ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 5 - COMPLETED - Page 56

Originally posted by: jahnvi.luvs.ASR

the update started...

part 1 i was like ok now the fun begins...a bit of kaka and khushi and then khushi asking payal about arnav coming to office and then khushi making ladoos...with every post ending..i felt like update was ending but to my surprise next post has more update...i was like a child getting more n more but finally with post four it ended...i m sad yet happy...finally arnav understood that she is affected but his presence...n then the pooja scene...so beautifully written...REMARKABLE...m tongue tied...so now arnav knows about the ladoo story n he followed the tradition...

i thought that may be u wud include two scenes...

first khushi changing NK initial on her mehndi to A wid a pen...but then i thought it would be lame...

I did think about it but I thought it wouldnt suit their characters as both are very mature and practical in their own way. Thats why I made him just hide it with his thumb, totally ignoring it :)

then i thought after aarti she'll ask him to fill her parting...just like in the movie "jodha-akbar" the queen asks the maharaja to fill her maang...

Yeah I saw the video and I battled myself if I shud make him do that. But the entire sequence called for his battle of emotions and his grief. So I didnt wanna take away that importance. And moreover, I want him to fill her maang when they truly accept eachother as spouse more than friends. The day is not too far😉

loved the update...

PS i never ask this to anyone...but when are they going to kiss <embarrassed and blushing>

May be in next 2-3 chaps 😆😆😆 I loved ur PS note about it..Too cute!

Originally posted by: asthagarwal

Finally I get 2 read wat I ws longing 2 read d whole day...

I know sorry to make you wait yesterday. I was finishing up part 4 as promised Pooja.

Arnav was missing Khushi at d office n her presence... Awww... 😉

Aap n Tum wala part was beautiful... I luv dere d way dey tease each other... 😆

3D floral prints on LIPS???? 😲

Ye ladki mujhe AUR PERVERT bana k chodegi... As it is my mind is GUTTER... 😳

ROFL🤣

Arnav fasted wid her???? Thts so cuteee... 😃

Diaper talk, Seriously???? ☺️

I luvd d song Khushi sung implying its meaning on Arnav... 😃

Motichoor k laddu ki mystery solved... I'm so happy... 😃

I cn imagine hw flustered mst b Khushi... 😳

Wen Arnav tuk her 2 d pool area n switched off lights my heart was all going Dhak- Dhak wildly... ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Waise being a Besharam Bhukkad I was expecting more bt abhi k liye Cheek wala kiss se kaam chala lungi mai... 😳

Good for you..I dont want everything happen on the same night..I literally had to control my instincts to add more touchy touchy romance :)

Bt still I need more ACTION btwn dem... ☺️ 😳

I knw, its been really difficult 4 dem 2 keep dere hands off each other bt I WANT MORE... 😳😳😳

You will see more. I will def try :)

Luvd each n every part n detailing of d update... 😃

HATS OFF DI... Muahhh... 👏 👏 👏

Waise, Nxt update ab kab milega???

May be tomorrow!

Originally posted by: deepthiya

Originally posted by: asthagarwal

I knw, evn i had control my Besharam harmones... Fast wali nyt no touching, no touching... Only kissing, only kissing... Lmao... 😆

Tomorrow, R u serious????