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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: blah_blah

awesome part!!! 👏 👏



thanx yaar

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: fizzypop

WOW THNXS FOR THE ANSWER AND NOW IM WAITING FOR THE AK SCENES VEY IMPATIENTLY



no need 4 thanx yaar
i m always there to ans

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ana
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: sun_423

ana a very damn well written part...me very damn fond of your stories..this story is going very intresting... 👏
please continue soon...me will be waiting eagerly for you to continue... 😃



hey suri di
no thanx
i will cont soon dii

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Posted: 19 years ago
CHAPTER 9

"beta.........hum nay apni beti k liye kafi kuch plan kia tha............likin hamari beti ki choice tu ho...........iss se pehlay k hamari society main hum or badnaam hoon............main tum donon ki shadi kar deyna chahta hoon"............after being silent 4 some moments.........rishab has finally started

"shadi bhi kar lain gain.........kyoun na pehlay hum kuch business ki baatain kar lain"........JIMMY was really happy

"kis business ki baat kar rahay hoo?"........dilip said it

"agar app apni 50% ki property meray nam kar dain tau main aj kia abhi app ki beti say shadi karnay ko tayar hoon"..........on this...........arche looked at him shockly..............what was he saying?....rishab was talking of her marriage..........then why he was talking of property?..........yesterday........he talked to her about money and property but archie had not take that seriously

"50% of property...........yeh kia main tau archie kom one penny bhi deynay ko tayar nahin.......kyoun k shayad app nay news paper nahin parha.........maine archie ko AAK(its mean that one has broken all his/her relations with other and now he/she is not going to have any part in property) karnay ka advertisement day diya hai".....rishab know jimmy very well as he is the one from the people who loves money and only worship that...........at that time,.......he also said it after some thinking so that jimmy came to his realitry and archie can see his real face

and as he thought..........the same thing happen

jimmy stand up quickly

"u can't do that"

"i have already done that beta.........abh tum kaho.......barat kab laa rahay hoo"........rishab was seeing calm

"u have't identify JIMMY really well mr.rishab khanna.........and as far as marriage is concern........shadi kia hai?.............jismoon ka bandhan...........tau main app ko bata doon k app ki beti k saath mera yeh rishta pehlay hi jur chuka hai......unh haseen lamhoon ki bohut hi "khoobsurat" pic meray pass hain...........property tau app ko meray naam karni hi hogi...............warna woh pics..........app ki or app ki beti ki izzat ko char channd laga dain gii......jo k mujhay nahin lagta k app ko manzoor hoo ga........saaf baat hai.........aik accha business man apni izzat ko iss tarhan nilam hotay nahin dekh paiye ga........waisay kitni funny baat hai..........baap ka attitude kia kehnay..........or beti..........meri shamoon ko haseen bana rahi hai"............he was giggling.........on this.........everyone was steeling there eying 4om other

"main tau yahan business ki baat karnay aaya tha....sorry archie..........shadi word meri dictionary main nahin............balkay aik astrologer tau mujhay yeh bhi kaha k meary hatooon main shadi ki line hi nahin..........kissi nay sahi kaha ahi............jab shadi k bina hi sab kaam ho rahay hoon tau shadi jaisi musibat ko galkay laganay ki zaroorat kia hai"......he was laughing...........archie was seem to be awake out of a deep sleep..........she was looking at him unbelieveably...........she was now realising what she had lost.........her name, her ego, her proud all were dead........and all coz of her own mistake..........than why she was crying

"kia app ki khamoshi ko main haan samjhoon?"......

"get out...........".....reishab was stunned.......dilip eyes were seemed full of blood

"kep ur voice low uncle...........app ki izzat abh meray hathoon main hai".....he was so calm

"hamari izzat say khel k tum aram say bethay hoo.......abh izzat or zilat hum tumhain batain gain........lakshaman........vijay ko lay k under ao........ghar main kuch gand hai..."

he called his watchman through intercom

"i will not leave u guys".......he was warning them

"pehlay khud ko tau bacha loo.........phir hamaray baray main sochna".......rishab was not able to say nething........same with prerna.........dsilp was facing him

on seeing the body builder lakshman and vijay ......he stand up

"i will not spare u all"........he left the house in anger

there was a complete silence in the room......dilip take out his mobile phone and called his niece who was a DSP

"suraj...........aik larka hai jamil.......jimmy k naam say jana jata hai..... haan wohi fraud...us nay dhookay say archie ki kuch pics li hain or unh ko galat rang diya hai..........isay arrest kar loo..........saboot tumhain us k ghar say mil jain gain..........us k flat pay rade kar doo.......bus woh bahir na nikal payee"......archie was listeing it carefully...........dilip was always her's family wellwisher............but she came to know it now...........prerna was right.........she can't know the difference or good and bad..........suraj assures him that he will do it

"thanx alot dilip"........rishab was saying this with teary eyes

"don't be so formal.....i m ur friend........or dooston main aisi baat nahin kia kartay"........dilip pressed rishab hands

prerna started crying..........naina was calming her.....

archie was thinking to die with teary eyes

KUCH LARKIYAN ANJAAM NAZAR HOTAY HOWAY BHI
JAB GHAR SAY NIKALTI HAIN TAU SOCHA NAHIN KARTIN

archie was one of those girls

ok guys
i haved fulfill my promise

luv ya

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ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
ana dear a nice part....it was really good part.. atlast us jimmy ki sachchayi bahar aagayi..aur us archie ko bhi akal aagayi.....chalo yeh tho achcha hua.... 👏
ab us archie ka dimaak thikane aayega...... 😊 dilip is such a good true friend.......very nice.... 😃 ab jaldi se us jimmy ka kuch intazaam karo...warna main usse nahi chodoongi.... 😡
lekin yeh kya dear no angad , kripa in this part... 😭
i hope kripa ko jaldi se ehsaas ho jaye ki she loves angad aur angad apne pyaar ka izhaar jaldi se kar de... 😉
dear tum please us archie ko angad , kripa se durr rakho...agar us archie ne ghalthi se bhi yeh ghalthi ki , ki woh angad aur kripa ke beech aagayi tho me will kick archie sach mein..... 🤢
ab next part jaldi se post karna..main intezaar kar rahi hoon.... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
gud morning archie!! 😡see wht u have done stupid gurl
pls cont soon
where's a-k?????? 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey gr8 👏 👏 👏 so finally archie came back to reality but where r a-k scenes??plzzzzzzzzzz post some a-k scenes also.cont soon 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey yaar!! amazing last 2 parts!
n yes!! finaly stupid archie got wot she dservd n i h9 dat jimmy guy!! 😡 😡 😡 i hope angad kix his butt big time if he duz nyfin silly wid kripa or if hes jus 2 annoyin 😆
luvin ur ff!!
xxMWAHxx
xx Saz xx
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: sun_423

ana dear a nice part....it was really good part.. atlast us jimmy ki sachchayi bahar aagayi..aur us archie ko bhi akal aagayi.....chalo yeh tho achcha hua.... 👏
ab us archie ka dimaak thikane aayega...... 😊 dilip is such a good true friend.......very nice.... 😃 ab jaldi se us jimmy ka kuch intazaam karo...warna main usse nahi chodoongi.... 😡
lekin yeh kya dear no angad , kripa in this part... 😭
i hope kripa ko jaldi se ehsaas ho jaye ki she loves angad aur angad apne pyaar ka izhaar jaldi se kar de... 😉
dear tum please us archie ko angad , kripa se durr rakho...agar us archie ne ghalthi se bhi yeh ghalthi ki , ki woh angad aur kripa ke beech aagayi tho me will kick archie sach mein..... 🤢
ab next part jaldi se post karna..main intezaar kar rahi hoon.... 😊 a😃



haila suri dii
so sweet of u
kia jhakas comment thay
jimmy ko tau abh police dekhay gii
😉
hum awain angad ka naam dalain us pay

dilip is a nice friend.................ak is liye nahin thay kyoun k maine donon ko outdoor visit pay bhej diya tha😆

actually sab ghar walay donon ko iss baat say door rakhna chahatay tghay
tau main unh ki marzi k khilaf kaisay jatai
k

luv ya

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ana
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: jyotsna13

gud morning archie!! 😡see wht u have done stupid gurl
pls cont soon
where's a-k?????? 😃



hey yaar
thanx 4 ur marvelous comments
a-k.............woh sab inh batoon say ak ko door rakhna chahatay thay
thats why they were not here

lol
ana

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