SWARON BACK TO SCHOOL DAYZ :FINAL RAMAYAN UPDATED! - Page 12

Originally posted by: Sanskruti_tanha

thank u soo much ammi di 😃

Originally posted by: _Deepika_

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Let me laugh 1st ...OMG wat was that...that was completely hilarious ...u totally rocked it 😆😆
Ohk...i will tell u the feedback in ur style..


Priya Sanskruti Ji😉,

Aap ke is katha ka path karke hum atyant prasann huye...atyadhik matra me hasya kala ka prayog hua he...samuchit charitra nirman aap ke katha ka rochak ansh he...madhur likhan shaili aur durlabh darshan shaili ne is karya ko akarshak banaya he ...aapke is prastuti ka agla prayaya shighra path karne ki mansa rakhte he...😳

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Abhar
Deepika

Originally posted by: Muskan_SwaRon

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that was amazing amazing amazing amazing... swayam i mean ram saying sita "your wish is my command" and "after u sita"🤣
and sita saying ravan "tum mujhe uthaoge shakal dekhi h mirror me"🤣
swayam saying shahrukh khan's dialogue of chak de india🤣
and kaikai and dashrath scene 🤣
and lakshman "abe main bhi chalunga"🤣
and raavan ki language "AAKLAMAN"🤣
KK "do do canteen khol rakhi h mere liye kuch nhi la sakte"🤣
aur hanuman...Hanuman ji ki jai ho🤣kya language boli h
"ye prannath kon h mujhe to swayam ne di thi🤣
swayamwar me to kamaal hi ho gya "ye swayamval h to swayam hi to val banega agar amalval hota to amar banta"🤣
and vishakha use kaise bhool sakte h saying taani "tumhare krishnaji ramayan me to nhi aayenge na"🤣
aur kriya abhi bhi universe ji kar rahi h🤣

and PP's sir dialogue was amazing "tumhe kaise bhool sakta hu mere SHAHRUKH KHAN"🤣


that was a very nice concept i must say👏 u have done a great job while reading this OS i was laughing like anything u have done a GREAT GREATER GREATEST job⭐️👍🏼

and plz koi nayi story jaldi se sochna😊

Originally posted by: Sanskruti_tanha

off cource dear thank u soo much 😳

Originally posted by: swathi_swaron

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kruti yeh ramayan hai

joh bhi hai mast hai

mujhe toh Dil Dosti Drama ki RAMAYAN mast lagi...

sabse mast toh mera ram jeee...sorry swayam

use toh drama mein bhi sharon ko comfortable feel karvana hai kya...

neha - aashi convo was hilarious.. i mean kaikeyi and dasrath

neha - mera babu will become raja ...😆 😆 😆

sharon ki kya bolu... everything was so perfect...

loved the vish - sharon convo, rinni - amar...

justified each and every character...

it was such an hilarious OS...

good job kruti...

ok...i forgot to tell u one thing...i am angry on u tooo

tere wajah se garam tea hath mein ghir gaya...

the dialogue when hanuman says to sita that yeh ram ne nahi swayam ne diya back stage peh...i suddenly cant control my laughter over there and apne upar chai gira diya...🤣 🤣

ab se jab bhi chai pethi hu...pehle swaron yaad aayega aur doosra tera yeh OS

do write more kruti doll

Originally posted by: Swaron.maniac

Part 1

Amazing very funny
Loved the invovment of all charecters
And the idea of having tani and aashi on it
U knw some typical hindi
But dint get any of.it
As i dnt knw it


Part 2
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I was literally lauging out loud
H u so good wiv comedy sans
Am so impressed
And damn ur commnd over ur lang(hindi) is so good
I totally loved how whole gang real selves were shown in the ramayn charecters
Swayam and amar scene was the besf...all shahrukh khan dialogue

It wud hve been more fun if i had at least a little idea about the whole ramayan story
I dint knw wots happening coz i dint knw the realstory

But i enjoyd reading it like anything
It was fab hats off to u sans
Loved it