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Posted: 11 years ago
it was very nice one...that's it i can say...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome!!! 😃

i'm loving it ... fully filmy deetha shtylee ... 😉

rey kriya pe tabhi bhadak sakta h.. jab vo jealous ho ya jab apni feelings na show kar sake... 😳

& kriya thinks... he still hates her... awww .. noo babyy ... 😆

shit ... that feeling... of separation... AGAIN!!! 😭

dono hi kitne sad h ... although koi nhi chahta kriya ko jane dena... but yahan case love ka hai... 😒

she couldn't go... baar baar rey ko mana karne par bhi... khud hi ruk gyi... 👏

yess yesss... tell him... i just louuuvvvee this filmy reunion... the passionate hug.. full of love... 🤗

truth revealation is all what we are waiting for .. so badly... pata nhi kab hoga sachhi me..
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was beautiful...
Though i hated wen rey accussed her bt realized it worked...
Amazing
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey deetha !!
Another awesome os by you!!
Luvd it lotsss!!! 👏

Pehle to i luv reys confusion n then acceptance..
Ranvijay scene was also gud n emotional..
But the best shot ws the end..
I seriously hoped tht kria returns to tell d truth n.. :) she did :)
N hug n unspoken words wer the perfect endin to b given to this os..
U explained very well tht sumtymz nt words bt sum gestures are enough to describe wat our heart feels..
N as u said plz do NOT giv a 2nd part to this..
It has its own beauty by endin it this way..
Definately u can giv new os.. 😉
That to asap!! 😆
But i really luvd it..

N i hope u happy..
Bada wala comment kia na..!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yuck I hate this girl's works!! >_<
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: yogini64



fully filmy deetha shtylee ... 😉

Iska Ishtyle bhi hai??🤢😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
Heya people!! :D Welcome back!!! Hope you are not irritated with this continuous nonsense of mine. So I am jumping directly into the OS and yeah common concept hai KriYaansh best buddies from childhood . So ab aage pado

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" Rey kholo na !! " She banged the door once again.
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"Kya hai kriya?? " he opened the door annoyed.

As soon as the door opened she walked in not paying attention to him and sat on the bed sighing and low. He frowned and walked to her. He will literally kill her but can never see her down. Why not ?? after all she is his best buddy .

" ab kya hua nautanki?? " he asked throwing the novel to a corner of the bed and settled beside her.

"Rey!! " She called him loudly , all excited but went silent again.

" batayegi bhi? " he rolled his eyes.

"Rey!! Wo.. wo actually Sameer mujhe date pe leke jaana chahta hai " She said sad.

He went silent for a second.

"toh? " he said looking away grabbing a pillow and at the same time controlling his emoticons

"toh kya?? mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaraha rey " She pouted sadly and looked down. He took a deep breathe and circled his arm around her shoulder.

" kya samjh nahi aaraha hai kriya?? " " he asked lovingly.

" date pe kaise rehte hai? " she rubbed her slightly running nose onto his t-shirt.

"YUCK!! Saali sudhar ja " he shouted and took his shirt changing it.

"arey kuch nahi hua.. itni bhi jyaada sardi nahi hai mujhe. " she made a face.

" chup reh!! " he snapped changing the shirt.

" Rey mujhe sikhaona date pe kaise rehna chahiye mujhe?? " she asked with hopeful eyes.

"pehli baat.. mai ladki nahi hun ki mujhe pata hoga tumhe kaise rehna hai, doosra thanks to you , maine kabhi kisiko date nahi kiya " he mocked.

"oye meri wajah se kya? koi ladki tereliye pat thi nahi toh mai kya karun " she said innocently.

" jhoot mat bol, stupid bet jeetne keliye meri har gf ko bhagadeti hai :/ "

Kriya looked away having no answer but also acted as if she did nothing.

" Kriya , ab tumhe nikalna chahiye!! " he said after few minutes.

"arey aise kaise??? Rey bolo na please?? mereliye itna nahi kar sakta " she pouted and made a babyface. For a moment he got lost in her but recovered.

" Acha toh sabse pehle ache se tayyar hojao and then.. "

STOP!! " she shouted making him flinch.

"kya hua?? "he asked shocked

"arey practicals, I mean rehearsals karleti hun " she gave a stupid grin and Rey grunted slowly annoyed.

" Meri toh sunne wali nahi ho.. shuru karo " he groaned and sat on the bed. She ran to his wardrobe.

" What are you doing there??? 😲 " He was all shocked.

"chup !! " she sad opening the doors and started searching what she wanted. Rey facepalmd as he saw his neatly ironed shirt, blazer's tee's fly out of the wardrobe.

He fell on the bed helpless and closed his eyes.

"Kaisi lag rahi hun?? " He turned back and his jaw almost touched the ground. She was in his old tee which a bit fitted her but still hanging loose, and she was struggling with his baggy pant.

"What the .. ye kya kar rahi ho?? Tum aise date pe jaogi?? " He almost shouted.

"chillao mat... arey mei toh sample dikha rahi thi. Maine recently ek orange jumpsuit khareeda . Wo perfect rahega na ?? " She beamed. He rolled his eyes.

"saari galti meri hi hai.. har boy's party mei tujhe leke gaya mai " he made a face. Kriya was his best-friend from childhood. And she is no less boy. He never saw her in a girly attire. She always used to be in short's jeans , and jumsuits. And considering the fact that they are neighbors and she spend most of the time with him!!

She made a cute face.


"Kriya tere paas ek bhi ladkiyon wali dresses nahi hai?? " He asked hopefully.

"Nahi!! papa keliye mai abhi bhi 5 saal ki kriya hun , so I select what I am comfortable in " she said proudly.

" Toh I fear tumhe shopping karni padegi, ek achi dress lelena. And haa take Neha for help. " he said walking to set his wardrobe.

"Are you kicking me out?? " she said grumpy with hands on waist. Rey rolled his eyes and replied never caring to look back. " Naatak na kar ab " .

" No!! You are coming with me to the mall. Punishment !! " She declared .

"WHAT?? " he looked at her horrified. Normal girls take 3 hr and she takes double to that.

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" Not that way .. this way "he pulled her to the dresses section.

"Rey that short, dekho na kitna acha texture hai, waha chalte hai pehle " She grabbed his hand but a stern look from him and she followed him like a good girl .

She irritated him to the core when he tried his best to select a dress for her.

He selected a cute dress when she instantly rejected seeing the colour. pink

He sighed. He is getting headache.

"Ye acha haina?? " She grabbed a black knee-length dress and beamed. He looked at the piece of cloth.

"Mai abhi try karke aati hun " before he could answer she vanished.

"Rey !! " He turned back to be only blown away by the beauty of this girl. He suddenly felt this high adrenaline rush . He took a deep breathe keeping a check on him and looked at her face finally. But his eyes couldn't stop from going down and check her. He frowned seeing her cleavage getting exposed slightly. Even though it bought some other thoughts in his mind but his maximum thoughts were accoupied by a single question .

" Is she going to a date with sameer in this dress " Something in him pricked. He was getting furious, irritated. But he controlled himself and asked.

"ye ?? itna chota hai kriya " but she shut him up saying " offo Rey mere shorts jitna hi toh hai , infact usse thoda lamba hai " She bent down to look at her dress and pull it down a bit making him gulp. He quickly looked away.

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He drank some more water and finally threw the bottle hard on the wall and dashed in to have a cold shower. He needs it badly.


And here


She laughed again looking at the dress. Did he really think that she doesn't have a single pair of dress that she can wear for a date?? She isn't that tom boy too. He knew she loved traditional . So its obvious she loves girlie stuff and has some. She laughed again looking at the black dress. She wore it and looked at herself in the mirror. One thought of how it would feel in front of sameer in this dress?? No doubt she wore extremely short shorts and all but wearing this body tight dress highlighting her structure. God that would be awkward.

She quickly called up neha and she was at her home in no time.

" toh Rey jab bol raha tha tabhi reject kardeti. " she asked.

"arey waise baat nahi neha.. I actually liked it but sameer ke saamne iss dress mei?? " she looked at herself again in the morror.

" Rey ke saamne gayi , tab koi problem nahi hui na , waise hi " she was cut.

"arey wo Rey hai!! I am comfortable even in bikini in front of him. It 's awkward to go in front of sameer with this body hugging dress.

" toh ab mai kya karun?? " Kriya dropped a small heap of dresses.

"select one from these " she said grabbing a tee and shorts to change.

"itne saare dresses hai?? then tune Rey ko kyun bola ki tere paas dress nahi hai? " neha asked confused.

"arey, u know how it is. Jabse sameer ko date kar rahi hun Rey ke saath time hi spend nahi kar paarahi hun.. so socha isi bahane uske saath time spend karu aur usko irritate bhi karun " she giggled

"tum bhi na !! kitna tang karti ho usse " neha shook her head.

"arey bestie hai mera , itna toh jhelna padega "


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" Wo badal gaya hai neha " She sniffed louder.

" Kriya , koun?? " she tried once again in 15 mins.

"Rey!! He changed. That bas***d. " she spat venom but still tears flowed from her eyes.

" Rey?? Kya hua? "Neha asked shocked.

" He kicked me out, literally shut the door on my face. Wo mujhse baat tak nahi karna chahta hai " she cried harder.

" Par kyun? " Neha asked all confused.

" Mujhe kya pata !!! Ek toh mai yaha itni mushkil se sab kuch balance kar rahi hun. Humne promise kiya tha , agar kisiki life mei koi aur aa bhi jaye we will give each other time. Mai yaha sameer ko upset karte hue bhi, usse kuch kuch bolke iske saath rehne ka time nikalti hun aur ye hai ki jaate hi shuru kar deta hai ..ab tumhe nikalna chahiye " she mimicked him.

"pata hai kya kiya usne aaj ?? " she broke down again.

Neha just sat quite , all ears.

" Rey!! Kya kar rahe the?? " she went in all jumpy jumpy being the bubly self. He frowned at her.

" Kriya!! You are supposed to be with sameer right?? Tum log coffee keliye jaane wale the na ?? " he frowned

"tumhe kaise pata?? " she asked checking the CD's

"tumne hi msg kiya?? Answer me kriya " he said snatching the DVD bag.

" Rey maine postpone kardiya " she said casually and tried to grab the DVD's back.

"Kyun?? " he was astonished.

"arey remember?? every saturday its our movie time. I know last three weeks se maine bunk maara. So here I am to make it up to it. " she grinned.

"Kriya tumhe nikalna chahiye " he said sternly.

" Offo not again Rey!! And haa koi baat nahi Sameer is all okay with the plan change " she said grabbing the bag and searching for some good movie.

" Kriya!! tumhe aisa karna nahi chahiye.. jao abhi!!! Usse bura laga hoga "

he was cut.

" Rey mujhe ek baat batao?? Jab mai khud bata rahi hun ki sameer ko koi problem nahi toh tumhe kya problem hai?? aaj kal dekh rahi hun tu mujhse ache se baat tak nahi kar raha hai !! Bf mujhe mila Rey!! Tujhe ladki nahi. But still I am managing time here . Why are you pushing me away ?? " she said irritated.

"Kahi koi ladki toh " "Rey we promised that we will share secrets right?? " she got suspicious.

"Kriya aisa kuch nahi hai "

"toh phir?? "

The talk increased to a tiff and then to a fight.

Rey was on verge of loosing his control and spill the beans when he sighed hard.

"Leave!! " he said looking away. He just can't do this anymore. He had to end. She loves sameer. And sameer personally complained how reluctant she is about the relationship , and not spending much time with him and Rey being the main reason. he could sense Sameer's patience coming to end. He might burst out any time. Rey doesn't want to create problems between them and he is not able to get a hold over his emotiocons and feelings for her now a days. So its better he stays away from her.

"Kya ?? Come again ?? Kriya asked shocked not able to believe.

" Leave Kriya!! " He said sternly looking at her face. He had to do this.

" Rey!! It's not funny!! You just can't tell me to get out " her voice raised with each word .

"Kriya kindly leave !! " He walked to her and held her wrist taking her toward the door.

" Rey!! What are you doing?? You have changed. You are a bas***d. Ye mera Rey nahi hai " her voice already shaking.

" Tumhara Rey nahi hun mai!! And please don't come back. I can't tolerate this headache more."

"I am a headache to you ?? " She asked shocked.

"Rey!! Are you alright?? aaj kuch ajeeb behave nahi kar rahe ho? "

"Ajeeb tum behave kar rahi ho Kriya!! You got a BF right?? toh uske peeche pado na mere hi peeche kyun padi ho ?? " he shouted.

She has no words for that. Did that mean he wanted to end the friendship??

"You meant that , you don't want to meet me anymore?? talk with me anymore?? " she asked talking back steps. She didn't notice that she walked out of his door until she heard a firm YES from him and the door being closed.


" I don't believe!! Rey won't do that !! " Neha said shocked.

He has changed Neha!!


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Edited by HetuChaseVS - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
resss


LALALALALALAAA...

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unres...

i cant blv you wrote it all... 😆

but since u updated the 2nd part mere is res ke neeche...so m unressing whole of it here only... 😛

well... i loveddd this best friends wala concept...it was a normal concept...but i loved it..!!!

Rey supressing his feelings..just for Kriya...


Kriya crying her heart out bcoz of Rey's ignorance...


then Rey confessing... Kriya's confusion...

then Kriya finally giving it a try...

I loved it..!!!

Beautiful..!!! 🤗


Edited by akanksha_arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow likd it...waz suprbly written...gr8...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fab os
Loved it
Kriyaansh best buddies n den loves
Feeling sorry for sameer sweet n nice guy
N dat girl bechari kria hit her with her bag
Edited by Crazy_Arshi - 11 years ago

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