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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshi67

Ridz, an excellent way of getting rid of the evil witch. You showed Arnav's dimaag was well switched on. Her turning up out of the blue was bound to raise an intelligent person's suspicion. I like how you've shown him to be as upset on behalf of Anjali as on behalf of Khushi. Just shouting and walking away was never the answer to deal with someone like Dadi. Good that he did some sleuthing and came to the correct conclusions.

I really liked how Arnav squeezed Khushi's hand before letting go. This simple gesture bringing with it a subtle reassurance that was lacking in the show. Yes he's going to his sister but silently telling her so.

And the neat turnaround of Dadi's infamous action was great. As you said, Anjali also has Raizada blood. Good to see it coming out!



Exactly, Ruchi. Arnav used to stand up to his Nani, fight with her for what he believed in. If he can do that with his mom's mom, who he respected and loved, it didn't make sense to me how placating he was towards his Dadi. I call BS on him 'respecting her age'.

Thanks for picking up on that. There is a balance Arnav needs to find, between his devotion to his Di and his love for Khushi. That's one slight way of doing that.

Haha. I had a good laugh while writing that line. God, that hand was annoying!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cosmina

great! i only wish the script was the same ,only for seeing Arnav angry at this dadi-Cruela! and for beeing so gentle with his wife

thank you for this Christmas present!



LOL. Cruela might be offended at being compared to Dadi!

Thanks :)



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Heavens_Flower

I like this version much better than the track...

This actually shows the intelligence of ASR and how aptly he handled the situation at the same time getting his families fullest support... Why could not the creative team of IPK think like this...







Get me a budget and access to the cast, Re Re. We will kick off BP with IPK Done Right! ;)

Thanks for the comment :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arhi_crazy

Ridzy
*bows down * to you
I just loved this one. ASR actually using his brains, taking actions rather than just shouting and yes like Ruchi said walking away, Anjali shown mentally strong and seeing her husband without her rose tinted glasses, dadi shown her real place, rajkumari being saved, khushi getting her respect, arnav standing for khushi, dadi being thrown out. Even if cv would have shown only one of these things, those episodes would have them really appreciated. But it's a wishful thinking.
Fantastic job Ridz.



Haha 😳

Thank you for that lovely comment, Shalma!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anu1017

Awesome update!!! Loved it!!!



Thank you :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: archnahardik123

Awesome update.

I read this story for the first time. I liked your perspective of the show.
I too felt that they didn't handled that part quit well. Killing baby was not necessary.
I liked that I this baby is fine.
Loved the way arnav handle his dadi.
Thanks for amazing part. Thanks for pm.



Thank you :) Killing the baby was one of the lowest points in IPK. I am glad to have rectified that.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Happytwinkle

Amazing update
Loved it
Thanks for the pm



Thank you :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ship13

Awesome Christmas treat !! 😆 Loved reading about the mean old Dadi getting kicked out. She was really nasty and it was great to see her go!! 😃



Haha. I'm glad you like your present!

Thanks :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Anita..

Nice way to get rid of that lady



LOL. Thanks :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anukap

Thanks for a lovely Christmas treat! Finally dadi got her just desserts. Oh why didn't the show have you as their advisor? Would have been so much more real and sensible than the rubbish they made us watch.

Wishing you and all your readers a merry Christmas!



LOL. I wish I was an advisor! 😆

Thank you :) Hope you had a great Christmas!

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