Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...'#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 - Page 33

Originally posted by: devildiva21

hey firstly so sorry for the late comment..!! was away for vacations...!!!

just read last three parts together.. and am so glad i could read them back to back.. warna mera kya hota.. anxiety se mar jaati but last update mai bhi itni anxiety de di..!! aise cliffy pe chod diya😲

ab kya hoga mera?😭 din raat bas yai sochti rahungi mai...!!! hell i have even started thinking ki arjun ke reactions kya honge??😲

the chapters were so beautifully written...!!!👏⭐️ i have no words to describe them...!!

just love your way of writing...

i could totally visualize it happening in front of my eyes..a s if i was watching the real show..!!!

the way you wrote chapters from arjun riya shree and dustin cohelo's pov.. mindblowing..!!!

take a bow..!!!so beautiful description of emotions ... can understand what each person is going through...!!!

arjun was so shocked seeing riya alive...!!! his heart knew even before seeing her face that the girl is his riya...!!!!

and riya.. she didn't care for her life.. her identity her job nothing... her sole mission at that time ro protect arjun raute...!!!!

both are so much in love with each other..!!
and then shree's emotional burst..!!!

the guy was so shattered...!!1 never expected this reaction from him.. but when you know that your best friend betrayed you... this reaction was naturally expected..!!!

and sameer and chottu what should i say.. all are equally affected.. by her betrayal..!! 😭

poor guys are having such a tough time to catch on all this..!!! 😭

and then pov from dustin cohelo..!!! thinking about arjun and riya... and their pasts..!!

so riya also has some bad past...!!

he knew about the budding attraction between both..!! glad he has decided to tell the truth to etf and most importantly arjun...!!!!

arjun's pov.. gosh..!!! he was in such a daze... no idea of whats happening.. just moving in all mechanical way..!!!!

his comparison.. of roshni and riya... very heart touching...!!!

and his fb of that koodna bhi hai part..!! awesome...!!!

finally he is back to etf.. i was literally biting off my nails... as he was nearing rathore's cabin..!!!

and there is riya...!!! everyone has already met... and now its arjun's turn..!!! but aise cliffy point pe stop..!!! 😭 not fair..!!!

can't wait to see everyone's initial reaction on seeing her alive...!!!

precap is interesting...!!

continue soon..!!

eagerly waiting for the next part..!!!

P.S. you rocked...!! keep it up girl...

Originally posted by: ninii

Wow its getting more intresting
wot a precap awsome
looking forward to know the reason behind riya pretending to be dead
lovely update

Originally posted by: Aks13

Hmmm... I m so confused... that how am I going to describe this masterpiece...

First of all I never thought that somebody give that much importance to Dustin Coelho as it's the side character n rarely visible in the show but u did n for that I gv u a big salute.

His POV was mind blowing. He witnessed it all but couldn't to anything. Couldn't help his one of the best officers.

OMG he even knw that they both have have some sparks btwn them. Loved his observation skills or may I say experience.

What happened with Riya in the past???????

Finally he decided to spill the beans in front of Rathod n his team. It will be quite interesting to see that how they all take it.

Now what can I say about him as he is already a broken soul n whatever that is happening around him didn't help him either.

The segment where he reminded Riya n her dialogue iskay baad kudna bhi ha sar was a wow moment for me as I loved the way she that.

Hmm... interesting ... Now his mind flooded with the memories of both Riya n Rosh.

He is so determined to find the secret about Riya.

Atlast they cme face-to-face.

Eagerly waiting for the fire works!!!!!!

Thanks for pm dr.

Continue soon.

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

me re-reading the story for the 3rd time since t update

very anxious to know the reactions dear

how many more days fr the update??

Originally posted by: Aabish_02

Api plz update soon
i m waiting for ur pm

Originally posted by: Live-life

please behna jaldi update karo na!!!!

please 😃

i really am very curious to know what happens next!!!

please please!!!!

Apni sis ki bhi baat nehi manugi? *puppy face*

update soon!!!!!!😊

Originally posted by: beenish248

BRAVO !!!

Speechless .. 👏

i am hooked to thiss ff man ..

can u belive if i say the way u write no one cane write this kind of story accept madhu di though she hav left IF long ago i am her big fan , and offcourse now urs too ..😃

i have read many ff on ariya but ur story is uniqe dear , can't wait to read more plzzz update soon... Eagerly Waiting ..

and do pm me plzzz ... I am sending u buddy req ..,

Originally posted by: IshqDewaani

awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I m sooo glad u updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was waiting for it!!!!!!

it was awesome!!!!! wow... Arjun's turmoil was brilliantly written...

now I am eagerly waiting for the next part...update sooon!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: Shivi1997

Plz dnt torture us more
plz update soon
yaar we are waiting

Originally posted by: Live-life

Welcom back Sis!!!!!!!

I missed you sooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😆

Hey and do check your pm!!!!

Sent you a little welcome speech!!!!! 😉😆

Welcome back!!!!!

and update soon!!!!!

P.S- 17th sept...seems sooo faaarrr away!!!! but itni intezaar kiya hai to thoda aur hi sahi!!!! 😃

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