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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#211

awesome one...pls complete the os in page no 35

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Abhilasha

@Cieli.Santi

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#212

Res

unres..

awsum ah-mazing OS dii..

loved it..

haye mujhe toh pehlese hi daughter-in-law nd father-in-law ki jodi pasand hai.

haye rey kitna koshish kar raha tha uske saat aur time spend karne..

haye end ka wo hugs eeppsss they were awsum..

haye awsumest OS di..

Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 11 years ago

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Sanchita Naha

@Sanchita_14

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#213

😛 😛 👏 ohhh loved it
Welldone yr 👏 👏 👏

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why do u think i wud tell ya ? ;)

@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#214

Okay .. it was a clear OS and u penned it beautifully!
i loved the way u made her stay..
at some points i had confusions.. which u will clear..
but it was amazing.. i suddenly had tears in my eyes seeing Reys condition.
Please say yes!! Was all i was chanting.!
really di.. u are amazing like seriously.. i loved it!!!
i stayed glued to my tablet while reading.! The flow was that good!!
plus.. i dint like dat dance academy vala scene.. i dint feel that it was needed..!
anyways.. i loved it! It was sureky and amazing one!

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#215

Haaiiyyyeee...
Mast os h di..
Thoda incomplete sa laga..
Bt ok.. Liked it..

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Pooh

@..Sugary_Pie..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#216

really awesome OS!
i luved the way u expressed everything...nd the emotions of rey and kria was written beautifully!
nd the ending was so nice:)
amazing one!

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don girls

@don girls

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#217

Love the OS... Can't wait for the next part

Please PM me when you have updated it, thanks

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Aanchal singh

@Artistic_Stroke

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#218

awesome di
just ur style
sweet and simple ending loved it

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#219

deetha a 😊 the os was fantastic and awesome os... loved it...
i really liked the pov of rey condition... and kriya did not tell the gang that
she was leave back... and i really like rey dad and kriya conversation... liked it...
and their feeling let out from heart and the hug in the end... amazing