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Barkah thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow... Fabulous & Amazing update 😊
Love it 😊
😭 😭 👏
sagmruswe thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic update..luvd all arshi scenes. He sufferd a lot n liked hw hehold kushi while narrating abt past
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum blossum update dii..loved it...
finally da wait was over nd da most awaited rain sequence of arshi..jst lovely
haye khushi dancing in da rain na arnav was jst watching his crazy wife antics...nd mesmerised by her beauty

''Beheta Hai Mann Kahin, Kahaan Jaante Nahin...Koyi Rokle Yahin..
Bhaage Re Mann Kahin, Aage Re Mann Chala, Jaane Kidhar Jaanu Na

Ho Chale Thhandi Hawa.. Ho Sang Mann Bhi Gaya
Dhhundhhu Main Kahaan Usko, Batlaaye Koyi Mujhko
Ke Haan Haan Haan Re

Bhaage Re Mann Kahin, Aage Re Mann Chala, Jaane Kidhar Jaanu Na
Beheta Hai Mann Kahin, Kahaan Jaante Nahin, Koyi Rokle Yahin

Haan Haaye Aisa Sama Hmm Phir Hoga Kahaan
Jee Loon Main Isse Khulke, Saawan Bhi Zara Khulke
Arre Sun Sun Sun'

Beheta Hai Mann Kahin, Kahaan Jaante Nahin, Koyi Rokle Yahin
Bhaage Re Mann Kahin, Aage Re Mann Chala, Jaane Kidhar Jaanu Na ''

oh god im laughing like an idiot when arnav said'' If you are done with your frog stunts and staring session,shall we go inside''.. 🤣🤣..seriously frog dance😆😆

sankadevi was righr finally akddu arnav ki dimag ki batti jali nd picked her up..isska he to intezar tha hamare sankadevi ko..😆😆...bt as usual arnav nt understanding wht his crazy wife indicating😆😆 ''I am sure I will hit 70 before you start romancing''😆

haye re nandkishore ye sankadevi chali thi apne pati ko torture karne bt khud he phas gae apne jaal main😆''Pehle lips, then feet, and now chest. Oh god, whats happening with me?..aww poor khushi😆😆
aww..arnav to bada he naughty ho raha hai talking with double meaning word to khushi'' If you step backward beyond this point I will not be able to open it''.😳😆
haye....''looks like you never seen a man's chest before''..now khushi become tounge tied.😆😆..khushi called him besaram..nd arnav like it..

akash is such a sweetheart..love da way he was trying to make arnav confess his tru feelings for khushi.. iske liye akash ne phir se bichare ko phasa diya ...😆😆

oh no ye lo av av romance suru hi hua tha ki phir se jhagda...ye pappad ka tukda jab dekho ukhda ukhada..akddu singh raizada..bt hamari sankadevi v kuch kam nahi..loveit when she said '' Dont forget that we are married and anything that belongs to you belongs to me as well, including YOU YOURSELF.And get that straight to your pea-sized brain''..nd arnav was like what the!!😆😆 nd he like it
khushi was in full romantic mode'' I am starting one more tradition. She whispered looking at his eyes intently, Everytime I feel overwhelmed with your stupid 2 cent concerned dialogues, you are going to get these.She pecked his jawbone on both sides..😳😳 nd very well can understand what his husband was thinking..''And this is to compensate your desperateness to hold me right now''😳😉.. give him a third bonus peck and this time right below his jawbone☺️☺️..
di..ye padhte hue blush kar kar ke khushi k jagha hum he red tamatar hogaye hain😆😆..jokes apart..
'' I am sorry, I should have asked..Dont say it, not your fault. You have every right to make it your, I mean OUR home the way you want it.''

aww.. how innocently like a child he asked her''Do I really belong to you?''

''The day you own your smile and your tears, the day you own your joy and sadness, the day you own your past and your present, the day you own you loss, your gain, and your grief. Until then you are not owning YOURSELF, you are just running from all of it. The day you embrace each and every moment in your life as it meant to be, you will find me by you and within you. ''
glad dat khushi was der for him to bring da old arnav back..'' these doesnt happen overnight. We will deal with it, just like the way you said. Just help me help you.''

love da khushitee''dont mess with me..''😆😆..nd finally arnav able to she da mehendi clad legs of khushi which he was dying 2 see from many days..😳😳

da last part was such an emotional nd heartwrenching..my herat goes to arnav...poor soul.. how much he gone through even nt able to bye food for himself 😭😭..''Fatty, tere ghar mein kuch khaane keliye hain kya?''..bt happy dat khushi was always der for his..phass na rehekar v pass he thi..

kya di..dis is nt done ... phele hasa dia phir end main rula dia😭😭..
bt love evry bit of da update..beautifully wriiten di..jst amazing..
a big jadu ki jhappy for dis wonderful nd heartt touching updt🤗 🤗di

egarly waiting for nxt..
continue soon😃😃





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Posted: 12 years ago
its was awesome!!!!
wow loved it asr is seriously gonna have a hard tym controlling his desire!!!!
it was so emotional wen asr asked payal that do she has food in her house(in fb) tht was heart touching!!!!
and at last wen kushi says that arnav as well as every thing in this house belongs to her awww that was cute!!!
i seriously lyk ur story a lot!!!
loved ur updates!!!!
thx for the pm!!!
n plzzz cont... soon!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome update. beautifully written. Loved rain sequence with arnav mesmerized by khushi. Arnav's past brought tears in my eyes. Waiting to know akash's game




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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnav went through such horrible times before his business started... Such an emotional and romantic update...
Loved Akash Payal n Arnavs bond... Khushi was the only one he found solace in even then n now as well...
I loved the way khushi retorted his hurtful words...regarding chicken...
Awww rain scene was sooo beautiful...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update deepthi...
Khushi is trying hard to bringhim out of his shell... He is not ready to think or expect that she loves him... Even though he wishes for that...
They r gving sweet trture to eachother...i love reading this...
The last part was so emotional... It was so difficult. For him...oh...god...he suffered a lot...
Waiting for their confessions dear...love this...
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Posted: 12 years ago
ok... i can think a bit abt other thgs too nw... :) :)
thts soo soo natural... the more sthg hurts us.. the more we tend to run away... like arnav is trying to do.. running away.. trying to forget everythg related to his family... b it a simple rain.. or pooja... n still trying to hold on to every bit of it... as in the traditions.. the chicken...

soo soo real :)

n as of drought in his brains is concerned.. i think khushi.. u r enuf fr tht.. ;) he wudnt need rains , bt u... to clear tht up :) 😉

the entire sequence of.. "frog stunt" , "dimaag ki batti" , "yahin tak tha" too too cute :) i cud see khushi pouting saying yahin tak tha :) :) ... cute phrases :)

love them both teasing each other :)

n i was wondering.. if payal had not told akash abt khushi not confessing yet... n akash had gone along with his plan to tease them... mayb arnav wud hv knwn...

hayee... :) :) wud hv been such fun... bt i m sure it wud b more fun as n whn u decide to reveal it to him... till then the teasing is mking the updates very very interesting to read :) 😊

i love arnav-payal bond... its beautiful... the way he is comfy with her, the way she knws all abt him... they really r close frnds.. very close frnds.. :) amazing bond :)

the "my house" fight was soo soo gd... u were rt.. the chicken did bring out a new taste in their relationship :) :) ...
she let out the fact tht she feels a rt over him.. n he heard it.. understood it... n wants to live it i m sure :) :)

aww khushi.. new tradition... i m soo proud of u :) :) ... go on dear... mk some more... help him out :) :) ..
bt y did u limit him to just 2??? think again dear... gives him a few more kisses.. n enjoy the teasing.. i m sure u r enjoy him being concerned n loving n caring fr u :) :) ... we love tht too :) :)

the entire clg story scene... was soo soo touching... him trying to move away.. her holding on to him... the frnds chocking up at the memory... everythg.. everythg is soo soo real n touching... tht it pains .. as if it were my own frnd who went thru tht stage in life..

loved the comfort they felt while sitting close.. the way she lets him knw tht he can n he shud hold her... the way he catches onto tht pt quick enuf :0 :) ..

n soo waiting to play the game... :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updates yarrr...
arnav has gone through so much...plz dont make him wait yarr for her love...at least make ythem kiss...lol...

bt seriously i cried while reading tht part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updt
rain part is awesome
finaly arnav saw khushi mehndi feet
his one wish come true
poor arnav he had face so uch in his past
what is akash planning
thnx for pm
updt soon

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