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Continuation for the above part...

" Mujhe lagta hai uski girl friend hai.. nahi toh Rey mujhe kabhi ignore nahi karta " Kriya paced to and fro.

" Shayad.. "neha agreed to her.

" Kya shayad?? How dare that dog hide that from me??? Humne ek dusre se promise ki na ki we will let the other know about our relationship status even if our partner is not willing to share?? That idiot... " her mobile rang interupting her curses...

" Hey beautiful " Sameer said lovingly.

" Hi Sameer!! Kya hua... ?? " She immediately softened. This guy for sure has something in him which calms her heart instantly.

" Kuch nahi jaan, just wanted to ask.. aaj raat ko friend ki party hai, will you join me?? " He asked hopefully.

" Party?? Sameer sorry, mera mann nahi hai " She said when neha spoke .

" Kriya, stop sulking yaar... jao ab " she said.Sameer heard her and asked

"Hey is that neha?? "

"Yeah .. kyun?? "

" Zara phone usse dena.. usse bhi party ko invite karlunga " he said when she agreed and handed the phone to neha saying she is going to take bath and get ready as they have to leave in some time.

" Hey Sameer! "Neha spoke politely.

"Hey... tum kuch bolna chahti thi?? Message kiya tune?? bolo .. " he asked remembering the message he got from her some time back.

" Sameer not now please?? I need to speak to you alone. "she sighed

" Toh theek hai.. aaj party pe Kriya ke saath tum bhi aajao, baat bhi hojayegi and mil bhi lenge. Bohut din hue mile hue " he said with a smile .

"Sure " she smiled and ended the call.

" Tu bhi chal rahi hai toh?? " Kriya asked coming out of the washroom .

" Haan par tune itni jaldi nahaliya?? " Neha mocked,

" Oye mai towel bhool gayi " she said and grabbed the towel walking back to bathroom , still sulking.

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" Kriya enough now "Sameer said sternly and she like a good girl placed the half filled glass on the table and looked down sad.He looked at Neha who gave a sad look and looked away. He now got it, it was something surely about kriya and her this state.

" Kriya!! Sweetheart hua kya hai? Why are you that low?? " he asked lovingly.

" Sameer , wo gadha " she hugged him tears running down her cheeks as if waiting for the moment to rush down. He panicked. But before Neha and Sameer could register she was on her feet. They frowned seeing her fume.

" Saala , kutta , kammena " they heard her mutter and looked at the direction she was looking. There Rey was dancing with some chick . She looked some really high-class babe. Kriya grabbed her handbag and dragged her feet to the duo.

" Oye " she called him. Both Rey and the girl turned to her and before one could blink the girl fell directly in Rey's arms. Rey was shocked beyond limits and looked up to see a victory smile on Kriya's face.

" What the hell Kriya?? Did you just hit her with the handbag?? How can you do that? " He was really pissed off with her this act.

"Mera bag. meri haath , meri marzi... tu koun hai poochne wala.. " She barked back.

"Kriya apologize " Rey said sternly.

"Apologize and isse?? My foot !! " She said stumbled her way out.

"I am sorry on her behalf ." He apologized to her immediately.

" Wo ladki koun hai?? " She asked irritated still holding her cheek.

" Umm.. meri best friend hai "he looked down.

" Agar pehle pata hoti ki tumhari ek cyco friend hai toh tumhe kabhi poochti hi nahi party keliye"she scoffed and left. Rey fumed to no extents. He will never accept her this behavior and what irked more was her getting drunk. He dashed out to give her a peace of mind.

Sameer was confused to core. Neha looked at him and sighed. This shouldn't have come out this way.

" What's happening?? " He asked highly irritated and clueless.

"You know it "Neha looked away.

"I mean... wait tumhe pata hai? " he frowned.

"Were you and your friend playing with my feelings?? "he is a great guy but he also never takes shit against him.

"No no Sameer, mujhe bhi aaj hi pata chala...and rahi baat Kriya ki.. she don't know till now " she shrugged.

" Aur Rey?? "He frowned.

"I think he knows. " Neha said

" No man!!! I love her !! " He said trying hard to hide his pain. Neha placed a hand on his shoulder.

" Sorry Sameer. I know you love her a lot. You are a great guy. But not this time . Please??" Neha asked hopefully.

He just looked away and was about to walk when she caught his hand.

"Ek help karoge?? Please?? " neha pleaded.

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" Kriya Stop right now " he shouted angrily.She giggled and walked fast her heels in her one hand and hand-bag in other.

" Kriya I said stop " he was damn serious this time and she involuntarily came to a halt and looked down with no expression.

" Kya kiya tune abhi?? " he gritted his teeth holding her by shoulders tight.

She winced in pain but he just shook her hard.

" Kya kiya tune?? " he shouted.

" maara maine , andhe ho kya? tere hi saamne maara maine "she sad in slurred tone.

" Tumhe ye sab normal lag rahi hai Kriya?? Wo toh acha hai ki uss ladki ne kuch bola nahi.. warna bohut bada problem hojata. Tum aise hi kisiko jaake maar nahi sakti... samjhi tum?? aur ye peena kab se shuru kiya?? " His fingers dug more into her arms and she wined in pain making him realize and loosen a bit.

"Usi ki wajah se tu mujhe ignore kar raha haina?? Nyi girl-friend kya aagayi mujhe toh bhool h gaye tum toh " She sobbed.

" What?? " He was stunned . Is this girl crazy??

"Kriya wo meri girl-friend " she interrupted.

"Mujhe jaana .. "and she ran to the road side to throw up. Rey handed her water from his car and gathered her in arms as she started feeling dizzy.

" Mera saath rehna Rey " he heard her mumble while he was placing on the bed.

He smiled and caressed her forehead and left with a single look.


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"I am sorry sameer. I shouldn't do this to you. Already you are broken, but still mai tumse ek help chahungi" Neha said feeling guilt already building in her.

"Kya hai bolo "his voice was break.


"kal usse call karke batadena ki you are breaking up with her, reaso kuch mat bolo and I will make sure Rey won't reach you . He gave a are you serious look but sighed seeing her pleading eyes.

"Fine!!But you sure na Kriya aur Rey love each other?? "he asked.

"100% " Neha said.

"Okay then " he said and left..

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He was doing his pushups when he heard his mobile ring. He thought of ignoring but the ringtone said who the caller was. He wiped his sweaty hands and grabbed the mobile,

"Hello Kriya?? " he asked throwing the towel aside on the bed.

"Rey?? "


He stiffened. His heart started beating fast.

"Kriya ?? kya hua?? " he panicked.

"Rey .. please aao " she hiccuped and he was already on his way to her home.

She ended the call soon after saying those words and threw the phone slightly beside her . She pulled her knees closer and cried.

"He just can't do that to me!! " she sniffed again.

He called out loud entering her house.

" Rey ?? " her dad asked wondering. "itni subah?? " he asked but Rey is not in a position to explain.

"Uncle Kriya kaha hai?? "he asked and was shown her room.

He rushed and opened the door , the room was empty. He was about to leave when he heard sobs. He bang opened the bathroom door to see her cuddling in a corner , gone all red due to crying. His heart winced to see her like this. He hugged her first kneeling before hr when she let her heart out.

"Kya hua Kriya?? " he was almost shivering.

" Sameer broke up with me Rey , aur wo bolta hai reason bhi kuch nahi.. aise hi break up karna chahta hai " she cried hard. He hugged her tight. But folded his palms into tight fists. He will just take the shit out of him .He was about to go when she held his hand.

" Please don't go !! Please"his heart cried seeing her this weak.

"Please mat jao.. I am scared tum bhi wapas mere paas nahi aaoge " she cried.

"Kriya kaisi baatein kar rahi ho " he would never in dreams think of leaving her alone.

" I don't know, tum pehle ki tarah nahi ho, tum mujhe ignore kar rahe ho, you like me no more " she cried hard.

" It's not like that Kriya " he tried to convince.

" Kya nahi Rey?? Isn;t it you who pushed me out and broke all the threads?? " She looked away , she just can't digest the fact that he is now more her friend.

He sighed. Cuped her face and made her look at him.

"I don't know ye sahi time hai ya nahi, tum ye bhi soch sakti ho ki I am taking advantage, but ye sach hai ki I can never think of leaving you kriya... because I love you !! Lately I realized this , mai tumhe batane hi wala tha ki you accepted Sameer's proposal. I just can't complicate everyone's lives Kriya . Isiliye I asked you to leave that day . But I swear, I can never leave you alone, not because I love you, you are my first and best friend. " He said looking into her eyes. She was balnk. She looked at him blank. What was she supposed to do now/?? One rejected and other expressed his love. What is going on with her life. She had no clue.

"I know, ab tumhe ye sab batake I confused you more. I am sorry Kriya " he said looking down and stood up to leave. But he felt her hand holding his. He looked at her but she was looking down at the floor , tears coming out of her eyes. He sighed. She now wanted a best-friend and he will be that. He sat beside her when she tugged his arm placed her head on his shoulder as always and closed her eyes.

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It's been a month after he confessed his feelings. That was the last time he spoke with her. He hated himself more for that . He gulped down another glass.He shouted irritated hearing the doorbell.

"koun hai?? "he barked.

"Rey ?? " he sparng up on his feet . Is she for real?? He got to see her right now.


His eyes longed to see her for long. And finally they are having a closer look at her. She fidgeted with her handbag and was saying something but Rey is too high to hear those or to rightly say too lost in her to listen.

"Rey maine bohut socha.. I don't know mai tumhare baare mei kya sochti hun.. mera intention tumhe hurt karne ka nah. I would love to give us a try. Because tumhare alawa mera aur koi close nahi. But still I am not sure whether I love you or not. Mere feelings ke.. "she was speaking when he suddenly cupped her face and thrashed his lips on her's kissing her hungrily. Aaahhh , how much he missed her. But as realization stuck him he pulled back.

"Sorry Kriya , I swear it was not intentional, I am really.. " now it was his time to be taken by surprise when she pulled him into a kiss kissing him softly.

He groaned louder at the feeling he is feeling in his chest and pulled her more close exploring her sweet flavour .


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I know it sucks!! But it ends here... hope you like!!😊

-deetha


Edited by -Blind.Dance- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
kya milega res karke???
babaji ka thullu... 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome os
do update nxt part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting... pls update the rest...
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Posted: 11 years ago
updated on page 41 in two posts
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Posted: 11 years ago
SuPab os love it love how krias behaviour was
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Posted: 11 years ago
OS 10-

fabulous OS.. Actually I love these "PYAAR DOSTI HAI" type concepts.. It provokes me to think maybe our ArSha also have chances to be a couple someday! ;)

in this OS, I loved Kria's character a lot.. Tom-Boyish, Confused, Sassy Girl..

Felt bad for Sameer, he was a good guy n really loved Kria.. but
how can he have her when KriYaansh r destined to be together!? :P

Finishing was great..
Luvd d whole story..

Waiting for d next one
Edited by --Shukti-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
All the OSs r fantastic
I loved 1,2,4,5,8 the most
Last OS is awesome too
Friendship to Love- amazing journey
post next os soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
unressed page 41... above ur 2nd post!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was something real!!
something which took me to another world!!
KR bonding, so very beautifully described!!
Their frndship, their pains, their comfort.. Everything jst truely of the world!!
I lyked Sameer character too!!
Rey confession was treat to read!!
n at last Kria gave thm a chance!!
full of emotions and feelings!!
loved it!!

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