SWARON BACK TO SCHOOL DAYZ :FINAL RAMAYAN UPDATED!

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Final ramayan updated on page 5 .

Swaron back to school dayz : chapter two ' THE RAMAYAN PLAY

Heyloo peeps , m back wid the second part of this series after such a long tym , had actually thought of giving up this series but a sudden earge made me write this part . hope u all like this part .😳

Situation : Sharon had called swayam to her house for the cooking date , before they could start their cooking date she requested him to play some music on TV as she loved listening to music while doing any sort of household work . so he switched on the TV set n while changing some channels he suddenly saw a ramayan serial playing on one of the channels . they both looked at the TV n then looked at each other n shared a big burst of laugh ''.

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So as usual the class was making noise , boyz were throwing aeroplanes at each other , rey n swayam were talking about the last nite match while taani n kriya were busy discussing their CID episode , Sharon rinni n simmi were talking about the up coming annual function n neha aashi vishaka group were onto some other talks . when pritam pyare sir enters .

All : gud morning sir

Pritam pyare sir : hamne aapse kitni baar kaha hai ki hame suprabhaat bola karo , chalo phirse ek baar kaho

All : suuupraaabhaaat sir .

PP : shabash , baith jao aur meri baat dhyaan se suno , aap sab jaante hai ki bhaarat ka itihaas kitna mahan hai , ussi mahan itihaas ke ek uttam puran ko ham natakiya roop mein darshane waale hai , RAMAYAN ji haan baccho ham is saal ke varshik samaroh mein ramayan is adbhud katha ko prastut karne wale hai .

N their was silence in the class , all were busy staring at each other trying to understand wat did just go through their ears .

Vicky : aye nil kuch samjha kya , kya bol rahe hai .

Nil : tu mujhe puch raha hai mujhe , mai hindi mein sher hun sher .

Vicky : aacha sher hai toh bata sir ne kya bola .

Nil : aare jaise sher ke saamne hindi bolo usse kuch samajh nahi aata vaise mujhe bhi kuch samajh nahi aaya

Bharat : bhailog yeh toh sala angreeji se bhi zyada mushkil hai .

Amar : luko mai samjhata hoon .

Vicky : tu kya bolta hai vaise bhi samajh nahi aata , aur confuse kar dega , shaant reh .

Rey : so swayam tujhe interest hai inn sab mein .

Swayam : see first std se lekar 8th ramayan sirf kitabo mein padhte aaye hai , usse depict aur play karna I guess it would be interesting n fun .

Kriya : yaar yeh pritam pyare sir hamesha mere episode ke climax mein kyu tapak jaate hai , jaabhi mein taani ko asli khooni ke bare mein batane wali hoti hun taabhi inhe entry marni hoti hai , aura ate hi itni saari mysterious baatein karte hai ki CID waale bhi solve karte hue pagal ho jaye .

Taani : i noe kriya , sir ki baate toh ACP se bhi zyada complicated hoti hai .

Vicky : sir aapne jo bola usse rewind karke dusri samajhne wali language mein bolo naa

All : haan sir , plzz sir sab bouncer gaya , sir samjha nahi sir , sir varshik samaroh kya hota , sir bolona sir plzz sir .

N before he could speak AVP mam enters .

AVP : I SAY SILENC IN THE CLASS !!!!!!!!!!!

Pin drop silence ''''''

AVP : he means to say we r going to depict the ramayan play on our annual day function .

Neha : annual day pe ramayan how boring sounding , i wish we could do bollywood dancing .

Vish : I noe mann ..

Aashi : vaise iss play mein kaun interest types lega , Sharon aap yeh play types karoge .

Sharon : I would try to stay away from this kind of play , historic roles n all not my cup of tea .

PP : toh aab mai aapko iss natak ke patro se avgaat karata hun .

Rinni : yeh patro kya hota hai , maine toh patra suna tha meri mummy bhi banati hai , but patro '..

Simmi : aare dumbo he means to say charectors of the play .

PP : toh ram ka mukhya kirdar nibhayenge swayam shekhawat .

Swayam : mai sir , par sir ''.

PP : par var kuch nahi hamne sab tai kar liya hai .

Everyone gets relived n start laughing at swayam .

PP : chinta mat kijiye har kisika samay aayega . toh sita banengi sharanjeet rai prakash .

Sharon : sir its Sharon ! n mai sita , plzz sir mai yeh role nahi kar sakti . sir aap aap aashi ko lelo sir .

PP : hamne keh diya so keh diya , aashi ko bhi apna kirdar diya gaya hai , aur aab patro mein koi pher badal nahi hoga .

One by one he announces their charectors :

Ram - swayam

Sita ' Sharon

Rey ' lakshman

Vicky ' bharat

Nil ' shatrugan

Bharat ' hanuman

Amar ' ravan

Neha ' kaikai

Kriya ' kaushalya

Taani ' sumitra

Vishaka ' rishi muni (raavans trick attire)

Simmi ' jatau

Rinni - kumbha karan

Aashi - dashrat

Announcing all the names he moves out of the class .

Rinni : wat mai aur kumbhkaran , kis basis pe .

Simmi : tum class mein sooti rehti ho na uss basis par .

Amar : mai aul lavan mela tal toh bohot bhali hone wala hai .

Bharat : aur teri yeh bhasha samajte samajhte sabka sir bhaari hone wala hai .

Aashi : agar mai dashrat types hoon toh kya kriya taani aur neha meri patni types banengi aur swayam mere bete .

Vicky : yeh toh ulti chemistry padh gayi .

Nil : khamoshhh !!!!

Simmi : kyu ?

Nil : aare sir ne hi toh bola mai shatrugan hun .

Rey : aare voh ramayan wala shatrugan hai , shatrugan sinha nahi .

Sha : wat the hell mai aur sita '''.errr this is so not happening

Rinni : relax Sharon

Sha : kaise karu relax , pehle toh yeh sita ka role uppar se swayam ke saath acting karni hogi .

Swa : o hello mujhe bhi koi shock nahi hai , tumhare saath acting karne ki , voh aab sir ne roles decide kiye hai toh hum kya kar sakte hai .

Rey : Sharon aur swayam chill , tum dono ko sabse prime role mila hai , so positive side ko dekho ,apni aapsi tom n jerry fight ko side mein rakh kar concentrate on ram n sita .

Simmi : yes sharon I noe u can do it , tum Sharon rai prakash ho .

Taani : n bhai aapko bhi yeh dushmani chodke role mein apna best dena chahiye Krishna ji aapke saath hai .

Kriya : aur swayam aap isse universe ji ke signs ki tarha samjho jo aap dono ke beech ki inn fights ko khatam karna chate hai .

Sha : u kripa bhenji , aapne tips naa apne pass hi raho .

Kri : maine aapse baat ki , mai apne best frnd se baat kar rahi hun , har baat mein taang adana aapki aadat ho gayi hai na .

Taani : hey Krishna ji bhai aur Sharon ke beech kuch kam fights thi jo aapne kriya ko bhi Sharon ke saath bhidva diya .

Neha : babu you actually becoming my babu , how romantic it is .

Vicky : neha meri maaa !!!!

Bharat : mereko hanuman bana diya chodunga nahi mai uss pritam pyare sirko .

Vish : jis tarha se tum uchalte kudte rehte ho naa , hanuman tumhe perfect suit hota hai .

Aashi : sahi types bola .

Bha : aye tum dono samajhti kya ho apne aap ko han , mai tereko Bandar dikhta hun .

Swayam : guyz stop it yaar kaha ki baat kaha pe leke jaate ho , ramayan ke chakkar mein yaha mahabharat ka yudh kar rahe ho . sir ne sabko apne apne dialogues ki chit di hai naa toh practice karo agle break tak unhe rehearsal karke dikhana hai , so plzz aapne role mein ghusna chalu kardo . lets show them ki ham jitna aacha nachte hai utna hi aachi acting bhi karlete hai .

Sha : he is rite , hame thode tym ke liye play pe concentrate karna chahiye .

N hearing that everyone start gazing at Sharon .

Simmi : r u alrite , tum swayam ki side le rahi ho .

Rinni : aur shaanti prastav bhi rahk rahi ho .

N hearing that everyone starts gazing at rinni .

Swayam : SHANTI PRASTAV !!!

Rinni : aare tumne hi toh bola character mein ghusne ke liye sooo .

Kriya : guyz lets not waste more tym , start learning the dialogues .

They all get engrossed into the charectors , n dialogues as per the play . eventually the break bell rings n they all rush to the rehearsal hall as per schedule .

PP : aagaye tum sab , aap sabka samay pe anushasan kafi sudhar raha hai , mere sikhaye usulo par tum sab dheere dheere amal karna seekh rahe ho .

Rinni : inhone amar ka naam usske style mein kyu liya

Simmi : amar nahi amal means '''.. means'''''' iss baar mujhe bhi nahi pata .

Nil : peechlawala toh bouncer gaya tha par ye wala toh clean bowled hai . inhe simple hindi mein baat karna nahi aata .

Vicky : don't worry ham seekha denge

Swayam : guyz concentrate , dialogues pe focus karo .

PP : toh chalo ram aur sita se shurvat karte hai .

Sha : sir , why us , ham pehle kyu .

Swa : haan sir , ulta ham dono ke dialoges mein aur thoda tym lagega .

PP : jitna yaad hai utna karo , shur ho jao .

They both look at each other in helplessness n then start reading their dialogues .

Sha : pran nath hame pura vishvas tha ki aap shigrah hi hame yaha se mukt kar , aayodhya vapas le jayenge .

Swa : sacchi Sharon tumhe mujhe pe itna trust hai !

Sharon totally frustrated

Sha : pran nath aagar aapne anpe upchar seedhi tarha nahi bole toh mai tumhara vastraharan karungi samjhe !

Swa : wat vasrtaharan , voh toh mahabharat mein tha , aur tum mera vastraharan kyu karogi .

Sha : wat the hell tum apne dialogues thik se nahi bol sakte han , sabko focus karne bolke khud mere saamne aate hi defocus ho jate ho .

PP : yeh kya laga rakha donone , swayam tumhe beech beech mein apne dialogues daalne ki jarurat nahi hai .

Hearing that Sharon starts smiling looking at swayams face .

PP : aur Sharon ji aapko bhi zyada hoshiyari dikhane ki zarurat nahi hai , jitna bola gaya hai utna hi bolo . chalo dusra scene karte hai , hanuman aur sita aajao .

Bha : mera saath prasthan kare mate mai aapko uthaneko aaya hun .

Sha : wat the hell tumhe'''. tumhe mai mate nazar aati hun han .

PP : bharat uthaneko aaya hun yeh kaisi bhasha hai , apne upchar mein sudhrav lao . aap sab log bohot hi bura bol rahe hai , ek kam karo aura ache se pryas karo aur fir ham ek antim baar aapke natak ko dekhenge , samaroh ke ek din pehle ham aap se milenge .aab jayiye aura ache se apne bol yaad kijiye .

Saying that he leaves the rehearsal hall in frustration .

Rey : hogaya sabka , aab hame aur mehnat karni hogi coz we don't have much tym in hand next week annual function hai .

Simmi : ya guyz lets just forget our rifts n get onto the play .

Everyone disperses from the hall , while rey catches hold of swayam .

Rey : tujhe ho kya jata hai usske saamne .

Swa : kuch nahi yaar voh bass ( trying hard to hide his crush on her )

Rey : tujhe itna defocused n out of the way jaate hue kabhi nahi dekha .

Swa : bass aab aur nahi , tu dekh mai kaise iss play ki taayari karta hun , perfect ram banke dikhaunga apni sita ka .

Rey : kya ??

Swa : I mean ''.. kuch nahi jane de , chal practice karte hai .

End of part one ''''''''

Promo for next part : hilarious ramayan .🤣

Hope u guyz liked this part n would like to read more do leave ur precious comments n suggestions . thank you

Sanskruti 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres

superb yaar
wow
amazing OS
pehle toh amazing concept 🤣
swaron in ramayan socha bhi nahi hoga 😆😆😆

really well written kruti
amazing...
sharon was super cute
loved her

PM KAR DENA PAKKA SE... 😳😳😳
do write more
and do PM me

P.S. me first !!!
lets dance !!!
Edited by -spongy- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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🤣
pehle toh... concept SUPEB hai
Ramayan Play... 😆
i loved how u included all the characters
n gussa sharon is super cute 😆
cant wait to read more
so please jaldi update karna

BIG wala like from me 😃
Edited by u-me-aur-D3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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how i mean like how do u manage to be the first one alwayz , swaron u 🤗aaj toh pm bhi nahi kiya maine naa scrap kiya 😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanskruti_tanha


how i mean like how do u manage to be the first one alwayz , swaron u 🤗aaj toh pm bhi nahi kiya maine naa scrap kiya 😲


arey tune AT pain share kiya tha na
and by chance i was the first toh kar liya res...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dinaaly i found ur update
It was awsum
I luved ir alooot
Seriously mujhe hindi ka H bhi nahi ata bouncer kya clean bowled kya meri to wicket nikal gayi aur mujhe pata bhi nahi chala
After reading precap am sooo much excited for reading
Third part jaldi update kerna plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -spongy-

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">unres</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">superb yaar</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">wow</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">amazing OS</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">pehle toh amazing concept 🤣</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">swaron in ramayan socha bhi nahi hoga😆😆😆</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">really well written kruti</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">amazing...</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">sharon was super cute</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">loved her</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5"> PM KAR DENA PAKKA SE...😳😳😳</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">do write more</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">and do PM me</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">P.S. me first !!!</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">lets dance !!!</font>


Awww dear thanks.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sadafarsha

Dinaaly i found ur update

It was awsum
I luved ir alooot
Seriously mujhe hindi ka H bhi nahi ata bouncer kya clean bowled kya meri to wicket nikal gayi aur mujhe pata bhi nahi chala
After reading precap am sooo much excited for reading
Third part jaldi update kerna plzzz


Aapke liye kuch bhi hope u understand it 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sanskruti🤗
once again amazing work..😊
just one reaction fr dis..🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Haila PP mujhe kuch bolne layak hee nahi choda tumne...
main itna itna has rahi hun ki kuch aur nahi bol sakti🤣🤣🤣
Mindblowing concept👏👏
Dis is funniest os ever read by me..
baaki comment baad mein unres karungi abhi only rofl kar rahi hoon..
🤣🤣🤣

ufff ab likhti hoon properly...
i loved loved loved it yaar..
jab nil ne khamosh bola i bursted out louldy laughing🤣
n sharon ka 1 st dialogue as sita den swayam ka oh gosh brilliant..
out of dis world os..
wat comic timing superb👏👏
mera toh haas haas ke halat kharab ho gaya..
ur d best comic writer PP👏 n i mean it seriously tumhara comic sense amazing hai..
pls tu comedy he likha kar..
jaldi update n pm me😊
Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago

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