ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 5 - COMPLETED - Page 54

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Posted: 12 years ago
what tradition hmmm love this...😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
unres page 71...

part 2,3, 4

awesome amazing update...!!!!!!!!!!!!!
arnav love teasing khsuhi.. loved their poolside romance...
arnav has kept fast for same reasons...
kaka told them their childhood story.. loved mandir scene..
waiting for more...for annual AR party...
thank u for maha update..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow what a Lovely Maha update it was Breathtaking
I had smile all the time when i was reading this update😃
Its really very beautifullly written
Loved the whole update too much
Kaka praised khushi for keeping the tradition
Payal and Khushi's convo was so sweet atlast Khushi come to know about his hospital visit secret and he cares for her too much
Wow so you brought ladoos back finally she remembered the ladoos
Arnav was missing her remembering their morning encounter
Khushi"s aap outside and tum in private is really sweet😊
Loved the way Arnav tease her her blushing and and his tease are so romantic
Arnav again caught her that she get affacted by him around😉
And he enjoyed teasing her he knows that she is drooling over his lips and after so long he laugh by heart
And their talk about fast was superb lovely
Love you for writting such a beautiful convo between them
Their poolside conve was really funny about diapers🤣
But when Khuhsi told him that she love his signature Arnav's blush was amazing
Loved that they talk about emails
And that mehandi scene was awesome
Arnav very nicely hide his hurt to saw someone else name in his wife's hand
At the time of Arthi he did come and the way she held him and was there for him was very emotional
So finally Arnav also know the ladoo story
And Khushi get her reward by two kisses...☺️ wow
Thanks for such a Lovely ,Beautiful ,Romantic Sweet mhah update
Love you too much for such a long update 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry I was late for commenting ...wonderful chapter...some thing shifting between them and we are feeling happiness thinking about it...loving the story
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Posted: 12 years ago
woowww..it was so amazing and beautifully written.in love with it...plz update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...lloved it...khushi seemed more frustrated than arnav...wish she will kiss him first
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
fabulous update.arnav slowly changing for kushi n in that process kushi too changing...loved that arnav kissed her after he came to know abt laddoo story..but why kushi put nk s name in her hand when she is fasting for arnav n their family.its really not possible to forget 8 yrs of love...hope she will understand his love for her soon..poor arnav disappointed but he managed...superb maha update
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Posted: 12 years ago
i am a silent reader and always stalking ur thread for updates .sorry for not commenting for these many chapters .
but u are one commendable writer.i just love this story and the way u r slowly and steadily building each situation for the couples to fall in love is just so wonderful.

the chemistry u create is so fabulous and one can easily drift into imagination while reading those updates.

thank you for such a heart warming update.

i ll be a regular fan of urs to comment on each update.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Di. I loved the update. Baad mein aake comment doon kya? Err I don't want to talk crap like last time. :p

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