*~CaPabLe oF LovE~(AK)my new ff link pg55 - Page 15

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Posted: 19 years ago
hey!! WOW!! amazing ff!! i jus red all d parts 2day.. n.. dis ff is nothing less than briliant!! mind-blowing!! cant w8 4 d nxt parts!! plz plz plz continu soon!!
xxMWAHxx
xx Saz xx
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: fizzypop

whens the nxt part coming



hey yaar
WELCOME TO MY POST
the next will be here tonight

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Chotii

hey!! WOW!! amazing ff!! i jus red all d parts 2day.. n.. dis ff is nothing less than briliant!! mind-blowing!! cant w8 4 d nxt parts!! plz plz plz continu soon!!
xxMWAHxx
xx Saz xx



hey yaar
WELCOME TO MY POST
yes this story is not less tan brilliant
i love the work the writter had done

i will cont

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ana
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: fizzypop

ur works marvelos plz continue cant wait its actually from one of most attracting stories iv read this is another thing that i have only got attracted to 2 stories only all together and this is the 3rd one that i love reading



hey yaar
don't worry..............i understand u totally...............😳😳😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
CHAPTER 8

rishab came back from the evening flight..............and after dinner..............kripa tells both prerna and rishab about jimmy's arrival.............and archie.........cause of which they were so restless was out since the morning.............when kripa came home from angad house in afternoon...........she has already left..............in sitting, dilip, naina and angad were also present..............after thinking too much they all came to a point

"come here archie"..........she was just arrived........as she passed by the sitting room's main door..........rishab called her

in the presence of everyone..........she look at kripa full of poison........that she had told everyone about the morning

"jimmy say kahoo kal kissi bhi time mujh say millay..........i want both of u marry as soon as possible"...........rishab said it with a emotionless face............she, who looked forward 4 a big battle...........was just surprised on rishab words........coz before ne starting..........rishab has ended the story

"ok..........main usay kal tea time pay invite kar loon gi"..........she was not all all seemed to be sharmofied

"rishab............mujhay app ka yeh decision sahi nahin lag raha".........as she left prerna start crying

although archie was a bad girl...........but she was her mother............the think of going to have a son-in-law like jimmy...............make her cry on her daughter's future

"tumhari tarhan.........maine bhi apnay honay walay damad k liye bohut kuch plan kia tha.........likin jab hamari beti hi JIMMY jaisay larkay ko apna life-partner banana ka decision lay chuki hai tau hum kia kar saktay hain?..................hum sab nay usay JIMMY ki reality bata tau di hai.........likin abh agar woh khud hi iss ko na manay tau hum kia karain.................aj is ki himmat itni ho gai k woh JIMMY ko ghar lay aaye..........bhagwan na karay agar kripa ko kuch hota tau hum kia kartay".............on the tired tone of rishab..........she bowed her head down..........while angad was continously looking at her

"jo khud apni zindagi ko barbad karna chahay............ us ko koi kaisay rokay ..............she is mature.........court marriage kar k woh hamari reputation, hamari izzat ko tinka tinka bekhair sakti hai............abhi hi dekh lo...........kaisay kal ka prog itnay aram say suna gai.............tum nay dekha..........koi sharmindagi nahin thi us k chehray pay"............rishab had really noted her attitude.............prerna also get silent.......as she was not able to do anything like others.........we can show the way to one who can't be able to see through her/his eyes............not to him/her who can't be able to see through her mind

next day

archie was really happy.........kripa was really getting depresed on seeing prerna, rishab sad faces.......prerna and rishab were like that if someone is gonna steal there valuables...........on the other hand..........archie was not seem to be cared 4 ne one...........she was one of those people's who only live there life 4 themselves...........world go 2 hell.........they only care 4 there happiness............on dacing the lyrics of happiness............they r not able to understand that they had sign a wrong deal...............and make it there destiny..........

kripa wanna wake her up 4om her dream.........but like others she remain quiet

JIMMY just arrived............he was sitting in the visiting room along with rishab, prerna, dilip and naina...........rishab and dilip stopped angad to come as he was still angry on the previous day incident..........in this...........he would surely have a fight with JIMMY...........dilip and rishab also know that idiotic.......a bad guy........jimmy........so on this thinking............they had stopped him

guys
i know its a lil short
but i will write next part tomorrow day or night
as i m sleepy sleepy

next:what would jimmy say..............will he marry archie or.......?...........what will be the reaction of rishab and prerna?

2know that
keep reading

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ana
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: fizzypop

hey that was good
just a small question when r u gonna start the scenes in between AK ill wait 4 a answer and the next part anxiously



hey yaar
thanx 4 ur comments
yaar..............bus aik do parts k baad ak...............fully ak as k yeh archie unh donon ki bhi life badalnay ali hai

thats why......................kal promise likhoon gii
k

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ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
great part 😊
archie is so sad how can she not think of her parents
hope angad did go in the room to sort out that jimmy
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Posted: 19 years ago
ana a very damn well written part...me very damn fond of your stories..this story is going very intresting... 👏
please continue soon...me will be waiting eagerly for you to continue... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
awsome part 👏 👏 👏 plzzzzzzz write some scenes of a-k also 😳 😳 😳 i mean i wanna c their scenes now not that idiotic archie 😡 😡 😡 and thatstupid jimmy 😡 😡 😡 cont soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

great part 😊
archie is so bad how can she not think of her parents
hope angad did go in the room to sort out that jimmy
👏



thanx yaar
archie is emotionless
😡
keep reading

lol
ana

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