The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS

First Previous

Page

101

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Nishi

@Ni_singh

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#901

beautiful...loved the update...

thanks for the pm

Quote

Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#902

This was beautiful Jenny! Not knowing why but she made a gift for him and waited till he came home. Absolutely love how his future includes Kushi when he is planning for after med school. He has accepted her and definitely Kuch Kuch Ho Raha hein. It is so sweet reading about this chilld's evolution into a teenager who is experiencing her first heart twinge, breathlessness from being so close with him. Her dhak dhak has started and she is confused. At least he knows that he has some effect on her. I hope she does talk about this odd feeling with his grandma and not shy away from him. I can't wait to read about the next update.

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#903

That was brillaint but Pranab having feelings and Khushi having feelings is so damn scary

Quote

Chamkili77

@Chamkili77

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#904

Jenny, thank you first for the PM.

This chapter was lovely...the entire setting was superb. Took you back. Khushi is slowly starting to mature and realise that she has feelings for Arnab...but please please dont make PRANAB also fall for Khushi...too messy..

Arnab kissed her on the cheek...loved it...waiting waiting for him to make a bigger move.

Quote

710617

Suspended

Posted: 11 years ago

#905

Delightful...is the only word for it..I so love this story... Maybe because I am part Bengali born in kolkata...I have seen enough Uttam kumar movies...I just love my barun as Bengali arnab...

Khushi...you embroider so well. This is beautiful, not even Ma embroiders so neatly", Arnab of her dream waxed eloquent on her embroidering prowess, causing her to feel gloriously light hearted and a foolish smile to play on her lips..

😊

Edited by msin - 11 years ago

Quote

mamidis

@mamidis

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#906

Nice update. Well mixed with freedom fight.

Quote

prati_incept

@prati_incept

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#907

B E A U T I F U L !!!

.. falling in love.. incredible feeling...

triangle? hope not

Quote

dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#908

loved the update so cute that she sewed the handkerchief for him and as always his mom must saw some thing wrong about it loved that he ia taking her when he leaves and his brother should know the relationship between him and khushi is is as a bil and sil so cute arnav and khushi little contact awesome update thanks for the pm

Quote

mbibi

@mbibi

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#909

Aww how cute of Khushi to put such effort into making the hankercheif for arnab! Her excitement is almost palpable when she finally presents it in front of arnab; and he is too slowly coming closer to her as Khushi is learning about how her body is reacting to him...

It's really sad though to read about pranab's marriage and arnabs marriage to Khuhsis sister because they are at such a young age when they don't have a clue as to what marriage is, what beig a husband and wife entail, nor are they privy to the emotional or physical bonds that come along with it, but they are nonetheless pushed into such alliances...and she barely even lived let alone had the opportunity to have a married life :(

I feel bad for Pranab too because he is feelin the same emotions emerge in him as Khushi as he is growing but he doesn't know how to deal with this; on top of that, he is "married" but he probably has not a clue of his wife!

Ohhh I noticed Khushi thinking "MY arnab" and arnab thinking "HIS Khushi" aww soo cute that they can lay claim to one another because of the bond that is slowly forming between them :)

Quote

akaps

@akaps

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#910

Both Pranab and Khushi are going through the transformation that this age brings. The phase between childhood and adulthood.

Pranab is finding ways to spend time with Khushi by offering to do things that they liked doing together sometime ago.

May be Khushi would have readily joined, clapped, jumped at the Pranab's idea for Kite flying on the terrace. But she decided to steal time to embroider 'A' on a handkerchief to gift it to Arnab. Some feelings/wants she understands.

But she is not able to decipher the feel due to the physical proximity. Some more time...