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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: coolgirl249

awsome part 👏 👏 👏 oh god!!!these 2 girls fight like cats 😆 😆 😆 they don't seem to be even frnds frm any side then i m surprised how can they both be sisters.
cont soon 😊 😊 😊



thanx dear
ya they r...........they were never be sis friends......................archie keeps herself reserve.................and spend most of the time out of the house with a bad gang of friends...............thats why she is like that
me will cont dear

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: hawoo

omg!!! ana do cont soon!!! 😃



thanx dear
me will cont

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Divjot_10

Hey,
OMG..... u've got an amazing ff here!! The name cought my sight and then the next thing i knew was that i was done reading ur ff and was disappointed to find i had finished it already. I wish there was more of it. It was great!! and i love the way u write!! It's great. I really enjoyed reading ur story. And I loved the fightthe two girls just hada dn my goodness the dialoges were amazing. Kripa was like slapping archie without even touching her. 😆 😆 It was excellent........... superb........... mindblwing..... etc. 👏 I can't wait to read more of ur story!! Good Luck and BYe!!
Divjot 😃



hey
welcome to my post...................hope u will like it further
i also like the story.............its just amazing
u can never predict what would be the next
kripa never be like this................but she can't bear if her mother and father are in tension...............and if they r............she would not leave the person vy whom they r in
she is a sweet girl na

thanx 4 ur lovely comments

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy_princess

hey i just read the whole thig its just awesome....



hey
WELCOME TO MY POST
thanx dear 4 comments
hope u will enjoy afterwards

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: sun_423

ana dear please jaldi continue karo...me waiting for the next part eagerly.. 😃



hey di
i m continuing jii
don't u worry

luv u
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_SK



hey
welcome to my post...................hope u will like it further
i also like the story.............its just amazing
u can never predict what would be the next
kripa never be like this................but she can't bear if her mother and father are in tension...............and if they r............she would not leave the person vy whom they r in
she is a sweet girl na

thanx 4 ur lovely comments

lol
ana

Yup!! btw why is Archie like that!! Kripa sure is sweet😃 especially with nags😉........ no problem....... i think i will like it ahead. only if u continue soon!!😛 Good Luck and bye!!

divjot😃

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Divjot_10

Yup!! btw why is Archie like that!! Kripa sure is sweet😃 especially with nags😉........ no problem....... i think i will like it ahead. only if u continue soon!!😛 Good Luck and bye!!

divjot😃



coz she thinks that her parents love and preference her more than her
thats why she is like that
but in reality her parents love both of them equally

i will cont tomorrow and it will be a sunday treat

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Posted: 19 years ago
CHAPTER 7

Kripa's steps move towards a familiar door………………………….and by luck………….the servant tells her that dilip and naina went out 4 a business lunch with some of there associates and angad is at home alone

She knockes at the door

"yes come in"…………..she heard a low voice and went in…………………he was lying on the bed wearing blue jeans and black t-shirt…………..having pencil in his mouth and was drawing lines on the white sheet of paper

without turning

"Ragghu jii………….15 min pehlay app say chai ki farmish kar k gustakhi k thi………aap abh aa rahay hain…………..abh bhi na latay tgau main kaun sa aap ki bisti kar deta"……………..he was considering her his cook

having no response he turned back and on seeing kripa, get a smile on his face

"hey krips……………….aj uni nahin gayee?"………….on wearing the black shirt his eyes struck to the clock on which the time was 10:30

kripa didn't utter a word……………..he was also observing her different and strange way………….her back was to the door…………….she locked the door……….his hands stop while closing the buttons of the shirt……………..he was not able to understand her this moment………………she came close to him and sit beside him………….those grey eyes were constantly observing her……………she was totally looking different to him

"krips…………….kia howa…………..tum theek ho na?"………….he wrapped the sheet and put that and the pencil on the other side

"angad singhania…………..agar main yeh kahoon k iss band kamray main………hamaray siwa or koi nahin……………tum jo chaoo meray saath karoo tau………….."…………she was saying it dreamly…………..first, he was not able to understand the meaning of her words…………….but after that…………when he understand that……….he felt a 100 volt shock………….he was looking at her unbelievingly

"angad singhania………………..i m under u…………..even ur mom and dad r not at home…………main bhi kuch nahin kahoon gii……………I know…….i know I m beautiful…………..likin beautiful honay say kia matlab…………the real thing is my existence……………. Bolo…….tumhain kabool hai?"………she didn't have any emotion on her face…………

on this disgusting offer………………he quickly move his right hand………….the finger prints were visible on her right cheek……….

He was looking at her with full of anger……………..he was not at all ashamed of his action……………her eyes were still firstly………….and then tears came in her eyes

The biggest thing which was surprising him was her smile…………….she never looked more beautiful while smiling before as she was just looking with teary eyes

Angad was completely in the shocked position…………..her head was now on his shoulder………….she held his collar and now was crying fully…………angad was constantly looking at her………………he don't wanna see her crying but right now, he didn't utter a word…………..his shirt's shoulder was now fully sock with tears…………….he neither stop her from crying nor separate her from him……….he knew, she was disturbed, but her action didn't let him understand nething

"nags………….thanx 4 ur slap………….tum nay mujhay mara tau mujhay zara bura na laga………..balkay accha laga………………..ur slap has increased my proud………..archie was saying that…………………I m sorry k maine tumhara imtehan lia……………….agar tum waisay sabit hotay jaisa jimmy hai tau main mar jati"……..on keeping her head on his shoulder she was telling her the story of some time before…………..

both families never hide nething from each other……………angad was really sorry on listening the truth…………………he moved his fingers from her hair and let her cry………after some time………………she separates from him and wiped her tears…………..he stand up and unlock the door…………he came back with a bottle of water and a glass…………..he put the water in the glass and give that to her………she hold it silently

"i…………..i m soorrry"……………..she kept her eyes down……….on his silence she looked upward

"never do it again"……….he looked at her teary eyes………..

"tum abh khamoosh maat rahoo……………uncle aunty ko aj ka sab bata doo…………jimmy ka aisay ana tumharay liye bhi dangerous hai…..who tumhain bhi kuch kar sakta tha…………….archie nay tau acchay burray ka sochna hi choor dia hai…………tum aj university nahin gain?"……….he was really worried about her

"gai thi……………likin do gangs ki lariee say strike ho gai tau wapis aa gai……..tum office nahin gaye?"

"nahin…………….aik project pay kaam kar raha tha…………….lunch k baad jana hai………..tum nay breakfast kia tha?………………maine bhi nahin kia………..chaloo mill k kartay hain"…………..he was showing himself a careless person…………but from inside………..he was really worried and it was not hidden from kripa

"nags!…..tumhain bura laga?"…………she was curling her fingers………….he nods in no

"jab tum nay mujhay angad singhania kaha tha……………..mujhay tab hi kuch garbar lagi thi……………….apnay proud ko barhanay k liye tum mera imtehan leynay chali aaye……………..what if devil overpower me……………?"

"phir loog kehtay k thi aik kripa khanna ………………k jiss nay apnay proud ki death pay suicide kar lia"

"pagli"…………….she said it with a smil and hit her forehead lightly

hope u guys like it

luv u all

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Posted: 19 years ago
mind-blowing
really really good
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajeev fan

mind-blowing
really really good
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thanx dear
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