IPKKND: Maid, Mistress & Mrs Thread 2 chp10 pg17 CONCLUDE

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saakhi01

@saakhi01

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Posted: 10 years ago

#221

Awesome story, read it in one go.

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saakhi01

@saakhi01

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Posted: 10 years ago

#222

Awesome story, read it in one go.

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Vrinda

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Posted: 10 years ago

#223

really a heart touching story

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

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Posted: 10 years ago

#224

read this in 1 go...one of ur best works..loved it..khushi had to got thru a lot...but good that arnav repented n changed...great arshi story...😊

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pixiegirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#225

Nice story. :) Really enjoyed reading it in one go.

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priya260187

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Posted: 10 years ago

#226

Aaj main 15th time royi yeh story padhkar
Har baar nayi si lagti hai . you are such an amazing writer 👏

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Mansi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#227

Awesome story and thanks for the pm

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shalbi

@shalbi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#228

a lovely story of repentense and winning back of love

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gprs

@gprs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#229

Hello friend,
what an amazing writing...u r a wonderful writer..I love the way of yours to express their emotions...I'm feeling sorry for khushi...whatever may be the reason his approach towards khushi Is unacceptable...

but he played a perfect part to correct his mistakes..I loved the way how he is able to read others in this state..the way he apologized to hp was nice..I feared while reading the scene of arnav saw the box full of toys ..but you gave a nice punch to the mind of arnav..

the story is simply superb...I love your writing

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Piya rai

@Itspiyalovely

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Posted: 9 years ago

#230

I am happy again to comment here too.

It was absolutely fantastic dear. I am surprised how can you create magic in the story with such simple words??

It's again about arshi only i loved it . though ups and downs in the story were common and easy to predict but still it was worth reading just because of your writing style.

Though submitting physically to the man who didn't love u under the impression of proving your love to him is something I can't agree with but I think that was important for the story to progress as it had a title mistress too.

Especially anjali's reply to arnav which opened his eyes was really nice.

Nice ending. No unnecessary fuss , no fairy tale promises, no extra characters. That's what I love about ur work.

Thanks.

Edited by Itspiyalovely - 9 years ago