Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...'#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 - Page 30

Originally posted by: -Amri-

Hail the children of Aries!😃 Very well put.

I am so glad to be an Arian. Maybe I am silly to believe in this zodiac sign business, but I always find that I have most of the attributes associated with it.😉 And I think you do too.

Now we are sisters😛

Diva of perfection? *Goes into a dead faint*

But thanks for such a lovely compliment.😛

Dustin, I think, is one of the underutilized characters on the show. They can really show him more. But I introduced his Po V for the pure purpose of justifying the cliffhanger😉

And what an appropriate song. Well-chosen. And I think the way Miley is now, the song is very much applicable to her😆

And yes, second chances are very important in life. It's too much to expect that all of us go unscathed without making mistakes. I hope that all of us are granted this elusive second chance:)

So glad that you liked the portrayal of Arjun's emotions in this chapter. The way I see it, Arjun constantly swings between these two personas- the cop and the man. Often, they also mix together, and sometimes, they come to conflict with one another. More of that in the future chapters. I hope to explore more of this conflict with respect to Riya😃

Thanks for the lovely comment, sis. And take care.

omg arjun's emotion was well potrayed

I'm speechless

i'm new to this story
i dont know how i missed such a wonderful story
read all the 6 parts in a go...but have to wait for 8-9 days to read what is going to happen next
eagerly waiting for next part


p.s: u r a awesome writer

Extremly sorry from the late comment. Another fantastic update. Very well written. Commisioner Coelho's POV is beautifully describe. The change of Arjun from a weak and vulnerable person to supercop ACP Arjun is wonderfully describe. Love the part where Arjun remember Riya and Roshni togather. Beautiful update Waiting to know Riya's past. Thanks for the pm continue soon

hey girl !! Before I say anything about this brilliant FF, I want to give you a salute for being such an amazing and gifted writer !!! Writing mystery is a difficult task in itself and to write a mystery so flawlessly is simply astounding !! Pat your back girl, you are doing an amazing job !!!!

Now about your FF, after Riya died in the show, I desperately wanted someone to write an FF about how she doesn't die and the ETF members would find out after a while, but no one to my knowledge wrote such an FF, and I was seriously thinking to write one on my own, but thankfully I did not and I was recommended your FF by Riyrasarkar, for which I would always be thankful, because no one could have done a job better then you !! How I wish this FF could have been adapted by the creators of Arjun and we got to see this in the show !!! *sgh* Seriously girl, hats off to you !!! I have read all the chapters in one go today and although I loved every single chapter, the chapter where Ariya come face to face and then later the anguish showed by Shree and the rest of the members of ETF, made my eyes tear up, because I could feel all of their emotions and feel their betrayal !!! Kudos to you !! Please update soon and include me in your PM's.

hey firstly so sorry for the late comment..!! was away for vacations...!!!

Wow its getting more intresting
wot a precap awsome
looking forward to know the reason behind riya pretending to be dead
lovely update

Unres my comment on pg-37.

me re-reading the story for the 3rd time since t update