Ray of sunshine - VIRMAN - SS - part 10 - Page 25

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this update today is a shocking surprise!! never expected u to give back to back updates!!!

I was looking forward for virat's emotions to play in seeing manvi's state.. U nailed it!! the way he broke down, let out his tears, blamed the fate and confessed that he wasnt shattered this much even at the news of her death were all heart wrenching!!! ''My beautiful darling wife who had been pampered all her life; by her parents, by me; My beautiful, darling wife who did not know the spelling of PAIN.''

wow!! the repeated 'my beautiful darling wife' tells alot!! it speaks of manvi's innocence, her purity, his love for her, his perspective on her as soft and darling... this alone is enough to tell the love he has for her and the pain he is undergoing in sensing her condition..

wen these actions told how much he's broken at her present state.. his shout at Vyshali, ''Let her know that there are these heartless, soulless scoundrels out there who can rob you off your dignity and respect. That they can cold-heartedly rip your mind and body apart. But, they cannot and will not be able to touch your soul, your truth.'' told what he's feeling about the fate.. this is not only his thoughts outpouring but the biggest truth of the happenings being told.. its so freaking true, right! though ur dignity, respect are robbed off, though your mind, body are ripped away,, none can touch your soul!! wow what a beautiful truth!! this is highly applicable to the victims of such tragedies and most soul pulling rape incidents.. there are people who wudnt look back at a girl who is destroyed,, but also people who engulf such victims no matter what becoz they aren't willingly destroyed,, they aren't loving their state which they are subjected to and moreover their soul, their truth can never be touched! virat is such a man who is worried for what pain she has gone thru so far, is worried at the terrible fate and is worried at her behaviour of rejecting him while he is still willing to engulf her in his arms & console & assure her for the protection but who is clueless how to...

very beautiful di!! you are so clever in expressing virat's emotions at the current situation!! what a BRILLIANT author u are!! how have you hidden such a beautiful fact of life in this update!! i mean i loved that dialogue of virat i've quoted above so so much!! what a brilliant truth it is!! its so attracting me to this story!! 'wow' u are awesome di!!!

didnt I once share with u my fear of being controlled by your characters like Ria and Nikki and felt relieved that Diya want effect me since this was an os??? now see once u made it an ss Diya has started to dominate me!!

what a character u have created??? kids!!! i get amazed by the way u make ria and nikki speak certain things and i always tell u that u get down to a kid's point of view of things to write so brilliantly.. here u not only proved me again of ur brilliance but also made me to float in #Addicted dreams!!

u are a brilliant person in handling a kid's dialogues and actions..

where do i start to tell about Diya??

she's a kid in not understanding the situation that is playing around her.. she's a smart kid in peeping inside the room.. she's a cute kid in readily accepting her dad's condition of not crying in front of her mom and in telling ''This is boring. I am going in.".. she's a sweetheart in wondering why isnt her mom not hugging her like always.. she's purely innocent in touvhing and feeling her mom to confirm "You are real!".. she's a sweetheart again in wondering what's wrong vt her mom's sound box.. she's brilliant in telling her mom how much she and her dad missed her.. she's a fairy god mother in heeling her mom vt an innocent touch.. she's an angel in complementing her mom as 'pretty' and giving her the most cherish-able kiss.. she's a darling in trying to fill her mom vt one year worth happenings of her own world.. she's a saviour in making the atmosphere life with manvi's laugh.. finally Diya is like her name a light in making virat clear as to how to reach his love.. kids bring solace in one's life! Ria and Nikki controlled me alot,, Diya in this chapter alone took me under control! she's amazing!!!

''But Diya, in her blissful ignorance, didn't even notice all her wounds and bruises, all her scars and burns. To her, she was her mother, as pretty as ever, as lovely as ever, as loving as ever.'' applauds and hats off for this sentence!!

I adored and am amazed at the way you made virat realise the fact that made manvi to turn away from him.. the way u used Diya here is very clever!! you do have an interesting way of explaining things to the elders from kids dont u?? in addicted the cookie story of Ria gave the path to virat's actions and here Diya's adorable actions cleared virat out of his trance.. u are very interesting di!! u carry alot of shades and styles in writing!! i wish to stay with all your work and adore u with all my might!! may time and fate help me in doing so..

once virat understood his previous action's effect on manvi, his quick changing of his mentality to see her not with the eyes of sympathy but with the eyes of love and acceptance was amazing!! i loved his quick action in complaining her that he can never fillup her role for her again and ordering her cheerfully to come back to their old lifestyle was such a clever move!! the passionate kiss and the hearty confession of how much he missed her was absolutely brilliant!!

i wud say manvi is shocked to witness the sudden change in her husband from sympathy to love alone,, but still her reaction is a suspense.. waiting to know more!!

i am looking forward for the next chapter very eagerly as atleast now i feel i can get some rich family time.. i want manvi's reaction on her present life,, Diya's sweetness,, virman moments and please no more sad story!! i cried alot in this story and will kill you if you made me to cry more!!

so meet u in next update

till then get my warm hugs, wet kisses and love and love alone

hats off for getting down to kido's point of view

get going my soul sissy!! ❤️

loved it tooo the core

please please continue soonnn