ARHI FF: A force-field of happiness: NOTE on Page 88 (Dec 24, 2014) - Page 17

Beautifully written. Discovered it yesterday ( it was in the recommended list ) & read all 12 chapters. Cannot wait for Khushi to come back and the way you will write about their reunion . I think Dadi or Shyam must have a hand in khushi's disappearance .

Originally posted by: MithilaTorr

Happy Birthday to you! May God bless you with everything you ever need and want!

Good narration but I can't stand Dadi :) (As if others could).

Thinking of it objectively she must have done a good job for us to hate her so much. Good to see Anjali stood up for Aarav. Hope he is not hurt in the process.

Originally posted by: amus5

chap 11 res

will come back in a while to comment 😃

unres 😃

omg shy - u made me an IF fairygodmother (What the...) 😕 how do u expect me to react to this statement 😲 geeesss i'm embarrassed (nobody has put me in this spot -ever)

about whether to bring khushi in earlier than planned -well in my opinion i wud prefer to go with the flow of the story - the writer knows best

coming to the update

why do i get the feeling all is not well with Saakshi and her parents especially her rapport with her father...why does Saakshi visit India every year during this time period ...

(assuming it is khushi)

why is she searching for Khushi ? when she has met her in a railway station in India...what is the big impact khushi has created on Saakshi that makes her reminiscence this day every year...it looks like even Saakshi's mother has no idea about this matter ...if khushi was a stranger then on what basis did she take a promise from Saakshi to go for a deal with ASR and if so why was Saakshi not aggressive about it (though she had an eye on the matters)

she doesnt even know khushi's name 😲

well Abhi realises the worth of Aman 👏

good to hear someone praising Aman - that guy deserves it

going on to the next update 😉 c ya

Originally posted by: gifttag

I have just finished reading all 12 chapters in one go and my head is just full of so many conflicting thoughts and I don't even know where or whom to start from. First of all I want to let you know that the whole concept and the story is extremely well conceived and presented. Although Khushi is not present physically but she is present in essence, in Arnav's musings and his ability to feel her everywhere , in Aarav's tender care towards her favourite flowers, in Payala's care to look after her husband's mental well being, in Anjali's tricks to bring ASR back to his former glory, in Akash's courage to stand up to his formidable bhai to air Khushi's designs to help her beloved husband, in NK's support and presence in Khushi's beloved son's life last but not least in Sakshi's promise given to a beautiful soul that long ago. Before I forget to mention is in the quest to find Khushi by two people so i see khushi everywhere in the story. lets see which one is successful in finding her and bringing her back and weather she wants to be found.

The story had really intrigued me to no end and at places I found it so emotional that I had tears in my eyes..to witness a son's longing for his mother and a husband's pain for not being able to find his better half as Khushi really his better half without her he is just a shell who is just surviving without feeling anything at all.

NK's presence takes away some of the pain and burden from the readers just like RM vaasies (people residing in Raizada house) and his support and love towards Aarav... to me he always has been a male version of Khushi in actions and reactions.

Sakshi..I might be wrong but I found her just like ASR in a female form who seems to have similar family issues, formidable business sense and same detached attitude towards world minus the people she care for who is living and breathing just her work but unlike ASR she has not encounter her 'khushi' yet.

Now Daadi and people living in Sheesh Mahal the less I say about them the better as I just could't stand her in the show, to me she is a very closed off person who runs her own fan club and believes only in her point of view to the exclusion of any rational reasoning. Is she at the bottam of the disappearance of Khushi from Arnav and Aarav's lives? because no other person has motive to get rid of her and she is the only one who hates her with a vengeance without any reason or provocation..she created the 'good reason' as Arnav put it to leave her son behind. Don't get me wrong.. these are not the question I am asking but are my musings as all the wheels in my brain has started to roll and the antina to start getting signal..right or wrong.. with Dadi's arrival.

Please continue soon.
Happy Belated Birthday.
Thank you for this wonderful story.

Originally posted by: Nandz

Finall read all the chapters!!
First of all i would like to thanks shruti for mentioning about your FF in her post!
Secondly thanks to you for the pm. When i read your note at the begining of the story about khushi being absent and missing. Nevertheless i began reading it!! N my god i was totally blown over!!

I couldnt help but marvel how well you have developed each and every character! How you have fully explored their potential! We always knew that there was more to the side characters that was shown to us but u actually brought their different facets to the fore!!
I specially like NK! How he silently took over the role of a parent to aarav, elder bro to aakash, younger one to anjali! He played his role of khushi's best friend to the perfection!! However its sad to see he occupies secondary position to the people he love the most, like earlier it was khushi or now aarav!!

I loved this strong and shrewd anjali, and responsible and enterprising aakash!!
Oh how well these two know their bro! To bring him back to normalcy they appealed to his irrational egoistic proud side rather than his practical side! They used his anger to bring him back! That was truly good!!
N my my our very own female ASR!! Both come from dysfunctional families, both are shrewd businessman, both never rest before they achieved their goal and both are highly vindictive.U have developed a very strong character in Saakshi tanwar! Though wrong name selection if i associate her qualities with her namesake!!
One to give takkar to our ASR!!
So she knows something about khushi? Or has been associated with her in some way? From the very first time when Abhi mentions' no news about her' i had the inkling he was talking about khushi!! Lets see how correct is that going to be!!
With saakshi as male ASR and NK as male Khushi, their jodi would pe perfect!! Wat say??

Now m actually wondering what games was aakash talking about after he had a conversation with saakshi? What exactly did he mean!!!

N kudos to you man! First ten chapter of the story without any arnav or khushi scene n never even once did i feel like stop reading or felt something missing! I was totally hooked!!
You are a wonderful writer! Your writing style, your language, your way of narrating a story is simply too good!! Just love it!!!

N aye haye why did this dadi have to come!! I got so irritated reading it!!

Now coming to questions. The most obvious one why did khushi leave? Did shyam n dadi have any role in her disappearence? N what role is saakshi gonna play?
M curious to get all the answers!!!
Love the story!!!
Please update soon!!

Please ignore the typos. M posting through my phone!

Originally posted by: st03im

Thanks so much! And thanks for all the thoughts as well. I love reading people's observations, sometimes I find that people see things that even I didn't realize! Yea, NK is one of my favourites too, and yea he is alot like Khushi!

In terms of your questions, I'll try my best to answer. In terms of Aakash's reference to 'the games', there was no deep meaning, he just meant the games that him, anjali, payal and NK have been 'playing' in 'managing' ASR. And the latest one being this new deal.

Why did Khushi leave? Will unfold as the chapters go on. Also who was involved or not involved. And Saakshi's role too will crystalize as we move on. The only thing I can say for sure about Saakshi is that she WILL come to Delhi and her and ASR will lock horns.

In terms of her name, her character has changed a bit from what I originally conceived her to be. At that time, the name Saakshi was apt. Now, she's a bit different, but even her layers will unfold as we go on, and maybe we'll get to see her as I originally thought of her to be.

NK and Saakshi!!! Haha! That's something, I'll be honest, I didn't consider at all! But let's see! You've put the bug in my mind. We'll see how it unfolds.

it's kinda cool, sometimes I think of the story going a certain way, and then when I start writing, it just takes a life of its own, and sometimes it ends up exactly as I thought, and sometimes not at all. I feel like Saakshi is kinda like that. She's got a life of her own, and how she behaves, and what she ends up thinking/doing, just organically flows. So let's see what's in store for her! 😊