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meem17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#261

interesting
cant wait to see where u take this

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Cute6

@Cute6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#262

seems a fresh plot and story nice 1 would lyk to read more and see how the story unfolds..

thanx for the pm or else i would have not come across dis...

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desisweetheart9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#263

Thanks for the PM. Nice update.

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Parvathi Devi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#264

Wow loved the first part..

well written.

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the_breeze

@the_breeze

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Posted: 11 years ago

#265

Hey Maria!

Thanks a lot for your PM dear!

I definitely enjoyed both the prologue and the chapter...

What saddened me was that her father sold her off for a night to a complete stranger... But it was fate that the stranger turned out to be Arnav! 😳

The entire scene between those two was very well described... I love a feisty Khushi and a arrogantly confident Arnav!

So what I am excited about is the "Deception" you have planned!

Also dear, am randomly active on the forum so won't be able to comment regularly but rest assured I will take the effort to comment whenever I get the time..

Take care and continue soon! 😊

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pakpearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#266

Interesting start but I simply can't swallow...

How can a virgin girl be attracted towards a rapist...

I hope u'll not spoil the basic essence of Arhi's character !!!!!!!

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the_breeze

@the_breeze

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Posted: 11 years ago

#267

Hey Maria!

Thanks a lot for the PM dear!

I loved both the prologue and the first chapter... What saddened me though was that her father traded her off for a night... Now it was "Fate" that the stranger turned out to be Arnav... And I have a feeling that the step-mother won't allow Khushi to come back home again so maybe she will stay with Arnav!!!! (fingers crossed) but but but obviously there is gonna be a lot of stuff happening in between all this and I am excited to go on this journey!

What's more is that I am curious to see the "Deception" in store for us...

Anyway great beginning 👏

I gotta tell you that I am randomly active on the Forum these days what with my exams coming up so I wont be able to comment regularly but rest assured I will comment whenever I get the time..

take care 😳