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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update! Awww khushi made a handkerchief for him. How sweet. And then arnabs first physical interaction with her! He is being very patient and letting her come to terms with her feelings. Khushi is so confused. He's closeness has completely rattled her!

Poor parnab! I feel so sorry for him. He knows that he cannot have khushi. Interested to know more about his wife
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Posted: 11 years ago
It's a fantastic update.ita a unique story full of reality of life.
What arnav's mother is doing is not at all wrong. She is doing her job to teach her what a girl suppose to do to, after all she is going to take care of her house, but yes we know that she is not her mother so there will be some difference. Even my mother also teach me how to cook and other stuff when I was young, I use be so angry on her that why I have to do all this work. My mother is a teacher and she knew that along with education a girl should know other things also after all she has to go to other house. And now I feel that she was right.
Khushi's mother in law is not that bad either she is letting her educate but at the same time she is teaching her other things in her own way.
Now what to say about arnav, Khushi is lucky to have him because in those days no other man could have think of Khushi like arnav is doing for her. He don't want to leave house because he wants Khushi to be safe and stay in good place once he leave his fathers house. It is for Khushi only otherwise he could have left the house the day when his father said those things.
You have done marvellous work in this story. Keeping the essence of that time in its place. Really it's great to read how their relation is growing with the time..
Thanks for the beautiful update and pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am still scared about the brother and where you are going with that.
BTW what happened to his wife?

Loved the direction of the Arnav Khushi story. Arnav thinks of her as way more than a cute little girl and finally she is beginning to grow up too.

It will be great if they move out soon. I am afraid the brother might get drunk and try something. #SHUDDER#
Edited by mem1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

It's a superb update... wow. That was so cute of Khushi to make a hanky for Arnav. That's "Innocent love". She really wanted a lot of appreciation form Arnab. And she made sure to let him know about it. Arnab thanked her nicely :-). The emotions they went through when he hugged and kissed her were awesomely written. Fantastic yaar... Khushi's little heart beating so fast... may be because of Acidity and Dhak Dhak :-)

It was a relief he does not want to leave Khushi when he moves out of his house. He wants to wait until he gets a job. That was very thoughtful.

I know you have written a long update. Your writing style is so nice, even the long chapters feel so small and want to read more and more. Hey, please update soon.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh my my. Are we in trouble. So when Arnav held her, I was like no don't or you'll hate yourself tomorrow. But if course, he is very mature and responsible. My biggest fear at one point was that he would move out of the house and leave Khushi in his dad's house, since he wouldn't have been able to give her a comfortable home. I'm glad he has reconsidered keeping her in mind.And she has FINALLY noticed him properly, or rather , noticed that she reacts to his presence. Poor Pranab though. Is he even aware that he's married?
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Posted: 11 years ago
so the rabba veh's have begun. What I'm loving the most is that both Arnab and Khushi have a life of their own. But, they both never forget the fact that they are married. Khushi being the wife does small things like making embroidery on hankercheif to please her husband. Whereas Arnab also realizes his responsibility as a husband. He is looking of a proper place where Khushi can stay with him. If it had been the old Arnab he would have moved of his father's house long back without thinking of the consequences and where he would land. But, that's not the case now, Khushi is like another parameter that he has added to his life which is guarding the decisions that he is making for his future.

I must add Khushi's in-laws are really good, she is allowed the previlege of getting education. But, I'm also apprehensive about the feelings Pranab is harboring for Khushi lest it may snatch away this privilege from from her. But, I hope with my heart that if anything of this sort happens Arnab supports his wife.

Eagerly waiting for the next update as always.
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Posted: 11 years ago
khushi ko choro mera heart beat increased .. 😃

a long cheek kiss ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
awww khushi's first dhak dhak
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update...

I found it sad to read that children were married at the time at such a young age, where they have not even begun to understand the meaning of marriage. But at the time it was common,nevertheless, it is beyond my comprehension.

I loved the Arshi moment,there is starting something wonderful.

And Pranab...poor guy.. starts harboring feelings for khushi...i hope i wont create any problems between the brother in future..

Eagerly waiting for the next update

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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic update Jenny as usual, brilliantly written and loved the Arnab-Khushi convo, never expected a rabba way this soon but it was too adorable and lovely. It was quite surprising to read that Pranab is already married and Arnab was married to Khushi's elder sister before. There Khushi innocent child brain was trying its best to figure out the reason of fasten heart beats and on the other side, Pranab was busy in dreaming. Wondering what Arnab must be thinking after his little display of affection. Superb chapter 👏👏👏

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