Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...'#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 - Page 32

Originally posted by: riyasarkar007

my replies @red

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

first of all congrates to become dazzler.

we want party.

now come to update.

as usual it was awesome, blossom, rocking and shocking update dear.

mera to dil hi bahar aa gaya yaar.

kya update tha.

all are shattered because of riya lie.

love the pov of dustin cheallo about ariya.

omg riya also have a past

he knew about the building attraction between ariya.

glad to know he had decided to tell the truth to etf and specially arjun.

loved arjun pov. He was so much shocked.

his comparrison of between roshni and riya was mindblowing and heart touching.

now he back etf.

omg riya is in etf.

and you stopped.

precap looks scary.

continue soon.

and thanx for pm.

P.S.- you rock👏

Originally posted by: Live-life

AWWW!!!!!! We are sisters now!!!!!!!

That is amazing!!!!!!!!!!! I am honored to be your sister!

Thank you so much!!!!

I am glad to be an Arian and an Ariyan!!! get it, get it?!!!! hahaha 🤣

And yes we do get the most attributes!! Even though i am not a big bielever of zodiac signs but

it's good to stay connected!!!!!! 😆

"Diva of perfection? *Goes into a dead faint*"

Oh puh-leaseee!!! was it that dramatic? 😛 I only told what the truth is for me and a fact!!! Aur han mein tumhe makhan nahi laga rahi behena!!! 😉 NO, Seriously you are an amazing writer!!!!!!

Update soon!!!

UNTIL LATER SIS...

PEACE OUT!! ☯️

Originally posted by: Mishti_k5

I'm speechless

Yr sakshat pernam aapko

Omg Hatts off to u

Thanx 4 pm me

It is wonderful,amazing ,awesome and outstanding

Update soon

Originally posted by: srividhya68

i'm new to this story
i dont know how i missed such a wonderful story
read all the 6 parts in a go...but have to wait for 8-9 days to read what is going to happen next
eagerly waiting for next part


p.s: u r a awesome writer

Originally posted by: 1993.ssg

Extremly sorry from the late comment. Another fantastic update. Very well written. Commisioner Coelho's POV is beautifully describe. The change of Arjun from a weak and vulnerable person to supercop ACP Arjun is wonderfully describe. Love the part where Arjun remember Riya and Roshni togather. Beautiful update Waiting to know Riya's past. Thanks for the pm continue soon

Originally posted by: -Amri-

Arrey, meri pyaari Ri. Kitna accha comment diya tumne. Your title is well-deserved.😃

sukriya sukriya...apne reply diya 🤣

So you aren't so faint-hearted, huh? We will see. Prove it if you can survive the masaledaar updates coming up next😉

pakka na? pls do soon...not only me smone else also eagerly waiting for ur update😳 and jab last update bear kr liya next wala bhi kr loongi dnt worry

Update on 17th Sep, 10 P.M. IST:)

yesss...excited...pls do soon

Originally posted by: xaviara

hey girl !! Before I say anything about this brilliant FF, I want to give you a salute for being such an amazing and gifted writer !!! Writing mystery is a difficult task in itself and to write a mystery so flawlessly is simply astounding !! Pat your back girl, you are doing an amazing job !!!!

Now about your FF, after Riya died in the show, I desperately wanted someone to write an FF about how she doesn't die and the ETF members would find out after a while, but no one to my knowledge wrote such an FF, and I was seriously thinking to write one on my own, but thankfully I did not and I was recommended your FF by Riyrasarkar, for which I would always be thankful, because no one could have done a job better then you !! How I wish this FF could have been adapted by the creators of Arjun and we got to see this in the show !!! *sgh* Seriously girl, hats off to you !!! I have read all the chapters in one go today and although I loved every single chapter, the chapter where Ariya come face to face and then later the anguish showed by Shree and the rest of the members of ETF, made my eyes tear up, because I could feel all of their emotions and feel their betrayal !!! Kudos to you !! Please update soon and include me in your PM's.