ArHi FF [ Fate's Deception ] Next thread link on pg 161 - Page 28

Originally posted by: amanzbajaj

[very interesting

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: sreemeera

Nice update.

Poor Khushi. That black bearded man will take Khushi to Arnav as in the prologue. What made Khushi on road at that time of night? Did her father believed Rani and threw her out of the house? Feel bad for her.

Thanks for the pm. Please pm me when you update.

Originally posted by: rumu

wow !!!! nice concept !!!!!!!!

i would really love to read more...

thanx for the pm 😊..

Originally posted by: honey-sweety

Wow loved the first part..

well written.

Originally posted by: the_breeze

Hey Maria!

Thanks a lot for your PM dear!

I definitely enjoyed both the prologue and the chapter...

What saddened me was that her father sold her off for a night to a complete stranger... But it was fate that the stranger turned out to be Arnav! 😳

The entire scene between those two was very well described... I love a feisty Khushi and a arrogantly confident Arnav!

So what I am excited about is the "Deception" you have planned!

Also dear, am randomly active on the forum so won't be able to comment regularly but rest assured I will take the effort to comment whenever I get the time..

Take care and continue soon! 😊

Originally posted by: pakpearl

Interesting start but I simply can't swallow...

How can a virgin girl be attracted towards a rapist...

I hope u'll not spoil the basic essence of Arhi's character !!!!!!!

Originally posted by: Chipmunks.

Update?

Originally posted by: katj

Interesting n something different concept

Originally posted by: Shaintini

Interesting concept dear. I loved it.
Thanx for the pm.