Index - ARSHI FF - DARK TORMENT - Page 14

Well! For the first time since I joint IF in december last year, only for IPKKND I am without words... not speachless but really no words there to type a comment! I've read all chapters in one go. Uff.. It was sometimes really hard for me to read further.. but somehow I've managed it! I need to say that you are an excellant writer, dear! Your words are well taken and you made me feel every pain and hurt of every character... By now it took me several attemps to write this comment!... I really wanted to wrote you because this work of yours is a very unique one. Thanks a lot for sharing your FF with us 👏Take care, Chanya.

Thank u so mch for link n its amzing to hv DT

What a story.After a long time came across such mind blowing, heart wrenching, immencely intence story, which with its all elememnt never lost the ground realities.
Read all parts in one go
Hope that u continuous writing in future
God Bless U 😃

The most heart rendering story of realisation I have ever come across. It was too late when realisation actually dawned upon him. She was already gone and when she closed the translucent windows of her eyes, even the doors of his sanity closed, as he desperately waited for her to call him to her, to tell him that she was always his...

I just read DT in a go. It was a bit confusing at first. But towards the end, ive understood everything..

The ending is justified.!
In fact I was hating when Khushi started responding to Arnav!
You're right. His realization is too late.
Khushi killing herself with the child is better than living with him!

If crimes like this are forgiven, then there no meaning to tolerance of Khushi!

He jailed NK to give justice to Khushi,
when the child inside Khushi is the proof of the same thing done by him!
Why not punish himself too

Wow emotional but I think that's the best ending for this story, it wud never have a happy ending cuz Arnav was way too cruel n ur r rite there is no excuse for rape and that too repeatedly. He take too long to realize this fault and ask for forgiveness. I get angry when some writer ignore this fact that one sorry and a little repentance is fine. Well it's fictional but I dnT accepted it. U really did justice to the story even tho I dnT like khushi suscide but yet again she is 17 yrs and that is reality to some of our girls together. Even tho I think Arnav deserve more to do that to khushi. But amazing writer everything aren't fairy tale n happy ending

Read it in one go. Its heartbreakingly touching. u have written an amazing story. Thanks again for not destroying the essence of the story by fitting a happy ending

Amazing story!!! Very very different!!! Great work!!!

Wow! I found this half an hour back and was on my nerves all the time while reading it! You had my hair standing at my nape! Glad to have had her revenge. Thankfully, I can sleep now.