Virman Collab FF: Games of the Heart ~ Updated Chapter 1 - Page 13

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afshan alam

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awwesome 😊update👏 yaar...
Loved it...
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ramanirani

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Posted: 12 years ago

its just awesome yaar...
cant wait for the next part...
continue soon...

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hangok

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Posted: 12 years ago

ohhh god, what a wonderful beginning, just amazing...
cant wait to read more
thanks for pm

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Rachel19

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey very nice update loved it
So manvi for the job and will be working with virat
That's pretty interesting
Their first meeting begins with a fight
Really wanna know what happens next
Thank you so much for the pm
Please continue soon
Will be waiting for your update

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Niki

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey Zainab and Ayesha,
Nice start girls..!!
I liked the first part... Maanvi seems to be really dedicated about the job from her interview, now have to see how good she is at investigating and hadling her Akdu boss...!!😉
Viraat... I can't say much about him yet, just one thing that he is not that tough nut as he seems so, thats why he gathered her in his arms...
Mr. Kapoor seems like a joly boss 😊
Well I am interested to know now, who was that woman? I mean running out of a CBI office, you need to have guts for that...
Hope to see another update soon and thakns for the PM

P.S. : Zainab I am still waiting for an unexpected love 😊

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Tanvi Dandime

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Posted: 12 years ago

interesting concept👍🏼

loved the character sketch❤️

amazing start😊😊..loved it

VirMan first meeting was awesome

waiting eagerly for the next update..continue soon😃

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Lara / Clara

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Posted: 12 years ago

Superb.. cont soon and thnks fr th pm...

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SS4MaNan

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome! sounds interesting! thanks for da pm n continue soon :)

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Poojaa_P

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Posted: 12 years ago

RES!!

I'm reading it NOW

I want to write a live update as I read ..but my mum's calling for dinner so will be back with LONG reply. :D

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tinni04

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Posted: 12 years ago

it was superb👏. loved it continue soon please😃.

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