Index - ARSHI FF - DARK TORMENT - Page 13

oh my dayz what a story absolutly brilliant! im all for happy endings but i guess i didnt want it here im totally rattled and you are a fantastic writer well done :)

omg i want to cry after reading this ...
first time when i came across this story i cod nt read it and today i went through the whole story ...
for ur writing million likes ... and im having serious heart ache right now o my this is the ever dark arnav i have seen truly dark

a brave attempt on ur part to write on such topic

Definitely one of the best pieces of work on India Forums

What a Total Blast this FF is is!!!

this was an amazing story

awesome ff...

i love it...

its different from others...

Just finished reading all chapters and would say Welldone

You have portrayed each character very well and explained the issue in a very different way .

But very sad ff but thanks for writing on arhi

M speechless...dis is epic...perfect ending for dis dark tale.read da whole ff in one go under my duvet.da ending cudnt hv got any better...seriously hw cn khushi find a lover a husband in her rapist...who manipulated her n madeher believe dt she had askd for it...im very disappointd wiz a few frnds of m9 who while watching or reading such things r of da opinion dt da grl shud accept da guy in her lyf coz according to dem his tearful I love u r enuff to wash away all da grief n pain he hs givn to his victim..and acc to sum sick minded ppl da guy is hot and da grl shud rush into his arms readily..as for nk, his father hd totally ruined his psycholopsychology.child abuse is heinous crime..look wt damage it did u not only nk alone but to odaz associated wiz him.m glad dt lavanya garima n shashi found their peace.as for asr he had enuff tym on earth aftr khushiz death to repent n redeem.and aftr hving his share of pain grief torment angst n pain he finally found his peace his khushi his lost baby..I felt bad a t da death of unborn child.but den it was better for its own sake.a destroyed mother a damaged uncle and totally ruined father grand parents murdered in cold blood by uncle aunt lav dead coz of father uncle abused by grandfather...wudnt it affect his psychology.

oh my God.. this broke my heart.. its truly disturbing.. i shudder to think about such occurrences in real life..
i cannot imagine an Arshi story in this way... i cannot picture a really cruel and wicked Arnav.. i cannot believe the evil to be inherent in him.. he is also a victim of circumstances.. i prefer to think even he should be granted a chance at redemption...
and Khushi is an innocent... i like to think she gets a happy ending... in this story, she is denied everything except pain...
and the baby...
this is a really dark one... and no happy ending... u wrote well, it really shakes up the reader and gets us to think of all those rape victims...
i m too shaken up to give more detail about my current thought processes..
i would love to read more of your writings.. if possible some not-so-dark stories... and some happy endings...