Swaron OS :'we' wil be back(part 3 pg 10) - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Happy dat u like it 😊
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Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

CHAPTER 2 WAS GREAT ... LIKE IT... AMAZING...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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update soon and pm me
nyc update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sharon was so shocked n pissed with his behaviour
She shouted in angry with tears rolling down her face
" kyu mujh aapnai itnai paas bulaleya ki ab jab tum mujh sai dur ho toh mai saas bhi nhi lai pa rahi hu..."

Swayam so wanted to hear this...it actually meant a lot to him...
But it seemed that his ego wanted to dominate his love...
With a heavy heart n in a low voice he muttered -
Swayam - yeh Sab galti ki vajah se

Sharon - galti? With a surprised face

Swayam - ha Sharon jo tum nai ki hai ...mera trust Todh Kai

Sharon (confident n straight)- sirf Mere galti thi ?

Swayam(looking at her)- nhi Maine bhi galti ki par gussai mai

Sharon- sirf tum mi gussai mai Thai ...?

Swayam- ha mai gussai mi tha ...Merai bestfrnd nai mr.nobody Kai liye mujh galat Samajaha ...mujh misjudge Kiya or meri girlfrnd nai mera trust Todha ...humara promise Todha ...isliye mai gussai mi tha...Par tum kis bat se gussa thi Sharon ???

He expected this to be a rhetorical question ...he didn't expect a reply to this
But her answer came to him as an eye opener.

Sharon replied (breaking down)-ha swayam tum sahi Bol rahai ho...mujh kyu gussa hona chahiyeh ...mai puri raat tumhare liye pershaan ho kar tumhai dhundhti rahi or phir tum Aakar mujh question kartai ho ki I don't care for ur feelings ...iss bat se mujh gussa nhi hona chahiyeh tha
Tum ni ek baar bhi meri baat Sunnai ki jharurat nhi samjhi...iss bat se mujh gussa nhi hona chahiyeh (she was flooded with tears)
Meri life ka Sabh sai important person Jise mai bohot pyaar karti hu ...usse lagta hai ki toh meri life mai toy boy hai ...entertainment hai...(by this tym she was fully broken n tear just kept flowing out)

Swayam was in a state where he could not say...he just kept looking at her...
He felt shameful guilty ... He knew he was wrong..

On other side Sharon kept repeating -' I was wrong ...I was wrong ...I was wrong'

Swayam moved forward n tired keeping his hand on her shoulder...he could no more c her this way ...
But Sharon removed his hand ...

(Scene was something like this)

Swayam (moves forward try keeping his hand on her shoulder)- I m sorry (tears flowed down his face)
Sharon ( moving Back away from him n removing his hand) - I was wrong
Swayam (doing the same)- no pls don't say that ...I m really very sorry ...sorry Sharon
Sharon (moving back removing his hand) -I was wrong
Swayam- sorry ...sorry ...sorry Sharon (totally broken)

Sharon moved back as before ...but this time swayam didn't allow her to repeat her words
Before she could say anything ...he pulled her by her waist n crushed her into a tight hug...
Sharon could not say anything...swayam tight his grip every passing moment he did not want to be away from her any more...Sharon's cries turn to sob n she was just so comfortable in his arms...she hugged him tight as well ...she closed her eyes n enjoyed the peace n cosyness in being so close to him...
Swayam said sorry n the hug broke ...but Sharon still close to him in his arms around her waist ...they looked in each others eyes only to find lots of love for each other

Swayam - I m so...
Sharon(placed her palm on his lips )n said -no more!
Swayam smiled weakly n placed his lips on her forehead kissing her ...it was a long
N then looked at her...both smiled ...Sharon stood on her toes n kissed his cheek

Swayam (with an intense look)- ab tumhe kabhi let down nhi karuga ...tumhari har expectation par khadah Uthrunga ...

Sharon- mai tum se sirf mujh love karna expect karti hu

Swayam-I can stop breathing ...but can't stop loving u ...' I LOVE U'

Sharon (with glitters in her eyes ) - ' I LOVE U TOO'

Swayam - so r 'we' back
Sharon looked puzzled at this
Swayam replied- I mean as boyfriend girlfriend (smiling )
To which Sharon replied smiling - WE ARE BACK :)

Here I complete my work...
I loved writing this ...my first OS !
Thank u all for ur support
Pls do read n comment :)



Edited by nancynnv - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

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wao very nic updsye ending was suparb...

plzz write more
Edited by swaronlove001 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooja123456

update soon and pm me

nyc update


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its awsum amazing
I luved it alooot
Nancy yaar u can write more and more
U r really gud in writing do think about it
Just luved it alooot
Finally swaron r back
I hope they cum back in d3 also

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update. .
Very nice ending. .
Ur first work n u did really great job. .
All dialogues very well written. .
I loved d patch up..
Keep writing more..
Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was really a nice one...
to be the first one of one's writing..
it was very well done...
even i wrote my first a few days before...BUT i couldn't bring it well like you did...
everything was nice and the os was a well paced one too...
i mean that neither it was very sloww going...
nor very fast forward...
just the way it should be...
the silent conversation was written beautifully...
and really the whole os the dialogues you wrote were hatss off!!!!
you must continue writing such well pieces of writing...
and you can try your hands on films...we really need dialogue writer in the industry :P :)

Rohan :)


Edited by rohan_smile - 12 years ago

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