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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow, wow, wow. This chapter touched the bottom of my heart. I can feel them. It seems I was there with them. lovely talks, caring and amazing moment after learning the truth of Laddoos. 👏👏🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh wow what update yaar...dil garden garden ho gaya
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update. loved it. they are getting close and they teasing.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww loved it
They came very far now
Loved the ladoo part
Thanks kaka for reveling the truth
as He had remind them about there kiss also
Awesome update
Loved it
Update next soon
Edited by aayesha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...one of the best update of yours till date.. such an emotional and sentimental update.. loved kaka for exposing their childhood affairs.. i like this arnav and khushi very much. worth the wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey...just completed reading ur ff ...its superb, amazing
Simply loved it
Continue soon & plz do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful part
thanks for the pm
Twinkle
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow a 4 part mahaupdate :) :)
loved hw khushi understands tht arnav is just trying to run away frm his loss... hoping tht it wud ease out his pain.. tht he has no issues with rituals, with food.. with anythg atall... his only prob is.. tht he is still nt able to come to terms with the loss n the change tht 1 moment brought in his life...

loved this I am the free one from the "Buy One Get One Free" offer .. me n my husband we too hv a lot of common frnds.. n they too tend to tease me similar ways.. i m soo going to use this line next time :) :)

I am glad he forced me into this marriage. Otherwise it would have been my biggest loss.

love tht line... simply shows tht she understands n accepts the positives of her present.. n her life with arnav... she values him n respects him equally... n probably... she trusts his decisions as well.. mayb if need b.. sometime in future.. she wud blindly trust his opinion.. rather than fight it out.. or question him..

khushi especially really sounds so like the best frnd of her husband :) .. the way she calls him names.. cribs abt him behind his bak.. fights with him :) :) .. she is too cute :)

loved the fact tht in a simple discreetion of 'aap' and 'tum' she shows clearly to arnav.. tht she has certain thgs which r only fr him to knw.. tht noone else is privy to some aspects abt them.. n abt her.. n love the fact tht he knws it n values it too :)

Jaake phir do ghante baad aaon? soo like a frndly banter .. :) :) ... be it between clg frnds or couples who r frnds :) :) .. very cute :)

her blabbering after giving him tea :) tht was too cute :) :) .. n the best part was he heard it :) .. though i was wondering.. hw come khushi was soo oblivious to movement soo close to her.. bt then.. mayb she was too lost :) :) in trying to avoid his lips :) :)

n arnav.. loved it this time.. finally u understand tht she is getting effected... tht she has started noticing 'thing' abt u :) .. n u tk up the chance to tease her :)
well u might nt knw dear.. bt arnie has started peeping out frm behind tht 3-piece suit :) :)
n quite effortlessly too :) :)

n his laugh.. well fr someone who hasnt laughed in a long time.. it wud b quite a sound to his own ears, n to the others arnd him too :)

n aaww.. embarrassed arnav :) :) hahaha :) .. only khushi can do tht i guess :) .. n well she is definitely nt going to leave a chance to figure out the truth, especially abt u arnav.. since u sure try n keep everythg a secret.. fr nw atleast.. n she seems to b out thr to unravel every single one of them :) :)
good luck khushi :)

like most of their conversations by the pool side... this too was gd... revealing a lot to each other.. mking them more comfy with each other.. n breaking those unseen barriers a little more :)

the entire signature part was cute :) .. him trying to teach her to forge his signature was just too too gd.. i dont knw if khushi realises.. or even if arnav does... bt to me.. this is a simple gesture showing hw much he trusts her.. hd it been anyone else... they wud hv thot atleast once, bt he didnt.. he just went ahead trying to teach her the one thg tht was nt rt.. so tht she can forge it completely n properly.. :) :)
i think tht was a very very beautiful way of showing hw much faith arnav has in khushi... especially considering tht as on date.. money n business is wht he thinks is most imp...

n here too she understands his unspoken reasons soo well.. she understood tht he was just trying to shut out his normal self.. his fun side... n so he didnt chk tht mail id either...

n arnav-torture sequence too was gd.. it wud really b gd to hv khushi stick arnd him, i m sure he too wudnt mind tht a bit :) :) ... no matter wht he says.. he wud love to b tortured by her :) irrespective of how many punishemnts they give each other.. which actually just end up being another way to tease each other :)

n the mehndi ... aww :) :) ... i m sure both r upset tht she had to b fooled in her life like tht.. n both r glad tht she gt to knw the truth soon enuf... as of menhdi.. get it done again n again.. n again.. :) :)... n live tht moment everytime :) ..

n the pooja sequence was realy heart-touching.. his pain.. the way he tries to fight it all.. his memories.. gd n bad .. his loss.. his pain.. his tears... n yet they flow out.. relents to stay fr khushi... fr her effort... n she understnads n tries to sooth him .. ease him thru it all...

beautiful :)

n finally arnav knows the legendary 'laddu-story' :) :) .. use it every chance u get arnav :) .. n y dont u just extend it to food too :) :) hahahaha :) khushi u r soo in trouble :) sweet one though :) :)

You will never be busy nor sleepy when it comes to me. When I say I wanna talk you, I wanna to talk to you and I expect you to drop everything else and come with me.

tht is another beautiful one.. just simple words.. tht show hw much rt he feels over khushi... he might still b conciously confused over wht she feels fr him.. bt sub-conciously.. he sure excersises all his rts :)

following traditions is gd arnav... mk some new ones too :) :)... i wud soo love seeing him mk new traditions.. to tease a bit more :) she sounds too cute whn teased :)

as of her cooking skills.. come on arnav.. u hv hd soo much to eat tht was cooked by her.. n still u hvnt realised it was her who send u food..
dhyan do thoda.. :) :)

waqt ne ek pal me cheena tha jo mujhse...
tu katra katra lauta rahi hai..
kho gae the jo aansu.. baha rahi hai..
bhool gae the jo hansi... fir aa rahi hai..
zindagi lagta hai jaise.. firse jeena sikha rahi hai :) :)


:) :) waiting fr next...

PS: thx fr writing soo gd :) .. i dont write until i feel sthg deep.. until sthg really touches my heart... n god i hv already written twice coz of this story :) :)



Edited by tanu3579 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
The update was fabulous
Really loved the update
U r a beautiful writer di
I love ur ffs
It was awesome . I don't even have d words to explain.
Finally they r coming closer to each other..
I loved the poolside scenes in the chapter...
Actualy I loved this mahaupdate
Update the next part soon
Will be waiting
And this for u
🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
@tanu3579
Lovely lines
waqt ne ek pal me cheena tha jo mujhse...tu katra katra lauta rahi hai..kho gae the jo aansu.. baha rahi hai..bhool gae the jo hansi... fir aa rahi hai..zindagi lagta hai jaise.. firse jeena sikha rahi hai :) :)
Really touched my heart
Keep it up

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