The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS - Page 88

Its was very unique n very well writend...
I thnk its the best writing style n topic...
Coz i personaly like age difrences b/w wife
N husband as u described dere love, chemistry
Attraction everythng is perfect.
Plzzz update soon

Wow You cover every facet of those times and the nuances of the situation Arnab, Khushi, Pranab, all of them are facing. I am floored. Thanks for the PM :)

loved it.. beautiful update update jenny

well well well seems there is more at hand here than meets the eye
seems arnav babu is feeling something for his wife
and the said wife is feeling more than she can comprehend
awww bless her she doesnt know why all the dhak dhak happening
and she is coming up with reasons for same
but wont reach the right reason as of yet right
hmm his khushi thats interesting how he is thinking of her
arnie hope you know what you are getting yourself involved with
and i dont mean your young bride
so pranab too is married but he hardly remembers it
and with khushi there something is happening that he dont know about
so she wanted to make him a handkerchief with embroidery
hmmm so she is getting more domestic huh
thats real cute
and must arnie just jump to conclusions there
but guess what else would he have thought naa
so it begins
the start of all that dhak dhak and what not
cheers for pm

Oh wonderful...

Ahh time to say hello to Dhak Dhak..

Finally the woman in Khushi is awakening, while Arnav remains as patient as ever, giving her all the time and space she needs.

Pranab is feeling the first string of love as well..

I love how you remain true to the time period, and touch on issues like the independence movement, the hot blooded young men who didn't agree with Gandhi jee's principals, the secret meetings, the looming danger, all of these add to the feeling of being transported to that era.

Great update as always :)

loved it...

khushi is too cute...

loved their first proximity...

wats with pranab now?? hope he doesnt do anythng stupid...

thanks for pm

Thankgod our kushi loves arnab it couldn't be any other way could it?
Loved the update
I hope she grows up faster
Thanks a ton for the pm:)

Finally Arnav is falling for Kushi and she too feels for him..poor Pranab

Must say heart warming and mind blowing update , first kiss , first sign of attraction , so glad that for the first time Arnav listens to his heart , good going Arnab babu , I know I know ur wife is so young and innocent but she also have a heart and female harmones , which needs ur attention , appreciation and love . Brilliant dear writter , whole update is written exceptionally well , spc slow transition of child Khushi to women . Finally love is in the air , I am hoping and requesting for the same kind of encounters bw Arnab and Khushi , am not worried about Pranav I think he will soon realize that Khushi is his Bhabhi and she is for Arnab only Arnab