ARHI FF: A force-field of happiness: NOTE on Page 88 (Dec 24, 2014) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
hey ... i didnt know that American coconuts were similar to desi coconuts 😉 😆

so Sakshi Tanwar is the one payal and akash were talking about ... interesting ... so Sakshi is waiting and bidding her time to take on the mighty ASR ... omg she is miffed by the fact the ASR was not affected by her charms...this is not done ... it is always girls drooling over mighty ASR and here this girl is saying that ASR is not drooling over her 😆 ... so it is going to be fireworks in the Sakshi - ASR face off...

so Abhi is another Aman is it...well well well both ASR and Sakshi seemed to be well balanced...


thanx for the update...pls continue soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey all,
So this is not an update, but a foray into the heart of ASR, as he is now. In the abyss of his mind, Arnav is tortured day in day out by the thoughts of Khushi and Khushi alone. I found this beautiful VM that expresses this beautifully (Please note: I take NO credit at all for this VM, I did not make it, I had nothing to do with the making of it, all credit goes to the owner and creative mind that produced it). In his mind, Arnav is either elated by his memories of her, or else painfully cognizant of his lose. Nothing else registers. 😭

Sorry, since I'm still a newbie, I can't embed the video here, but the link is below, please watch it!

-Shy


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o2_3ctDmiU4


Edited by st03im - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So I read them all in one go. More than anything Aaravs pain is so hard to read. And yeah Chap 4 is my favourite too.
Its so sad to see Arnav neglecting his child over his obsession to find his wife. And Khushi! Shes never been a selfsih character so I cant see her leaving by choice. Its such a mystery.
Ar first I assumed Sakshi was Khushi with memory loss - I can be filmy too. I doubt it but Im interested to see more.
great story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dingle

So I read them all in one go. More than anything Aaravs pain is so hard to read. And yeah Chap 4 is my favourite too.

Its so sad to see Arnav neglecting his child over his obsession to find his wife. And Khushi! Shes never been a selfsih character so I cant see her leaving by choice. Its such a mystery.
Ar first I assumed Sakshi was Khushi with memory loss - I can be filmy too. I doubt it but Im interested to see more.
great story


yeah me too thought the same thing that sakshi was khushi with memory loss but when payal was talking to akash they were saying that khushi had written to this company ... so it was quite unlikely ... so this character is going to play quite a role i think 😉



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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
the video is awesome and it does aptly describes the scenario and the raw emotions flowing through arnav

hats off to the creator of this VM and thanx to u for giving the link to that 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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read in a go..!!
beautiful story.. hope u continue..

sry bsy with xam so i usually dnt comment..!!

i will comment properly once my xams r over..

thank you..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really good writing! Where is Khushi? She wouldn't just leave. I wonder what will happen now. I hope Arnav manages to find Khushi somehow.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh yes..!!
for more comment plz shift ur work to ipk forum..

ur story is really gud.. ppl will love it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: amus5


yeah me too thought the same thing that sakshi was khushi with memory loss but when payal was talking to akash they were saying that khushi had written to this company ... so it was quite unlikely ... so this character is going to play quite a role i think 😉





Hehe...did I make u wonder? No Saakshi is not Khushi. There's alot more mystery coming, but it will clear up! Yea, she's gonna play a bit of a role! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello everyone. Thanks to everyone for all your awesome comments. We're finally getting into the story, and I'm getting excited! 😃 Just a quick note, I've started PMing people regarding updates. If you want me to continue PMing you, please add me as a buddy. It'll make my life alot easier. Also, to clarify, Saakshi is not Khushi with memory loss. 😉 This next chapter tells us a little more about Saakshi. I'm starting to really love her, let me know what you all think. And please keep up the comments! It's making me write faster! 😊

Chapter 7: The world works in weird ways

Abhishek Kapur was Sakshi's right hand man. She met him in India many many years ago when he was working the floor of a prestigious clothing store. She was impressed with his diplomacy and customer service skills, and snapped him up. When she noticed his prowess with dealing with staff and clients, she sent him to college to get his MBA and made him her personal manager. Saakshi was always good at recognizing potential, and Abhi had been a stellar find.

He entered a cabin with a soft knock, to see her munching at her sandwich with an evil grin on her face. The only time she had that grin on her face was when she thought of her failures. In the many years he had worked with her, there was only one incident he knew of that she considered a failure. Oh ASR, he thought. The day Saakshi enters your life will be a tempestuous one for sure. Abhi grinned. He knew Saakshi as well as she knew herself, at-least where business was concerned, and he knew she was still smarting over the loss of the bridal collection from two years ago. He cleared his throat and watched as she came out of her stupor. "Uh, I have a call you may want to take," he said. She looked at him with a question on her face. Unable to stop himself, he grinned. "Aakash Singh Raizada." The grin transformed into a full guffaw as her jaw dropped open in total surprise. "That's funny, I was just, I mean, I think, but...oh shut it Abhi. Transfer the call." He continued laughing and left the cabin. She glared at his back and shook her head. "I was just thinking about it. Odd."

"Aakash Raizada, what a pleasant surprise." Aakash grinned as her cool voice transmitted across the airways. "Saakshi, long time. I think you're holding a grudge against me." "Of-course not Aakash. The grudge is against your pig-headed brother, not you." Aakash smothered a laugh, but gave in when he heard her chuckling. He laughed with her, knowing she was perfectly serious. She still held a grudge. He wasn't sure if it was a good thing or a bad thing. "So how's the A-master been doing back in the motherland," she joked with him. Aakash smiled. A-master. The clever name she gave him from their college days. Only Payal knew that Saakshi and Aakash had known each other from his UCLA days. Arnav being the over achiever he was, had gone to Harvard, but Aakash, being the more laid-back and demure one, went to UCLA in sunny California. There he had met Saakshi, who was the same age as him and in the same classes as him. He always wondered why they didn't fall in love, all the right ingredients were there was a smashing successful recipe. They were both young, attractive and from prestigious business families. But somehow, they just didn't. He wasn't even sure if they had been friends back then. Sure, they spent every waking moment together studying for exams and completing assignments when they were on campus. But the minute she stepped foot off campus, she was a different person, aloof and to herself. She didn't hang out with the other students, she didn't join the silly social clubs, she didn't engage in regular college behaviour. Aakash couldn't get through to her. So he let her be. At the end of the five year program, when they both graduated, they returned to their respective lives without a look back at each other. It was only years later when Aakash came back to the States with his wife, that they reconnected, but again, for business purposes. Aakash was trying to expand AR industries states-side and she was the biggest competition in their way. Thus them meeting was inevitable.

Meeting her again was a shock for Aakash. Here was the woman he once hoped would be interested in him, now the most successful business woman in the country. More shocking, was the warmth with which she received him. Considering that they had never been in touch since they graduated, he was surprised. But it wasn't really surprising if one really knew Saakshi. She had very few friends, didn't feel the need to make them, and had even less time to maintain the obligations that came with friendship. She was an in-the-moment kind of person. If you were in front of her, she gave you all the attention in the world, and when you were not, she gave that attention to someone else. She seemed, to most, to be cold, calculating and opportunistic. But Aakash learnt the second time around that she was also incredibly loyal, fair and unbiased. His silly crush matured into genuine admiration and respect for the strong woman that she was. He also learned that Saakshi, like his brother, didn't feel the need to prove her worth to the world. Those that she loved knew it. Those who loved her knew that they could count on her. And it was with that assurance that he had picked up the phone that day.

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Thoughts? 😊 With love, Shy

Chapter 8 here


Edited by st03im - 11 years ago

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