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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dikshitamehta

@tanu3579
Lovely lines
waqt ne ek pal me cheena tha jo mujhse...tu katra katra lauta rahi hai..kho gae the jo aansu.. baha rahi hai..bhool gae the jo hansi... fir aa rahi hai..zindagi lagta hai jaise.. firse jeena sikha rahi hai :) :)
Really touched my heart
Keep it up



thank u :) :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update. I love their perfect characterization and the slow growth in their relationship.

One more things please dont get pressurised by readers view and go by what you want to tell..am loving it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
AMAZING AWESOME BEAUTIFUL CANT WAIT FOR MORE JUST LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH THE BEST EVER!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww.. the janmashtami celebrations were mesmerising! and so ws Arnav n Khushis sparkling chemistry..
How i loved Arnavz teases. the climax of the update had me in goosebumps yaar! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
fabulous updt
splendid
ds cud nt hav gotten any bttr
👏⭐️❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful Update :)
Love the convo between Payal and Khushi...so Khushi is trying to know about Arnav's feelings.
And only for Arnav she tried to make mattichoor ke Ladoo..so sweet...Her parent must be happy for her..
Arnav teases to Khushi part is awesome..he is always looking for a chance...naughty Arnav...so after so many years he started laughing...
And when Kaka told them about their childhood memories..tht part is so sweet..
Thanks for the Maha-episode...love it and waiting for next..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow awesome mahaupdate...
Beautifully written, excellent choice of song.👏
"3d picturization of lips" was hilarious. Khushi did not even realized what she said. 😛
The way they both are opening to eachother is wonderful. I hope Payal and akash's wedding ll bring them more close.
It's good Khushi is trying her level best to bring Arnav out of his own miseries.
Good going dear... Wanna read fast fast now.
So please update ASAP...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous Update!!! Loved it dear!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
together together...😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohhh its ok nice thought... hmmm

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