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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'm scared to even post this chapter! Just pasted the draft on the word document and guess what I did?? ITS page 9 and I still have to write more to complete the chapter' which means from page 1-9 I wrote bull shit and wat not... Omggg this is crazyyy I am not writing anything... And can't paste it her cuz it's not finished n out of order.. Well I wrote different sections in different day so it's scattered together :/
So if I finish it today then u will get the update or wait till Monday cuz I have zillions HW to do.. Best case possible bhul jaooo one mistake will save my life :) NOTE
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I don't know what's happening there... I want an uPdate. I need an update!! 😭
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Chapter 27 part 1

I'm holding my ears and apologizing to everyone for delaying the update. Therefore, dedicated to the ones who ate my brain by constant chanting "where is the Update? Give us update" :p
Life is a mess! College is a pain and now big boss voting are pouring the oil on my fire. I really don't know wat I wrote, so if u find it clich, lame and stupid then I don't blame u cuz it is one. So I won't recommend u to read, however if u r naive then u may phir na kehna ke bola nehi!

Recap:
Finally after all the pain and torment everything got back in track! Jeremy is in jail, virat and manvi became friends. No misunderstanding or any grudges. Everything was going perfect until her phone ranged! Figure out wat this evil mind has stored for you.

Still in Los Angles, CA

Manvi's POV (she is talking to you)

"I think you should rest.. Don't call the cab, I will drop you off" - virat

can this day get any better than this? Things that shouldn't be falling apart just crushed on the ground.
Little piece of advice to all: always KEEP UR DAMN PHONE on SILENT MOOD cuz that bitchy thing ruins every special moment.
Virat was about to kiss me, but that phone ranged n Urghhh like wat a timing man! I'm gonna crush it right now, although I love it so much. But wait why should I do that when I am my own enemy. I shall hang myself right?

That call was form my travel agency. They booked my flight ticket for today at 7 pm and wanted my confirmation. How sweet isn't it??? Oh no don't hate them cuz it's my fault too. I told them to give me the next available boarding pass, so I can run away from this scary place. Well it was before I got to know about Jeremy's Crooked plan n that time I never knew everything is gonna be OK n now I really don't wanna go...Why? Cuz of that Virat Singh Vadhera, the ultimate Bad Boy.

U all know na what kind of feelings I have for Him? Sure u do. Virat is a shrewd corrupted blood sucking crazy monster, who loves to spin people like a windmill. A self centered hitler, control freak n moreee
Are you confused? U sudnt be surprised cuz that's what he is, a very bad mean man.

He wanted a new start right? Is this how you start a new relation? Make your friend embarrass, fool her, make her feel guilty n lastly give an heart attack? Well almost *sighs* I mean who jokes about spending the night with a girl like that??
Urghhh hate him so much can't even explain. Wanna burn him to hell if it's possible.

U remember He described a witch few mins ago? The swiping witch? I think he forgot to mention that it was him. Don't laugh ok, I'm very serious about this fact. He knows black magic n Virat Singh Vadhera is a bloody witch! *breaking news*

Don't know how he do it, but he have that special possessing power that controls my brain. I can't think properly nor can do any action to protect myself from his evil traps. He is doing the actions and i am baring the consequences. U saw the Live example today! I was foolish enough to believe in him and his idiotic acts that I didn't think twice before falling for it.

Am I complaining too much? No na... He is an insane creature who is making me extra crazy. How will I handle him in future if he acts so unnatural n be the crooked kind?? Future... Don't know what it will be but just don't want it to be a glass house where a rack can shatter the whole world
I feel like I'm having muti-personality disorder! Don't you think? I really don't know what's happening to me.. I just know I hate him n like him too. His behavior, attitude, charm and way of handling situation is very overwhelming and impact full. It won't be wrong if I say I'm tripping over him each passing moment.

Last night will be an unforgettable night for me. Everything was falling apart and I wanted someone to hug me tightly n console me by saying "everything will be fine. All the pain, torment and suffocation that I have been going through or bared since the beginning will go away n happiness will knock my door once again."
I was frustrated, heartbroken and was lost completely. Thankfully god sent him back to me as my savior, who ceased my agony, anguish and suffrage by comforting me in his warm embrace. He was there for me when I needed a shoulder to cry on!
I can't even express how I felt when he gave me that special hug n crushed me under his strong arms. I didn't mind surrendering myself to him, cuz His outrageous heartbeats were making me anxious. I felt like they were calling my name each passing second while it paced up its speed. I cud feel the affection and every nerve of my body was loving it *ultimate heaven*
That moment of time, I knew he was the one who will be my prince charming n I will be his little princess, for whom he will turn the world upside down to just see my smile.
Sounds like a fantasy world right? But It wud have been a one sided feeling if he won't have kissed me. His kiss was the proof of my believe, and I didn't need anything after he cleared my confusion. Therefore, I let go of everything that stopped me from letting out my frustration n cried out endlessly. Even the morning was perfect. I wanted him to be beside me and I got it. It wasn't a fairy tale but real.

However, "happy moments has a temporary liability" n today I wanna bang the person whoever created that idiom, cuz he himself cursed that moment n ruined it for us.
Now I'm stuck here thinking wat to do. I don't wanna go back, but how can I stay here either? He didn't propose me, neither I know if he loves me the way I do to him. He is unpredictable n I'm having a hard time to understand him.
Do U know how it feels when u are in front of a well, dying out of thrust and there is no bucket to fetch that water? My situation is similarly to that. I wanna stay here but I can't express it. He should know na n stop me right? After all he is a boy n first approach should be from his side. Right?

[evil mind falls from the couch n dies out of laugh]


Manvi's trails of thought came to an end, when her phone begin to ring again :p

She was about to blast at the caller, but her lips curved into a bright smile scanning the caller id's name as "Monster Vadhera"
She was imagining something n forgot to receive the call and few mins later!

"ouch" she placed her palm on her behind cuz some pointy nails (pitchfork) pricked her bum . She turned around instantly wondering wat it was n found virat stood straight, composing a deadpan look and gazing her intensely

She scanned him from top to bottom n was just stunned to see him wearing a black long robe whose hood hid his messy hear, but she cud recognize his devilish horns and he was holding his red pitchfork proudly like Hades. (I wrote this long back n today actually got to see Kushal wearing those devil crown holy smokeee!!! I'm loving it!)

V- "were u bad mouthing me???" >_< stomped the fork on the ground! His eye became red

M- Blinked thrice. Watching him as if he was an alien.

V- he looked down then right back up
"what are you looking at?" *evil grin*

M- "You look..." dazzled by his charm

V- "looking sexy right?" walking around her, making a circle and smirking devilishly

M- she turned her head looking at his direction, still unable to register wats going on

V- stopped n asked her vigorously forming a coarse tone "I have been calling you since 15 mins now? Wat were you doing? sleeping?"

M- "no.." nodded her head n her surrounding begin to flame with fire.

V- "no? >_< you know na I hate waiting.. So be ready for ur punishment" he hold the pitchfork against her throat

M-"wait no.." clasped the fork trying to remove it
" not my fault.. I was just.."

V- "too bad" n just stabbed the fork inside Her throat.. Blood begin to drip down from her neck.

M- "aaa" she screamed out loud n fell on the ground.
Thankfully didnt hurt her head but was close enough though. She checked her throat n found it perfectly fine n was like "I'm aliveee...ouch... Oh god how did I fall? was I day dreaming? Gosh so delusional..I hate you virat" got up carefully *shakes head*


[Told you before it's lame! Don't read anymore]

Few mins later her phone ranged again. She unlocked the screen and IT WAS HIM

M- :O looked around just to make sure she wasn't dreaming again, n answered him calmly "hey.."

V- "black or pink ?" asked her in sporty manner.
M- "huh?"
V- "come back to earth my highness, I asked black or pink?"
M- "virat... What black or pink?"
V- "walk toward ur bed"
M- "what??"
V- "good grief! I am making an appointment with a doctor for you. Hope he doesn't say ur ear bubbles are damaged foreva" chuckled at his own words
M- "viraaat" >_< raised her voice a bit
V- "making me ur deaf partner? I guess we'll look cute together wearing damage goods n then begging for food? I want the silver bowl ok?"
M- "what's wrong with you?" asked him being agitated n confused too
V- "turn around!"
M- huh?
V- turn ur body 180 degree angle and look straight! If you don't know what that means then u are very weak at geometry. I shall admit you to an adult preK school. *sighs*

M- "r you kidding me." said roughly, huffing a bit
V- can't u just listen without making a complain? I feel like a complain box *sighs*

She crumbled her knuckles n gritted her teethes (about to pull his hair type posture)

V - are you in restroom? Did I call u on wrong time? R u having constipation problems?
I kept your medicines inside the side table...the stomach cramp one.

M- "oh my gosh can you please stop it" said aggressively

V- "oh.. I guess it's not that then mmm are you practicing for delivering a baby? If so then Breath in breathe out. Relax urself... You want me to whistle for you? Will that help?"

M- "go to hell" gritting her jaw
V- "only if u you accompany me" :D
M- urghhh
V- "no pressure, do it slow. Push manvi push" chuckled
M- stayed silent suppressing her temper n laughter too.
V- I guess hogaya... ? U feeling better?
M- will you shut up!
V- I really didn't have to do all this lame talks, if u wud have answered me properly
M- closed her eyes, self peace. Said normally "wat do you want?"
V- not you for now :/.
M- :o >_< "bye"
V- "hey wait wait wait... Acha suno.."said politely
M- exhaled a deep breath n said "I will butcher your face if you start ur nonsense again."

V- "ooo scared lol.. Pehle batao pink or black?"
M-"shut up!! Good bye" screamed at him than hung up the phone."
Urghhh... Why are you so annoying virat??? Why did he call though?? Wat the hack was black or pink? And why did I cut the call? Manvi u idiot... Again I screwed up...grrr

V- smirked n grinned while looking at the phone screen.

"pack that black one please" he requested the salesman.

1/2 hr later

Knock knock
M- "coming" she went up and opened the door. No one was there except a big box placed by the door mat about 3 feet tall wrapped in pink gift wrapping paper.

M- "ummm hello??? Anybody there??" Looking around
"gift?" checking out the box.

There was a card which stated "Don't get confused and wonder about me, just open the box then you will see. Hopefully u'll like it, and won't return back to me"

M- smiled slightly n dragged the box inside her room. Got the scissors n opened the wrapper. And thadaaa it was a huge black luggage.
"Luggage?"*confused

"like it?" a voice over distracted her thinking

She turned around n saw Virat was standing against the side wall, curving his lips to a half smile n a mischief grin.

M- "what is this?"
V- drink Horlics manvi, your IQ level is decreasing each passing hour.
M- >_< placed her hands on her hip n narrowed her eye brows.
V- chuckled at her tantrum and came forward, bend down, took out her own luggage from underneath the bed.

M- "what are you doing?"
V- "I guess you didn't know that your luggage was broken"
M- "what!" :O
V- 'wat' nehi 'how' yeh poocho.
M- *confused*
V- "well I kinda messed with it that day" caressed his neck, feeling slightly guilty.
M- you touched my luggage! >_<
V- apparently I did I had no choice you know!
M- when did u do this?
V- "this topic can halt for later .. For now u sud..Wow what is this." He picked up her white bathrobe
M- :O put that back
V- he was examine it.. "Do u think I will fit in? I sud right? " purposefully said so she can remember that day *wink*
M- Virat vadhera put my stuff back!
V- warna kya.. Picked her nighty
M- "stop touching my stuff.. That's so rude n shameless of you"
V- "well better then not touching you" raised his eye brow n smirked
"Waise yeh acha hai.. U will look cute.." Begin to take out her cloths
M- what the... Wat are you doing?
V- helping u to clean ur luggage
M- I don't need u... I can do it by myself.. Stop annoying me
V- oh am I irritating u? I thought I was helping you to pack ur stuff.. Your flight is in 3 hrs right? And I assume u haven't started your packing yet
M- remained silent
V- "hello" snapped her out
M- smiled slightly n said "don't worry about it. I'll do it"
V- "cool. Well then I shall go now.. Will pick u up at 5:30? Tab tak toh ready hojaogi na?"


M- "expect the unexpected! Flying too high may cause a great downfall. Never hope for the things that can't be yours" each word of his pricked her heart. She just stood numb n watched him with open dull eyes. Her heart sank and crushed into zillion pieces. Some parts of her body was aching, somewhere giving up. She didn't know how to react! I mean he is suppose to stop her not send her away! But now there is no hope. Everything feeling like a dream now.

{ awww how sad.. Bad boy humph... But don't worry he is more evil then you think I will make him one :p }

V- "ahem.. I guess you can say bye to ur fantasy land n definitely say hello to reality Miss Manvi." Offered her a cup of coffee

M- stood confused, starring at the mug and then him. "Coffee??"

V- "don't worry I didn't make it.. It's from Starbucks. Double chocolate chip frappuccino mocha with extra whip cream." Sipped 2 shots

M- was still trapped inside her confused bubble. "When did he get the time to buy the coffee and why can't she remember anything? What the hell is going on?"

V- "previously wen your tube light was OFF I served the coffee, now when it's ON don't be so lost minded that I have to cook a meal for u"

M- bit her lip n closed her eyes "what's wrong with u manvi... How can u be so lost that u had no clue when he did all this?? Get over it.. Forget him" her mirror image suggested

V- are you okay? You seem so lost..

M- took a deep breath and relaxed her mind, flashed a fake smile n said "I'm fine.. But I thought you were leaving"

V- I was but then thought u forgot ur courtesy
M- excuse me?
V- "u are not excused!"
M- rolled her eyes.
V- "well neither u offered me to sit down nor u asked me for a coffee, so I thought y not do it by myself?"

M- "umm..I'm sorry.. I was.."

V- "chill I was just joking. Btw only 2 hrs left b4 we head toward the airport so let's not waste the time with the sorries n thank u's."

M- nodded her head slightly
He was babbling more and she just agreed to it. In between he use to check the time and remind her about her flight. Each time he mentioned "Airport" her heart lost its beat.. She tried her best to not to show her actual emotion, but her heart beak was clearly visible in her angelic eyes which he did "ignorance is a bliss" n continued behaving odd. It was the 10th time when he mentioned airport or about her leaving which pissed her off. But she was staying calm n controlling her rage. It felt like he was saying those on purpose or he was naive to even understand what she wanted. Finally the clock ticked 5 o clock. Manvi went up to the sink n was washing the cups when suddenly virat stood behind her.

M- turned around n got scared finding him so close to her face
V- "I forgot to ask you something."
M- pushed him a little then slid aside moving toward the sofa "you cud have asked me ur question while sitting over there"
V- I cud have but then u won't have given me the right answer.
M- halt her move but didn't turn. "ask wat?"
V- "you know me and you.. Is there anything that you are not comfortable to share? "
M- turned around facing him
V- smirked
M- raised her eye brows "get to the point"
V- step forward n asked "what happen that night"
M- which night?
V- "that crazy night when we were together." stepping forward
M- "what are you talking about?" stepped back, keeping the distance.
V- he decreased her distance and stood straight leaving 3 inches gap in between "the night when I wore ur PINK bathrobe, sprayed ur perfume and then slept in ur bed!!!" *wink*
M- cudnt move further cuz her legs hit the couch.
V- "I'm sure it was an interesting night...don't you think" bending little closer leading her to fell on the couch
M- was starring him being dumbfounded.
V- he lean beside her ear and whispered" I wish u had little more time to tell me about that night" n lightly kissed her cheek before stepping back.
M- look down and then right back up. Trying to read him but failed as usual.
V- checked his watch n said "it's 5:15 now... I'll pick u up at 6! Be ready if u don't wanna miss your flight. Adios!" Winked n finally left her room


| whatever u read doesn't make sense right? Don't worry he will tell you why he did wat he did... Wait for Virat's Pov :p |

Virat's room
He was lying on the bed, starring at the celing n was playing with a small jewelry box. Few moments later he Opened the box n smiled while caressing the small heart shaped pendant.
"Our life is like a wind! What is store for our future is unpredictable, but choosing the right decision for the bright future is in our hand. Today whatever will happen won't be regrettable but will be worth remembering. Hope I'm right if no then I have tomorrow to fix the damage. But for now it's time to get ready... Time to see off someone right ?:p

V- quickly took a shower n now was fixing his hair while mumbling "khali pili khali pili rok neka nai... Tera picha karu toh tok neka nei...Tu mere agal bagal hai mai Tere agal bagal hu" (I like that song so haha)

Do I have to say wat manvi is feeling at this moment ?? No na ...Saving ur time.. She is holding her tears n packing her cloths... Bechari



CONTINUE BELOW :p
Edited by Faria12345 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2 is on page 15! The length was big so had to post on that page :)
Edited by Faria12345 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww Virat I think I know why he's doing all this but I'll leave it for later.
He stabbed her with a fork OMG Virat what is he doing. Kamina.

Poor Manvi wanting to stay but not knowing where she stands with Virat and being the girl not wanting to make the move and get rejected.

And I'm not liking how you conveniently are not letting us know what is happening in the future.

So how long do we have to wait for the next update, and this Virat is becoming really weird, is it because he wants to show that he doesn't care that she's going away when he obviously does.

unres soon and I should have res twice too.
Edited by NushIsh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res...will write after reading part 2 of it for timebeing let uwknw it wasnt bad at all i liked it! Man tis virat is seriously cray bt i love him
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey it was so much fun..😆...Virat is so much fun n hilarious 🤣...
had a blast reading it.😛...don't understand y u said its not good ...😕😕
i know poor manvi is not able to with stands his spontaneous humor...😉
but yaar it so awesome ...loved it❤️ ...gr8 job👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tina25198

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="7" color="#ff00ff">hey it was so much fun..😆...Virat is so much fun n hilarious🤣...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="7" color="#ff00ff">had a blast reading it.😛...don't understand y u said its not good ...😕😕
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="7" color="#ff00ff">i know poor manvi is not able to with stands his spontaneous humor...😉</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="7" color="#ff00ff">but yaar it so awesome ...loved it❤️ ...gr8 job👍🏼👍🏼</font>



Thank you darling :) appreciated but it's below the average.. U guys r being extra nice which is not good! :D don't spoil me cuz then I will do nothing but bull crap :p
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i am gonna kill u faria u say ur updates r nt worth reading..this is the final warning to u...😡
anyways update was superb as usual i liked it a lot..

update the second part of it tomw...kal tal i can wait bt nt more than that...u will have to update it tomw dat too a longer 1...

plzzz
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Originally posted by: NushIsh

Awww Virat I think I know why he's doing all this but I'll leave it for later.

He stabbed her with a fork OMG Virat what is he doing. Kamina.

Poor Manvi wanting to stay but not knowing where she stands with Virat and being the girl not wanting to make the move and get rejected.

And I'm not liking how you conveniently are not letting us know what is happening in the future.

So how long do we have to wait for the next update, and this Virat is becoming really weird, is it because he wants to show that he doesn't care that she's going away when he obviously does.

unres soon and I should have res twice too.



Pitch fork wala toh dream tha na :p well I wanted to show since she saved his name as monster vadhera toh thora example toh dena tha na.
Just so you know he will be jerk n pester manvi a lot .. She will be confused just like u all n his acts will be stupid yet smart. He thinks in a weird way but right way.. Am I confusing you? Sighs wait karo next update ka.. Have to write a whole summary for why he did wat he did! Tum sab mer jaan lekar choroge !!
Future buhahahaah don't worry next update is alll future :p

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