ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn -Thread 6 - COMPLETED

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#531

superb update...enjoyed reading it...kushis Rain dance, and arnav lost in her u explained it simply superb...how many times we read about it and watch, we don't get bored😊😊😊😊😊😊...some scenes are like that only...

Both are teasing each other 😉😉😉😉😉hayey hayey...kushi knows arnav loves her,but Mr raizada doesn't know that she knows his secret...😆😆so many knows sorry...😆😆...u written this chapter on full teasing mode...marene ka irada he kya😃😃...

so finally they are coming closer with every passing moment😛...liked the way kushi told this is my house everything is mine and u also😛😛...sorry MRS Raizada U Rs and ours😉Mr rizada is very slow in understanding don't worry he will come around...

Arnav struggles at college is very touchy yaar...payal and akash are true friends...

game is about to begin...can not wait to read😛😛😛😛😛...

thanks for the pm...

cheers...

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saba

@ASR6262

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#532

Amazing update very very well written

Last part was so so emotional

Continue soon please

Thank u for pm me

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anabiya1

@anabiya1

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#533

Bht he alllaaa ...
Mindblwing ...
Luvd it...

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#534

Res edited-

wow.. superb update👏

loved arnav's teasing and khushi's shyness.. their relation indeed take a beautiful turn after khushi's realization and arnav can see that though he don't know the reason

hmm.. akash and payal are really great friends and how they helped arnav... a true friend can only di that!!!!

maybe after this revelation their relation again will take beautiful turn in thier life's

I love that this story is very realistic as it should be...

really loved the update to bits

continue soon😊

thanks for the pm

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#535

the whole update was beautifully done from both teasing each other to akash and payal arriving to their fight over the chicken but the last part and what arnav went through was so heartbreaking that why he never wastes food very emotional that whole scenes will be unforgettable thanks for the pm

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#536

Awesome update
Loved it
The last part was emotional
Thanks for the pm

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sushna

@sushna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#537

wow awesme loved it
poor arnav :(
thankx 4 pm

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#538

It's getting more n more awesome!!

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gracefultulika

@gracefultulika

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#539

it was awesome

i was crying reading the past behind chicken matter

besides this the chicken matter was very cute

their indirect confession made me happy today

khushi's dialogue was awesome

akash and payal will make them to confess i think

arshi are born to romance

lets see what's in this game

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tanu3579

@tanu3579

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#540

u made me cry by tht one line... i hope u knw... bt still here it is... Fatty, tere ghar mein kuch khaane keliye hain kya?

i cant even begin to feel wht he must hv gone thru... n ur words... ur way of writing just brings out all of it soo well :)

so well ...especially in this scene.. tht honeslty.. rt nw.. i cant even think of all the beautifully romantic n teasing ones :) :)

bt yes... i m soo soo waiting fr akash's game :) :)

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