ARHI FF: A force-field of happiness: NOTE on Page 88 (Dec 24, 2014) - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all wishing you a very Happy Birthday. I am so glad I came across this FF, I think you are weaving the story along beautifully at the right pace, with full justice to all characters. Like many others I am curious to know what happened to Khushi, but willing to wait till you are ready to reveal. Well for now even I am celebrating the return of Arnav just as Anjali is.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great chapter! Loved how they all banded together in the face of Dad, I wonder what else she has got planned for this family!
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Posted: 12 years ago
HAPPY BIRTHDAY😃😃😃..hope ur day is filled with laughter, fun and abundance of love.may all ur dreams and wishes come true and may you have many more to come.enjoy and take care.

this chapter was outstanding.i loved the way everyone was willing to stand up for kushi and arav and especially anjali but were restraining herself for the sake of respect.mind-blowing and emotional update. i was doing my happy dance when arnav literally threw dadi out politely and then well uh rudely lol lol...gosh that women gives me the jeebies lol..


i also have a feeling that she could be behind kush's disappearance"but lets see what you have in store for us, which i cant wait for by the way..

beautifully written and keep up the great work..i am a bit impatient because i want kushi to come in the story as soon as possible but i am willing to wait because the story you have here is totally beautiful...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the PM
I loved this update
Anjali and Nani finally stood up to Subhadra Devi, i hate her, just saying
I loved Arnav in this, he is so protective, i adore him
I cannot wait till khushi comes back or if they find her,
I think your are an awesome writer so please carry on, waiting for the next PM eagerly
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Posted: 12 years ago
res for chap 12 😉 will be back in a while to unres it 😆

unres 😃

here comes the old school of thought... it is always very hard to understand the standpoint and the viewpoints of these people ... i'm not against conservative style of thinking but when there is stagnation in it there comes the generation gap... such people are ideal only for idealistic situations and when it comes to breakdown of such idealistic and/or utopic scenarios then there is confusion and chaos with these people trying to grapple with the realities and vagaries of life and failing miserably because their rigid poise doesnot allow them to be flexible and change alongwith the tides of change...when there is stagnation such frictions are inevitable leading to the worsening of situations and disintegration of relationships...

i pity dadi who is caught in this quagmire of the rigidities of the old school of thought and also her personal prejudices and heartaches

thanx for the pm...pls continue soon 😃



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Posted: 12 years ago
superb one...
dadi is hell irritating...one thing i don't understand...if she was soo worried about her grand kids...why did she lrft them when their parents died...now when they all are rich again...living a good life she return to enjoy the life of Richie-rich...??
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Posted: 12 years ago
I have just finished reading all 12 chapters in one go and my head is just full of so many conflicting thoughts and I don't even know where or whom to start from. First of all I want to let you know that the whole concept and the story is extremely well conceived and presented. Although Khushi is not present physically but she is present in essence, in Arnav's musings and his ability to feel her everywhere , in Aarav's tender care towards her favourite flowers, in Payala's care to look after her husband's mental well being, in Anjali's tricks to bring ASR back to his former glory, in Akash's courage to stand up to his formidable bhai to air Khushi's designs to help her beloved husband, in NK's support and presence in Khushi's beloved son's life last but not least in Sakshi's promise given to a beautiful soul that long ago. Before I forget to mention is in the quest to find Khushi by two people so i see khushi everywhere in the story. lets see which one is successful in finding her and bringing her back and weather she wants to be found.

The story had really intrigued me to no end and at places I found it so emotional that I had tears in my eyes..to witness a son's longing for his mother and a husband's pain for not being able to find his better half as Khushi really his better half without her he is just a shell who is just surviving without feeling anything at all.

NK's presence takes away some of the pain and burden from the readers just like RM vaasies (people residing in Raizada house) and his support and love towards Aarav... to me he always has been a male version of Khushi in actions and reactions.

Sakshi..I might be wrong but I found her just like ASR in a female form who seems to have similar family issues, formidable business sense and same detached attitude towards world minus the people she care for who is living and breathing just her work but unlike ASR she has not encounter her 'khushi' yet.

Now Daadi and people living in Sheesh Mahal the less I say about them the better as I just could't stand her in the show, to me she is a very closed off person who runs her own fan club and believes only in her point of view to the exclusion of any rational reasoning. Is she at the bottam of the disappearance of Khushi from Arnav and Aarav's lives? because no other person has motive to get rid of her and she is the only one who hates her with a vengeance without any reason or provocation..she created the 'good reason' as Arnav put it to leave her son behind. Don't get me wrong.. these are not the question I am asking but are my musings as all the wheels in my brain has started to roll and the antina to start getting signal..right or wrong.. with Dadi's arrival.

Please continue soon.
Happy Belated Birthday.
Thank you for this wonderful story.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gifttag

I have just finished reading all 12 chapters in one go and my head is just full of so many conflicting thoughts and I don't even know where or whom to start from. First of all I want to let you know that the whole concept and the story is extremely well conceived and presented. Although Khushi is not present physically but she is present in essence, in Arnav's musings and his ability to feel her everywhere , in Aarav's tender care towards her favourite flowers, in Payala's care to look after her husband's mental well being, in Anjali's tricks to bring ASR back to his former glory, in Akash's courage to stand up to his formidable bhai to air Khushi's designs to help her beloved husband, in NK's support and presence in Khushi's beloved son's life last but not least in Sakshi's promise given to a beautiful soul that long ago. Before I forget to mention is in the quest to find Khushi by two people so i see khushi everywhere in the story. lets see which one is successful in finding her and bringing her back and weather she wants to be found.

The story had really intrigued me to no end and at places I found it so emotional that I had tears in my eyes..to witness a son's longing for his mother and a husband's pain for not being able to find his better half as Khushi really his better half without her he is just a shell who is just surviving without feeling anything at all.

NK's presence takes away some of the pain and burden from the readers just like RM vaasies (people residing in Raizada house) and his support and love towards Aarav... to me he always has been a male version of Khushi in actions and reactions.

Sakshi..I might be wrong but I found her just like ASR in a female form who seems to have similar family issues, formidable business sense and same detached attitude towards world minus the people she care for who is living and breathing just her work but unlike ASR she has not encounter her 'khushi' yet.

Now Daadi and people living in Sheesh Mahal the less I say about them the better as I just could't stand her in the show, to me she is a very closed off person who runs her own fan club and believes only in her point of view to the exclusion of any rational reasoning. Is she at the bottam of the disappearance of Khushi from Arnav and Aarav's lives? because no other person has motive to get rid of her and she is the only one who hates her with a vengeance without any reason or provocation..she created the 'good reason' as Arnav put it to leave her son behind. Don't get me wrong.. these are not the question I am asking but are my musings as all the wheels in my brain has started to roll and the antina to start getting signal..right or wrong.. with Dadi's arrival.

Please continue soon.
Happy Belated Birthday.
Thank you for this wonderful story.


heya Shell 😃 good to see u here ... dammit i just love ur comments dear...the way u put forth the emotions are just great... and yes u have rightly put forth the emotions that flow through the story very neatly...i wud definitely not call it ranting 😉 so hop-on lets enjoy this arshi-ride 😆


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: amus5



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Thank you Amu. I forgot to mention your name for recommending this awesome story to me I was so busy lately that I took time to come and read it but I did promised that definitely will and I never break a promise but I PMed the same to the writer as I believe that thanks should be given where its due.

You never seize to amaze me with you generosity with the praises, just be careful dear you don't want me to grow my head any bigger than it already is no jokes apart this is a lovely story and very well written.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gifttag



Thank you Amu. I forgot to mention your name for recommending this awesome story to me I was so busy lately that I took time to come and read it but I did promised that definitely will and I never break a promise but I PMed the same to the writer as I believe that thanks should be given where its due.

You never seize to amaze me with you generosity with the praises, just be careful dear you don't want me to grow my head any bigger than it already is no jokes apart this is a lovely story and very well written.



nah Shell u r a very much level-headed person and btw does a bigger head imply more such wonderful comments 😉 😆
anyways i'm just saying what i appreciate and no problem dear if u havent mentioned my name bcos in my mother tongue there is a saying that if u have felt pleasure over something then share it with the entire world and that is exactly what i did - i enjoy reading this FF and also know that u wud appreciate such a lovely story and so shared the same with u...i'm just glad that u too liked it


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