon sat clenching swayam's hoody n coughing

He took out the pump n placed it on her mouth...she closed her eyes n inhaled it ...this made her feel relaxed gently she loosens her grip ...

She then slowly opens her eyes which where filled with partial water in them n partial flowing down her cheeks...to c him in the same state

Both kept staring each other with watery eyes ... They had just love in their eyes n they wanted to portray it ... They eagerly waiting for to be with each others presence...

Sharon could not control her these feelings n just hugged swayam tight...

Swayam at first did not act... He too wanted this to happen...n after a while he hugged her back...Sharon moved her hands all over his back n dug her face on his chest ...seeing Sharon's reaction swayam to reciprocate the same intensity n passion ...tightened the grip kissed her hair...

All this only showed that what pain they went through being away from each other...they r two bodies one soul ...they didn't what to move n just love each other n forget the past...

But then swayam suddenly opened his eyes still hugging her looked at her ...

Loosened his grip ... Sharon just looked at him when he made her move away from him breaking the hug...

Swayam (said coldly )-sorry

N turned the other side to move to his room

Sharon was so shocked n pissed with his behaviour

She shouted in angry with tears rolling down her face

" kyu mujh aapnai itnai paas bulaleya ki ab jab tum mujh sai dur ho toh mai saas bhi nhi lai pa rahi hu..."

Edited by nancynnv - 12 years ago

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-TanHaVruShan-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Baas Kya update itna sa ya Aur hai. .
I finished reading

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nancynnv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon
Baas Kya update itna sa ya Aur hai. .
I finished reading

Di yeh galti sai update hogaya ...

Or hai check again ...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Wow man
Nancy u too good
Dznt feel like its ur first os
Uff that passionate hugg
Wen will we get tht in actual D3
U better update soon
Warna 😈

Edited by Swaron.maniac - 12 years ago

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-TanHaVruShan-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Wow loved d last line. .
Sharon ka dialogue mast. . Now waiting for swayam.s reply..
Very well written. .
I loved d whole sequence. .
Awesome update. .
U also write quiet well nancy. .
Keep it up n keep writing. .
Next part jaldi n pls next part full final patch up kara dena..

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Hey nancy i read both the parts today.
First try? Too good mate.
You very well wrote swayam and sharon's feelings and the pain of separation. Their silent talk was nicely penned and then i loved the second part where sharon unable to suppress her feelings just hugged swayam.
Shilpa is right, update soon with SwaRon's patch up ;)
Pm me too, and keep writing more, you are really good! Its just the start, more to go! And i would love to read and review your future works :)