Virman Collab FF: Games of the Heart ~ Updated Chapter 1

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virmanfan013

@virmanfan013

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

wow it was totally awesome nd i loved it. U written it very well. Would love to read more. Do cont soon nd thanx for the pm

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

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ur updates r ...

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u done a ..👏👏👏..really

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Tejeswy

@kushal90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Ohhh gawwd i'm a hugeee fan of ur writing..!! :*

Amaaazing it is..!! ^_^

"Oh my boy, what shall I do with you? What man in this world would leave such an opportunity with such a beautiful young lady? I worry about you son! Will you ever marry?"

hayeee rabba this was my fav dialogue.. ;)

i dunno hw do i expresss hw goood nd amaaazing this update was..!! ;)

update sooon plzzz...

can't w8 longer..!! *despo mch* ryt.!? :D :P

Do pm me :)

Loads of love nd hugs to both of u :)

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Ayesha

@Ayesha.behroz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: Aashalovevirman
Oh.. Wow.. I loved it aaysha.. N zainab.. Sweety i already told u how much i like it.. It amezing.. Plot n concept n idea of story is mindblowing n that hot headed virat n fiesty manvi choudhry r the most coolest thing in this story.. spacialy their proffession.. I toh lved it n waiting for the 1st chapter eagarly.. Plz update soon.. As i hate to wait.. N seriously virman in police is smthing very diffrent n new.. N virat in police uniform, o my god.. M jst dead.. I cn imagine him as a strict police officer

Thank you so much or very nycc comment and appreciate us loved ur comment...

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Ayesha

@Ayesha.behroz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: naina927
Ohhh wowww...

Do add me to d pm list...

Loved d prologue n d cs...

Continue soon...

Thanks yar...

I add ou in pm list don't worry

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Ayesha

@Ayesha.behroz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: meghan11
Awesome job Ayesha & Zainab. The prologue was really breath-taking and it set the ball rolling for the first chapter which I can't simply wait to read. The character sketches are pretty intriguing and call for an interesting story line ahead..Once again Kudos for a job well done..👏

My sweetheart loved ur comment I m glad u like it and want to read further thank you so much mwah😛

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Ayesha

@Ayesha.behroz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: cutie_pie101
Nice job Ayesha and Zainab!!!! It was really interesting to read!!!!! I can't wait to read the first chapter!!!!! 😃😃

Thank you sweetpie😉

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Ayesha

@Ayesha.behroz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: niki795
sounds interesting
loved the prologue and cs
I love suspence and mystery
waiting for the update
do add me to your pm list

Thank you very much

Surely I add u inpm list..

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Ayesha

@Ayesha.behroz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

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Originally posted by: MaaNeeTLuV
Ooohh...!!! Virman n virka together wow thanku ghanku so much for a lovely story...balle balle lalallalal lalallalalala... amazin update guyz keeo rockin jaan expectin a lot fron u yr... pls tod na maat 😉
Luv u guyz pls countinue soonn... :D waitin.for de great update

Hayee I'm dodo glad u like it shrun thank you or sach a amazing comment...😉😊