Virman Collab FF: Games of the Heart ~ Updated Chapter 1

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Surish

@Surish

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Amazing update Zainab
love it and Love their Meeting
waiting for next part
update soon...and yes thanx 4 the pm or srcap😊

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saakhi01

@saakhi01

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Hey ayesha the story is nice n is written beautifully...
Bt i m nt into EHMMBH serial n characters...
Thanks for d pm

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Nicky saluja

@Nickysweet

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Awesome start...ayesha..keep it up
Great going
Lovely update

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Awesome Start..!!! Lovd Maanvi/..she has alot of things going on while carrying a conversation..thats some thing i can relate to as we can intervene while some 1 spks but not mind talking and cant stopped either...the best way to curse or appreciate without letting any1 know😆!

Virat he is hot..and i guess the drooling session was from the both side...as we yet to have Virat's POV..he saved her towards the end,...hence answering the first complain...lekin they seem to be a little egoistic...so things here may heat up in their head but practically and realistically will take time..Eager for their work together..that would be awesome and will wait for the sparks to increase withevery moment they spent😃...Thanks for the PM Zainab..!!!

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nrithyao

@nrithyao

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

fabulous update
loved virman meeting
loved the interview part where maanvi was staring at virat
the ending of this part was lovely
waiting eagerly for the next part
please continue soon
thanks a lot for the pm

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meghan11

@meghan11

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Wow!!! Really awesome update...I like your style of writing it keeps the reader captivated. The story line is really good and the characters relatable..Can't wait for the next update..Kudos for a job well done!!!!