ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn -Thread 6 - COMPLETED

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Sona257

@Sona257

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#521

Awesome update!! Cant wait for the mahaa update!!

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#522

omg i have given the name to today's update AWEE UPDATE...through out the update i was like aweee ...trust me my awee muscles r gone with the wind...:)

rain means fun and fun means family,which didnt exist anymore...

earthly smell of pure heavenly water beacme muddy for him now

deeps how muturly u have written it dear hats off...

beautiful ambiance of rain created here...her saree hugging her...and i am glad to know that not onlu khushi and us,even our arnie act perverted too...he really checked out her ,all her curves,and that flapping of pallu,and that beautiful dip ,her belly button...i mean wow arnie great going...:)

he smiled thinking about her, he ran his fingers through his hair removing his shiny strands from his forehead. He seemed to finally enjoy the smell of the grass after the downpour. She thought, noticing water running from his deep locks, flowing in a thin stream under his sharp chin while drops dripped from his nose tip kissing his lips. Her gaze halted at his lips, the way he pursed them sprinkling the water away. That very subtle movement of his virile lips stirred up millions of butterflies in her belly...breathe taking moment ...i wanted to be that water drop running from his deep locks to further further further ;) :)

hahaha so khushi also thought that first lips then feet and now chest ...i was laughing out loud here :)

it was hilarious when he said if u done with frog stunts shall we go in...:)

wow he carrying her in his arms and then putting her down...and she blabbering i am sure i will be 70 before u start romancing...lol

hyeee deeps thanks for letting him say uff after his wifey besharam ...hehehehe that was fun

pervertness at its best ,really khushi u thought he was talking abt ur blouse...hahaha...and zara arnav ko deekho he opened two buttons of his shirt ...hyeee :)

i am loving this old and new tradition deeps...two pecks woh bhe on his jaw line...ya ya breathe gone :)

height of update in simple question and answer

Do i really belong to u?

you belong to me the day u belonged to urself...hats off ...it took the show

loved payal and akash,awesome lovely couple,loved arnav noticing her mehndi walay feet till knee length wow...love u khushi for showing it to arnie he was eager to see :)

loved the friendship btw the four...arnav hunger story touched deep down heart...felt like crying...his call to payal...that was painful indeed...he has suffered alot ..:(

deeps hats off to u ...aik lamha it feels we r laughing,next feels like now awed,then smiling,then hyeee,then wow and uff and very next moment having tears in eyes...tussi kamal ho jeee...such an awesome writer...love u loads and loads...

do u have written the shair????it very calm and soothing :)

PS: u know wt i have written one big big comment with colourful fonts and icons but when i clicked post so it disappeared saying some problem...so i have written it again ...earlier it was much longer one :(

and yes as already posted special thanks post for the chicken...u r awesome chick dear,:)

re game ...so if its truth and dare tu dare mein tu khushi nay ker he deyni hay kiss...hehehe

Edited by lalarukh - 12 years ago

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#523

The mem0ry that they shared was s0 painful...its a w0nder, just like c0uple wh0 actually have arranged marriage, they are sl0wly and steadely getting c0mf0rtable with each 0ther, gettinng t0 kn0w each 0ther and falling in l0ve with each 0ther...beautiful

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Arshifan4life

@Arshifan4life

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#524

Fantatic updates love ur work its amaozng

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l.savitree

@l.savitree

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#525

A marvellous ,beautiful , describe & well written update where we have love,romance,fight ,teasing confession & emotional...omg i love it

thanks for pm & eagerly waiting for next one

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Pari

@ammavedu80

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#526

Beautiful update
The friends night out remind of the college days And night outs before the exams in the name of comibined studies and chatting in between
Arnav has to go thru a lot and now kushi is by his side
Looking forward for the next update

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ara_000

@ara_000

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#527

Goshhh dis is simply a mindblowing chappy 👍🏼

starting from rain scene,hayeee her getting all drenched nd made him also wet,his anger nd his asking her to get inside nd den seeing her all dancing nd enjoying d rain like a child he forgot all his anger nd started to drool over her nd her beauty..!

He was mesmerised to see her all dancing like a child nd enjoying d rain like she was waiting for it since long..

He forgot all his bitterness towards his rain nd began to enjoy it seeing her nd drowning himslf into her beauty..!

His mind all flying high wit guttery thoughts nd his desires burning him nd khushi's beauty did not let him thnk properly nd he could not help but blush at his own thoughts..!

Nd den wen he could not take it any longer he just asked her to step in wen she denied nly to made him carry her in his arms nd den khushi's saying abt his dimaag ki batti jal gaya part was too cute nd yet again surprising him she got her arms wrapped around him feeling all comfrtable..!

Their door opening scene,khushi's oogling at him nd his chest nd getting all guttery thoughts nd den his teasing him holding her close infct sooo close to him so dat air also cannot pass nd their convo,hayeee beautiful..!

Khushi getting all embarassed thnking abt her own guttery thoughts nd arnav's smirk seeing her all lost in her oogling session md gutter thoughts nd den her calling him BESHARAM,hayeee nothng can get better dan dis ❤️

his loving his new name nd planning to create such situation to hear dat name again from her mouth nd his smile feeling happy nd his thoughts abt her suddenl chnged behaviour nd den thnking abt her falling in love but quickly discarding d idea,ahhh awsum..!

Loved it how he picked up d key nly to see her mehendi clad feet but he could not get to see it..!

Akash nd payal's plan to tease them was cute,FRIENDS will b FRIENDS,no matter wat..!

Ajash teasing arnav abt him gifting khushi on their first night nd d way he was talking to arnav making him all embarassed was funny..!

Nd den khushi cuming downstairs nd saying abt her cooking chicken did nothng but made arnav all go mad over her nd he yet again shuted at her witout even tnking dat his frnds were there in d house making khushi on d verge of crying but his one word "MY HOUSE" blew her sene away nd she shouted back making him feel dat its not his house,its their house nd everythng which belong to him also belongs to her including him nd dats it he could not help but feel content again listening her speaking such thngs nd den his making up wit her nd her new found tradition d her kissing him nd his hlplessness as he could not hold her due to d chicken plates in his hands nd she enjoying his helplessness was damn cute..!

Their kisses,their love nd their desires - ahh perfctly penned down

nd den their cuming out frpm d kitchen nd khushi making him wrap his hands around him making him again thnk abt her drastic change in behaviour but still enjoying her touches nd den him holding her tightly making her feel dat she belonged nly to him nd her making him hold tighter was beautiful..!

nd i loved dat part where khushi made him understnd how he belonged to him nd he like a child was listening to her trying to understnd her words..! ❤️

Their convo nd arnav noticing wat khushi is wearing nd den oogling at her mehendi clad feet nd getting all lost in his world of love for her was beautifully written ❤️

nd den the story abt chicken,goshhh sdamn painful..!

I was having lump in my throat while reading it but i loved it how armav realising d taste of d chicken hugged khushi tightly as if sharing his pain nd she did not hesitate nd den payal narrating d whole story made her cry but she did not let him go from her arms nd continued to soothe him by rubbing his hairs silently giving him support nd making him believe dat she is wit him nd nothng can harm dem,awww splendid part dat was ❤️

nd den finally arnav saying sorry abt past nd khushi hitting him nd den their hugging each other nd arnav kissing her hairs nd khushi blushing,awww they r behaving like a perfct couple very much in love..!

So d game is on nd i am damn xcited to read d nxt chappy coz i can feel dat somethng deadly interesting is cuming up wit this question-answer game 😉

fantabulous update 👏

i loved d update sooo damn much ❤️

its simply worth d wait 😊

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Sona257

@Sona257

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#528

Awesome update!! Cant wait for the mahaa update!!

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rosaline

@rosalinesibs

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#529

loved d update...loving dis naugthty...bubly...bold khushi...man she is such a tease...n also loving d flirty arnie...hehehe i jus love dem...felt really bad on knowing arnav's past his struggle his hunger oh my...loved d way he found solace in her...cant wait 2 know more abt d games dey r gonna play...well um in so love wid this akash n payal...